Doomsday Survival Integration Pack

Your book gets 99 points. I have finished reading the latest chapter 74. Except for the slight slippage at the beginning, your book perfectly describes what the protagonist of "Minecraft" should be like in my heart. Born to be divine! I hope it will continue to be better in the future. I am very satisfied with what you have written so far! Very satisfied

Let me give you some advice: Let your people hollow out the world. Those soil, stones, and water are all resources. Why not collect them? I don't understand at all what are you wasting your time for? The floor should be filled with your own squares, so that at least you won't lose innocent resources during fights. Even if you have the infinite conversion module, it won't be wasted like this. And have you finished exploring this world? The Eastern and Western Continent that you told us about before is still something like that. Have you finished exploring this? With a population of 300 million, why don't they let them have babies quickly? Actively giving birth to a baby? After all, you have unlimited food now, so it will be very beneficial for you to have more people That's all for your comments, remember to change them for me!

Have you ever been Steve? Forgot the rest

It's too gentle, and I feel that the protagonist is too temperless, even to the point of being a little aggrieved. Of course, this is just my feeling. The book itself is quite good.

Is the user named Supreme VIP in this comment area a chuan, a black man, or a real fan? He goes around saying that others can't understand the author's layout, which means that MC is a farming game and killing people every day is a pervert. Aren't the players who love to play empty islands and wake-ups explode? People sit on pots at home and come from heaven. Moreover, the speech was really too pure and I kept looking for someone to criticize the author. I even doubted whether this was the author's trumpeting, but from looking at it, it shouldn't be the case.

You'll be done with it after a few days of rest, right? You like not to put yourself in a box, right? You want to be tough, right? The next step is to delete your account and run away You'd better have something really wrong with your health, it would be better for everyone.

If you are an old fan of the previous book, you will know that it is written by a big brother and you don't need to try it out. Just add it to the bookshelf to read 🤓 and ask for feedback and refinement.

Author, can you please stop writing words like "Break it for me!" "Open it for me!" "Give me a lift!" It feels like seeing a domestic puppet show character in Game of Thrones

When the writing power is not enough, the world view is too big. The big settings of Blue and White Society and Xiling Empire are complete disasters if they cannot be mastered. The success of the previous Middle-earth book is actually due to the low magic and low martial arts. The intensity of the protagonist can be easily controlled, which means that the rhythm of the novel is in the hands of the author. The plot of this Empire part is The book was messed up. I was still farming in the first few chapters, and then I immediately entered the capital to dominate the world. After the destruction of the world, I posted outlines on a large scale. At this point, it was actually unfinished. The author disappeared for more than a month. In fact, looking back now, maybe it would have been a better choice to just cut the outline. Anyway, keep going, I hope the next one will be better.

Is it right to only have two chapters after holding it back for so long? Do you still have 20 chapters on your computer that will be posted later today? 😏😏😏

Many details are not as good as those described in the previous book, and the name is also suspected of being a piece of cake. Not as good as the previous one

It seems that I have found that the writing is too big and is confusing. I don't know how to write next. Each one of them is so awesome that I can't keep up with it. But I have one post here. Since they are all Steve's physiques, why not just start fighting against Doomsday? There is no need to join any creation-level circles here. What we need is to contain Doomsday. Anyway, Steve can't die and there is still the main world. The more people die, the more Doomsday will be recognized. It would be good to write about some interesting modules. How about Doomsday? How to write such a weird thing? After the recognition is completed, a doomsday is contained. When the protagonist cannot bear it anymore, he comes out of the doomsday vacuum circle to feel refreshed and make friends. After the break, he continues to recognize the doomsday. Steve does not need to join the circle at all, so when you write here, it feels like you are cutting off. If you jump out and write directly, the indescribable space will be much larger.

The old book has been diverted, let's continue the MC journey😤 I'll update more when it's on the shelves, best wishes🔥

It's still very emotional. The characteristics of MC and the existence of modules are actually the most suitable for writing about the flow of time travel. As the author said, this book was constrained by the title, causing the progress to be completely out of control.

After reading the closing remarks, I can only say that one has too much ambition and one has too little power. Whether it's a cat or click here to write MC, there are not only one or two books that have achieved results. The author feels that he is the most awesome in both writing and MC circles. Please trouble the author to read other people's works. There is a problem with the rhythm of the author's writing, and the writing style is not gripping enough.

Sure enough, I can only give it to Paramecium and 🐙? Currently reading the latest chapter, it is undeniable that there are still some flaws in the previous chapter, but it can still be perfected. As long as it is saved and resurrected, right? The writing power is still partially online, so I can try to use it as food (if there are no eunuchs). The author can be more creative and try an alternative foundation wearing MC skin?

Although it feels very comfortable to watch at the moment, the protagonist did not explain why he rescued these two men, which is a bit of a logical loophole... It can completely explain that after they were rescued, they continued their original plan to go to their teacher, but they said "things have gotten worse and the teacher can't save them", and then ran away... As a result, the protagonist now ran to save the people inexplicably, and then ran away after saving the people. Then why run away with two burdens who know his secret? So I'd better explain it...

Author, you'd better follow up the book with another one, the MC system one, which allows the protagonist to go to the world of Game of Thrones to do things or create forces. It can be done in any time period such as Family of Dragons or Ice and Fire.

At present, I judge it to be around 110 chapters. My feeling about the whole book is that it is mixed. I feel that the author has not thought about what to write, and the details are completely inappropriate. For example, how long does it take to prepare for the doomsday in the early stage? From the beginning to the end, this Utopia has not mainly described the reaction of the citizens. Then, regarding the problem of fellow travelers, I feel that the author cannot grasp the character description well. The two adults at the beginning, the gifted person who rescued, the Archmage, No. 9, And the Keeper of Secrets. These main supporting characters gave me the feeling that they are tools, tools without feelings. The replacement order is as above. It is impossible to write the interaction of more than three people. As for the early villain, the Empire. The stereotypes are over, the nobles are arrogant, the king is as stupid as a pig, the extraordinary ignores the bottom... And, how can I put it, this stereotype is not done well. In conclusion, although book readers said that the author's previous book was good, but just talking about this one, my evaluation as of Chapter 110 is that if you are really hungry, you can nibble a few times, don't think too much.

It's not as organized as the previous book. It feels like there's no outline at all. The protagonist does this and that. Go out for fun before you have grown up

It's hard to hold on. Fortunately, the part after the destruction of the world noticed something was wrong and stopped watching. It's a pity that I lost some coins.

I don't know if the author can read it. If the author writes this book just for people who have played the game Minecraft, and doesn't care whether people who have never played it understand it or are willing to read it, then there is nothing wrong with the author's writing. But the author also hopes that people who have never played this game will also like this book. I hope the author can write down the attributes of various equipment, where to get the ores, and the functions of the ores. There are many other things that have to be written out, otherwise they will not be understood at all.

I think the author can learn from fellow station MC's work "Kill That Steve!" ", His narrative rhythm is really good

I just realized that this book is gone at 480,000 words. Why do I feel like it's more than that?

Looking forward to the next one, this one is really rushed. Mature authors must learn not to be disturbed by the comment section. Isn't this a way of understanding the end of the world?

It's okay, at least it's a serious ending and not a mess.

{"NickName":"bilser","UserId":313465940}Author, don't you plan to open a new book?

It's over. Let the author take a good rest. After the break, a new book will be released soon😁

There is, cognition, and the universe appears! Nothing, antimatter universe!

The protagonist's final choice is similar to the protagonist's shared ability in the Endless Sea Chart written by Dao Sansheng that I have read.