Playing Cards Depends on the Background

The subject matter is quite attractive, and the content is not bad. However, the writing style is hard to tell, because there is a lack of detailed descriptions, and the settings are not fully explained. Many parts need to be supplemented by the brain. As a result, many parts are completely unclear, and the historical background story involved is not told. In fact, it can be explained in general, with a little explanation as appropriate. At present, it feels like reading a novel with a detailed outline. One chapter can even be divided into two or three chapters to add details. At present, I can only say that the future is promising.

Although it feels good but the writing is not good enough I feel that it is too rushed and the plot progresses too fast Then the tumor is too sudden It would be better to have some foreshadowing before revealing it.

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I like the world view, but the writing style is not my favorite.

It's very exciting and the ideas are good, but many things are not introduced, and when I look at the reasoning, I always feel that something is not quite right.

The setting is novel, the diction is good, and the rhythm is average, but the characteristics are not distinctive enough and there are no outstanding points. I want to add combat, reasoning, and comedy, but the writing power is not enough and it seems messy and dull. Let's talk about a little more reasoning. Reasoning pays attention to details and foreshadowing, and must have clear clues and echoes. The reasoning here obviously skips steps. The author did not consider the average person's problem-solving ideas when writing, and the conclusion of the reasoning part is more abrupt. It can also be attributed to poor writing skills and not being able to express his thoughts well. Overall evaluation: It can be read during the book shortage, and there is a lot of room for improvement.

The writing style is okay, but every time I communicate with people, the style suddenly changes, or a nonsensical style similar to a light novel. This is very surprising, because the story setting is quite rigorous and the foreshadowing style is relatively serious, but the dialogue between the characters is very casual and funny, quite fragmented.

The first 16 chapters feel pretty good. At least there are no typos. Come on and write slowly.