Zhutian: Starting from the Demonic Reform of Swordsman

It doesn't feel very good, and many plots are rather abrupt, such as running a newspaper. Suddenly it appeared, and suddenly it made a lot of money, and its influence was huge. There is no foreshadowing, it is taken for granted. In short, there are constant little poisons.

Hey, it's so ordinary. Even the plot is not new. Whether it's the plot rhythm or the writing style, it's just that. Reading this book is a waste of time.

I can't understand why so many people want to write about Douluo, rubbish Douluo

I originally wanted to take a look, but I saw Douluo in the introduction! ! I felt sick instantly

My basic skills are so bad, I need to work harder.

An inexplicable emotional drama that made me scream.

Mu Taoist, Gu Long? (Character in Gu Long's martial arts novel "Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" series and its derivative works, the first famous elder of the Wudang sect, highly respected, senior, and widely friends, claiming to be "the best in Go, the second in poetry and wine, and the third in swordsmanship".

It is more in line with my personal taste. If you blindly pursue the original plot, in my opinion, following the plot is not as enjoyable as watching the version of the TV series you like. Especially Li Yapeng's version of Linghu Chong is simply a 25-year-old and a white-eyed wolf.

I don't know why, but I just can't stand these Douluo pictures. Please end this copy quickly.

The description of the fighting is too poor, there is no visual sense, the narrative is the same, there are no details, and the sense of immersion is too poor.

You can view it before you get married, and the system can take people with you after you get married. This setting cannot be accepted.

It's the system again, just give up and watch. Could it be that now that the author has left the system, he won't be able to write a book? It's too cliché.

What do you think the harm will be? It turns out that the beginning begins when the protagonist was a child. It would be nice to cover this kind of thing in the first chapter. Do you really think you are writing a diary? Write a bunch of journal stuff😅

T saw Tang San and didn't want to see it anymore

This is my first time writing a book seriously, thank you for your support. If there are any shortcomings, please criticize and correct me. If you have any suggestions, please leave a comment and I will seriously consider it. After a period of time, I feel that the writing process is also a process of self-learning, and I am very happy that I can continuously improve myself. Some people may like the content of this book, some may not like it, some may be satisfied and some may be disappointed, but I will do my best to tell you a story worth reading. I still want to thank you all for collecting and reading. I am very frightened that so many people are reading this book. I would also like to express my opinion here. Due to personal work reasons and special circumstances, updates may be interrupted for several weeks or even more than a month, but I will try my best to ensure continuous updates, let alone cut books. I wish you all a happy life, good fortune and good health. (Eat well, sleep well, live well.)

After 40, there is no need to write anymore, and there is no need to write to change the map, right?

Change the title of the book. When I see Mu Taoist, I will think of the Blue Blood Sword. The Deer and the Cauldron are too low-end. I turned around and ran after seeing the title many times. I didn't expect it to be from the background of Swordsman.

Too many things are mixed together, making it difficult to read.

Douluo is a bit strong, isn't it? Can Tang San's Xuantian function reach the level of a Grandmaster?

Although I haven't started watching it yet, but once I saw Douluo Dalu, oh well, even the floor tiles can be added, it's a parallel import, so I don't want to watch it, and the character of Douluo Dalu is not that good either.

I don't see any changes. It's all just fighting and killing, nothing new.

Personally, I think it looks good and suits my taste. People who read the original novel may think it's not possible, but the butterfly effect is reasonable, and it's a cheating butterfly.