With an MC System in Middle-earth

It starts off well and has a nice pace. It started to get boring in the middle. Sometimes I fell asleep while listening to the book, and when I woke up several chapters had passed. I found that it didn't affect my reading at all, and the plot was still there before I fell asleep. No wonder there were no comments soon after the beginning. Now that I have finished reading it, it was very exciting at the beginning, but maybe the author failed to control it, and the cheating was too big all at once, and the combat power collapsed, so the cheating did not continue to develop in the middle, and the excitement disappeared immediately, and it was really watery in the middle. The next few battles were also a very classic problem that would arise in an uncontrolled invincible style. That is, the combat power collapsed and the protagonist became invincible (against miscellaneous soldiers). Therefore, in each battle, I would first find a reason to force the protagonist away, and then write about how hard it was to fight, and then the protagonist would return in a desperate moment. I originally thought there would be a different story about the ring of destruction, but I ended up going through the process forcibly. The details were different, but the process was pretty much the same, so that was boring. It should be finished forcibly after all the data is lost. It is considered conscientious and there are no eunuchs.

Congratulations on finishing it, the best Middle-earth story I have ever read.

It's been many years since a book gave me this sense of adventure. It's invincible but not boring, it's restrictive but not restrictive. It's a good article and the author's writing style will get better and better. In the new chapter, Ye Zi, who has been filled with chicken soup, is still the familiar elf in his memory. The overall character design is not OOC. Come on, author, you write very articulately! !

The book is okay, yes, but it would be better if you could develop a real territory and recruit people to farm and develop it. Farming alone would be boring.

Combined with Middle-earth, it creatively and interestingly changes many things and slowly affects the surroundings. It is the most interesting and anticipated work I have seen recently 🙂 The author should not force his body. This kind of quality is very comfortable and good to watch.

A little thought, the protagonist already has a lot of residents. After a period of time, will these residents evolve into "MC culture" due to the "MC life" in the territory? After all, the customs of different regions are essentially a reflection of local material life. MC territories that are very different from the outside world are bound to have an impact on residents: For example, the measurement units of various weights and measures used by residents will evolve towards "one grid, one group, one square" because it is more convenient to use the MC characteristics in the territory. The game characteristics tips taught by the protagonist to the residents may also become "proverbs" to guide life. As time goes by, other meanings are added by later generations. Maybe a few hundred years from now, children's Chinese textbooks will read "If you want to get rich, first fall down the tree - which means that in order to do things steadily, you must lay a good foundation." Because iron golems always give flowers to residents who are afraid of themselves to express friendliness, so when residents in the territory meet strangers, they will hand out a flower to show that they are harmless (the handshake was initially used to express that they did not hold weapons and would not harm the other party. Unconsciously, it has become a common etiquette for modern people) Over time, maybe the humans in the protagonist's territory will be regarded as "foreign races" like elves, dwarves, and orcs by other humans because of their MC-oriented life and culture, and then a legend will spread. Some stereotypes of the "Cube Tribe" - "Dwarves are all drunkards, and Cube Tribes all suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder" When they are really regarded as a new race, maybe future generations will use their own understanding to rewrite the various deeds of the protagonist into a mythical story "Li Weixing" Walking on the earth, he knocked off a section from the first oak tree he saw. He gave this piece of oak to his people and told them that this was the length of one grid." I feel that there are still many places that can be dug deeper. Everyone is welcome to discuss 😏

It's been a long time since fantasy readers have eaten fine chaff. This writing is too white.

Well-deserved No. 1 In MC system, No. 1 In Lord of the Rings fandom

I don't understand why so many people praise this book? I was simply tricked into it by the comment section. After reading the first 50 chapters, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. The mechanics of Mc are interesting, but the author didn't write it out. At least what I want to see is a collision of two rules. But the author seems to only want to write stories about MC adventurers. Farming is not thorough either. The battle scenes are also averagely written.

I feel that one of the biggest bugs or buffs in this kind of novel is that the protagonist has no social needs at all. Without a mobile phone to play, he maliciously refuses to communicate with anyone for several months. He works every day, and is obviously very powerful, but he has no desire to reproduce or mate. .

There are too few Lord of the Rings fans, come on.

If you don't build your own territory properly, you'll just run around and do nothing? You are a MC and go play Ranger! It's rare for labor and management to talk about you.

(Two versions, very different)

Map of China

The Witch-King of Angmar, the leader of the Nine Ringwraiths, wields the Morgul sword, Kohamul, the king of the East Yi, also known as the "Shadow of the East" Dol, one of the Ringwraiths, whose specific name and deeds are unknown. Ji Yindu, although he is not one of the Nine Rings, he is a character related to the Lord of the Rings and tried to regain the Ring. Akhorathil, one of the Ringwraiths, whose specific name and deeds are unknown. Holmrath, one of the Ringwraiths, whose specific name and deeds are unknown. Atonnafil, one of the Ringwraiths, whose specific name and deeds are unknown. The dirty evil man "Man" is one of the Ringwraiths. His specific name and deeds are unknown. Uvasa the Wrangler, one of the Ringwraiths, whose specific name and deeds are unknown.

There is too little description of the MC mechanism, and the specific version is not clear. I don't even know if there are warthogs in the lower realm. Similarly, some things from the original version of MC are also used too little. During the Battle of the Five Armies, it was fully capable of making potions of splash power, swiftness, regeneration, weakness, instant damage, etc. There are also potion arrows that can be automatically fired by the launcher. Piglins can also be traded for a large amount of obsidian to block doors, and magma blocks can burn feet. However, our protagonist can only use a set of equipment and some simple magma traps, and even went shopping in the nether world for so long without defeating the wither. He doesn't look like an orthodox MC player at all, like a primary school student who has just started.

I always think about MC features after encountering problems. Shouldn't I explore and experiment with the features in advance? Moreover, when you are not strong enough in the early stage and don't have enough supplies, and you know there are wandering orcs around, you still insist on building a castle in a thankless way. Isn't it much better than digging underground holes? MC plants don't need the sun. They are easy to defend and difficult to attack. They are also more hidden. In short, there is a problem with the logic of the protagonist's behavior.

After reading the messages and comments, I fully understood the idea that some netizens only want to read Wudiliu online novels. Just... We don't allow weak golden fingers, and we also require new authors to write better than the old ones, and they don't let the protagonist participate in the plot. The whole thing is like "I just want to see the protagonist be strong and strong in other worlds. If you don't write it, you will be Sha Bei." I can only say that if you really follow these suggestions to write a book, it is better to just throw out the outline. After all, the free chapters are full of nonsense, so it is better to read the outline directly, isn't it? (It does not involve how the author writes, this comment only involves some of the readers mentioned above)

Play spicy! Ninety-nine percent of the time the author of Qidian takes leave is a prelude to being a eunuch.

Are there any good MC system books? After reading this, I wanted to find some similar MC system books, but I couldn't find a few good ones.

It can be said that it is the Lord of the Rings fanfic that has the best starting point and looks the warmest and most comfortable.

The creativity is okay, but the writing is lacking

So when will the new book be released? Is the new book still an MC novel? I also ask book friends to kick me when I open a new book.

I'm very curious about what extra-sperm is. Can you let me know more about it?

I feel like the author still writes fan fiction which is more interesting than the original work.

Isn't it the end? What about the follow-up? Don't you want the protagonist to grow into a creator god like Yiru?

This book is almost as if it was tailor-made

Do you have any thoughts about writing about Game of Thrones? Game of Thrones for MC must also be interesting.

I feel this may be the author's peak😭

It's really well written, so chic.