Return to 88, I Have the Final Say on My Mountain

It's quite interesting. The further you go to the back, the more unique mountain village scenery you can see. Come on, author!

I just got into the mood after reading it. Chapter 46 was disgusted by Yang Jin again... Forget it, my father-in-law, now I can't read this book properly, so I gave it up.

No matter what novel Momojiji writes, you will be reborn and write less family stories.

It is basically difficult for people who have fallen into bad habits to change them.

The daily warm rural life, pressing oil, collecting herbs, and catching crabs, seems quite interesting and fun.

1. There are basically no dialogues and little plot. They are all about what to do 1. The timeline is not clear. The elements of a story, time, characters and places, who are doing what, what happened, what the reasons are, and what the results are. If it is not written clearly, you are writing a novel, not a composition or a narrative. 3. In terms of common sense, the prices of some medicinal materials are wrong, and there is no follow-up after harvesting. There is no description of how much the harvest is, and the reader does not feel the harvest. 4. There are too few characters, and the whole story is about what they did. Period writing, you do not have a passionate and exciting line. In addition to the protagonist, a novel must have at least three supporting characters who are impressive. 5. Cruciality, sometimes here, sometimes there, the chapters are not connected enough, it can be said that the plot is not connected. The other two books I saw are also from Xuefeng Mountain. One is "1984: Starting from Refuse to Enter the City and Cutting in the Door". This one is about medicinal materials. The extraction and processing are well written, and the characters are well portrayed. One is "Return to 83: Don't Interrupt My Farming", which has everything, including fishing, picking mushrooms, bracken, gold panning, and conflicts based on human feelings. The daily writing is better and quite detailed. It follows a warm daily route, and the daily development is 50-50. You all write about Xuefeng Mountain. Logically speaking, there shouldn't be much difference in some things. I suggest you, the author, go take a look. I am also from Xuefeng Mountain. I hope the author can write better and better.

I advise the author to stop writing about village fights and quarrels with those gossiping women, which are disturbing.

One place, one custom. Most of a person's life only lives in one place, but reading allows us to understand the customs and features of other places, know the breadth of the world, and appreciate the depth of life. Come on author, it's very interesting and I will always support it!

I saw different local customs and I think it's pretty good. Good luck to the author. Looking forward to more detailed characterizations in the future.

The overall plot is still a flow. For me, there are no big poisonous points or logical problems. I have read more than 60 chapters so far. Let me give you some suggestions. I am afraid that I will forget, so I will say them first. 1. The plot is very good but needs to be streamlined. It is not the kind of repetitive description, but it is written in too detail. It will be much better if you squeeze the water a little. You don't need to write it in a diary or a composition. If you are reading a book, you can take a rough look. When listening to a novel, you can only listen to it completely. I don't hate it but I don't like it For example: The chapter about catching bamboo rats is too detailed. What is a bamboo rat and how to catch it. For example: Eat bamboo rats, how to kill them, how to deal with them, how to eat them, and how to deal with their fur I still felt this way when I read more than 60 chapters, but it was a little better, but still too detailed 2, because most of them were describing what they were doing, and there was very little dialogue with the characters, and it felt like a stand-alone game Feeling 3. There are too few character descriptions. The people around the protagonist basically have no characteristics that can make people remember. It would be much better to write more unique supporting characters 4. There is a little less excitement. With the insights of future generations, there are many ways to improve one's life. There are too few excitements about making money.

It feels very novel and unique. They are all novelties that have never been seen before.

The whole mountain is my hunting ground?

I saw many familiar scenes, such as pressing camellia oil, planting rapeseed, and flipping crabs, which were very unique. For the same thing, the details of how it is carried out in different places are indeed different. This is a regional difference. Come on, author, and look forward to more mountain village stories.

I've read more than half of it, and I'd like to share my feelings and some suggestions for the author. I understand that I don't blame the author for anything bad. Even after reading it for so long, I found that there are no specific figures for earning and spending money. This kind of daily writing is about how much money you need every time. Only with specific and intuitive figures can you have a little idea of ​​getting better. What do you sell every time, and then spend nothing, and you don't know how much money you have. It's very tiring to watch.

The new book is booming, come on😊

A supporting character ruined a book, unfortunately, farewell