My Super Power Is Forced to Share

How should I put it, the first 3 chapters feel a bit boring but not boring. There are too few characters, and the scene transitions from the sales office to the home is a bit abrupt. I feel that it is more reasonable for the heroine to have this ability from childhood to adulthood, which can quickly give readers a "stereotype." (Now in your case, the heroine has not even been able to create a stereotype. Letting her suffer from this ability since childhood is a way to quickly give the character an image.) The protagonist's speech habits are also a way to reveal his personality. For example, he likes to joke but is very quiet at heart; he is afraid of society and is cruel to hide his soft heart. However, there are short and long speeches, and the character image is not reflected. It's a bit stiff when eliciting abilities, but this should be a common problem among novices. Chapter 3 introduces the description of the character's appearance... It's a bit exaggerated. Overall... I read Chapter 4 again, but I don't quite understand the significance of such a long description of the heroine, as well as the interaction with the hero. Maybe I will look forward to the next one.

There are two chapters the day before they are released, and the update times are generally: 12 noon and 9 pm. It is expected to start at 10,000 words a day after it is published. The author is really confident! As long as the first order isn't too bleak, the author will want to write it well. In addition, the follow-up reading of the new book issue is below, it is really, really important! Nowadays, it is very easy to support a book. Dear brothers and sisters, if you are willing, I would like to thank you! (Holding fists)

Come on, come on 🙂

It's hard to imagine how to raise a cat like this