Weird West: My Days as a Bounty Hunter

If the protagonist had been so passive and there was no obvious "upgrading" process, the book would probably be over... Because it is uncomfortable for the sake of being uncomfortable, which will only bring a strong sense of discomfort to the readers... In the plot of dozens of chapters, so much time is spent repeatedly emphasizing the weird abnormalities, but it does not directly point to the problem. How did it come about? Why do various strange objects exist? What's wrong with the root of this world? If anomalies are everywhere, how do ordinary people survive so many...? In short, don't fight Cthulhu for Cthulhu's sake! This is not novel! To make progress, we must have counterattacks!

The writing is fine, but it's too dazzling. You can't set up the suspense for too long, and force the suspense there. Everyone knows what plot you want to embody, and you also arrange the protagonist to look like a double. The protagonist's character cannot be forced to pervert and die because of the illogical plot, right?

Even though he knew it was Cthulhu, he still wanted to die!

The protagonist is like a clown. He has the eye of reality and can he be easily swayed by hallucinations? It's better not to open it. What's the use?

The writing is not strong enough, and the hole dug is too shallow. The answers are all on the title page, which means that the readers have already guessed the answers. The author is still pretending to be the Riddler, which seems so stupid. It is no wonder that other readers choose to save dozens of chapters to read again because it is easier to skip. Or simply tell them to quit after seeing half of them, which is quite poisonous relatively speaking.

No wonder there aren't many comments here. The author treats the online article as if it were written in a physical way. A puzzle has been solved for 50 chapters, and it is estimated that 50 more chapters can be solved! Moreover, the protagonist was led by the nose throughout the whole process, and it was useless to say that he had a golden finger!

The protagonist's head has been assimilated. How come he behaves like aboriginals and has no knowledge? Unlike a time-traveler, you are like an aboriginal who has the memory of a time-traveler. If you write like this, you might as well write about being an aboriginal instead of saying that you came from time-travel 😅

After reading almost 50 chapters, I can tell that the author is very thoughtful. The plot is twisty, brain-burning, and has a lot of foreshadowing. It might be better if it is used as a script in Infinite Streaming (just my humble opinion). Maybe there were too many twists and turns, so I skipped back to chapter 50 and couldn't read on. If the plot is like this: Your strategy is excellent and your abilities are fantastic, but I activate the interstellar secrets to defeat the cleverness. Might be fun. Or like playing chess, there is a back-and-forth game. Unfortunately, the current protagonist can only passively solve problems

I kneel down to the readers. I said before that I would read it slowly, but in the past few days, I have learned through other author groups that it is important to read. I beg you to read it every day. Thank you so much😭

After reading Chapter 39, I can't stand it anymore. All the foreshadowing is too superficial, and all the plot is forced to advance by brainwashing with intelligence-reducing riddles The plot line is difficult to elaborate on. Kefang can brainwash and change reality, but it is so rough that he can even keep plain text records on his arms or paper The protagonists seem to have high IQs, but their reasoning abilities are purely tool people. When the author feels that he should be smart, he can deduce who his teammates are, and when the author feels that he should be stupid, he can even deduce who his teammates are. Food may be a two-legged sheep. Such hints are not visible, and even the IQ of the "wise men" in the secret courtyard is not as good as the protagonist, the reckless man, to promote the plot Maybe the author wants to use the enemy's suggestion ability to influence the thinking of the protagonists, but the author does not have the writing power to write the characters' thinking and the confrontation of suggestion resistance What is finally presented is that, after dozens of chapters, the readers are watching a bunch of fools using their reasoning ability and their lack of IQ to defeat the group, which is frustrating and boring.

100% Hit, time can shoot, the road can shoot, pulling the bow is an arrow to shoot the sun

"Okay" "Where's the explosives?" "Whatever" "RPG...?" "No problem" It's a big problem

Still thinking about when to get the injection to open the dark vision? Take a carriage or steamboat to the still waters of Mamen Bayou? Gram style is boring. Most authors can't write well, and you probably can't either.

This is my first time writing, so it may be very slow in some places, and there are inevitably some pitfalls. I hope readers can bear with me. The first section will indeed be slow, and the upgrade is also a bit sluggish. I hope readers don't have to worry and can read it slowly or save it for a while. If there are any bad points, I will kneel down first and I hope you guys will comment 😖

Are there still dozens of riddle plots written by Ren Tou Tie? Fortunately, I read the comments. I definitely don't read this kind of thing.

After reading 70 chapters, I have some suggestions The writing is a bit messy and hard to understand, some of the plot designs are too shallow and too easy to guess, there are no upgrades and there is a lack of excitement, and some of the jokes and metaphors make readers confused and uninterested.

If you don't have the writing power, don't force it to be complicated.

The author's writing style is okay, but the writing is too weak, and the protagonist's IQ is also worrying. Writing a protagonist who seeks death for the sake of seeking death is suspected of torturing the owner. The dungeon is too long, and the bounty mission only gives money. As a modern time traveler, it is not as good as Enjoy life, and you can't upgrade your strength to find weird monsters. It doesn't make any sense. To put it bluntly, there is a lack of main line. If you are a newbie, just treat it as a practice. The author's writing level is okay, but he just doesn't know how to write. After all, it can be understood the first time 🙂