Heaven and Earth Offer Sacrifices to Spirits

The author wrote a lot of typos and illogical sentences. It is recommended to change the bandit repair to bandit repair or robbery repair. There is also a problem with the author's cultivation system. Both the Entering Dao Realm and the Tongwei Realm are about cultivating Dao Marks. There seems to be no difference. I suggest that the Dao Marks in the Tongwei Realm be changed to Dao Yun. The nine Dao Marks are combined into one rhyme. Dao Rhyme can nourish the soul. Then the realm of monsters is divided into five levels: Huanxuan, fourth level: Tongwei, third level: Entering the Dao. The author did not say what the first and second levels are. There are also elixirs. Chapter 35 says that elixirs that are comparable to high-grade foundation-building spiritual treasures require high-grade foundation-building spiritual treasures as materials. Chapter 56 also says that top-grade pure yuan pills are equal to high-grade foundation-building spiritual treasures?

Um, I don't want to offend you, but you are so bad at replying, so just give me a few words The era of your work was wrong, it was written about ancient times, but the writing style and conversational tone are full of modern particles, which makes people not feel immersed in it, and the plot is also about ancient times. Era, the logic of writing is the same as last week, so you chose the wrong era. When writing totem articles, then write about development. At the beginning, write about clones, sects in other places, and weapon refiners. Then why did no one come to cut you down and use it as a spiritual material? As for the world of cultivation + ancient totem flow~ it's difficult to coexist, unless they are in different worlds, the world view you wrote crosses the boundary~

The road is long and long, I will search up and down, and encourage each other😁