Game of Thrones: Starting with the Coronation of the Pope

I'm speechless. I praised this book earlier. I don't know what the author thought of the current plot. He robbed King Ma's people, and you took the initiative to attend King Ma's banquet. It would be fine if you had an army and strength. Now you have nothing. What will happen if King Ma chops you down with a knife? The purpose of this time is to pick up the Dragon Mother. Can't we just pick it up and leave? We have to create conflicts and create conflicts. You write that the fat governor conceals the information about the arrival of the Horse King, and waits until the day when he is about to leave. The Horse King suddenly comes, insists on meeting the protagonist, and then starts the rest of the plot, right? I am really speechless if I have to give the protagonist some wisdom.

Writing a Game of Thrones novel from the perspective of the Seven's faith and church is a rare direction. It is true that the description in this aspect of the original work is relatively weak, which may be a big challenge for the author to be able to reasonably add details of the seven gods' beliefs, and even how to change the original system is also a difficulty. I read some materials about Game of Thrones and found that a lot of content was not mentioned. For example, how the Archbishops came into being, the lives of local monks in towns or villages far away from big cities, etc. Were not mentioned. These can be introduced together with the changes to the church in the article, such as the establishment of a hierarchical system, the establishment of praying monks in villages to manage and play a role, the establishment of churches or monasteries in cities to be managed by bishops, the establishment of archbishops in important cities and castles, and the selection of the highest archbishop can refer to the Privy Council. In addition, local monks could be brought in as juries to exert influence over major decisions made by the lords. As for the description of sacraments, in the original work, there are basically only baptism, marriage and holy orders. Things related to the daily life of every villager, such as the Eucharist, are not reflected. This is also an aspect that needs to be refined. In addition, the original description of the weapons that the church can use is too crude. It seems that there are no other powerful means to fight against the power of the lord except for church armed forces. Various types of excommunication, especially the order to break down the entire family and the entire territory, are not mentioned at all. There is also the recognition of sacraments such as marriage and baptism, and methods such as declaring someone's marriage invalid to participate in the game of power. These are all very interesting directions. I can't wait to see someone who's committed "aggravated murder" be impaled in the mud with a pitchfork by an angry crowd after being released from a territory-wide eviction order. Theologically, I did not expect such a good point. Although there are seven different forms of one God, the most important soteriology is mentioned too little in the original work. This may be the essence of the Abrahamic series, with creationism and so on coming second. Perhaps it is feasible from the perspective that the so-called seven persons represent the seven virtues, and the pursuit of them is the key to salvation.

It was okay in the first few chapters, but not so much when I went to pick up the Dragon Mother.

I don't see the main character's motive for keeping it at all. Why did Illyrio offend the main character first and then give the dragon egg to him? It's just a disease.

The author's writing was too intellectually depressing. In order to take away Long Ma, he forcibly modified the original character's personality and IQ.

I read the first three chapters before finishing it. The main character reminded me of the American TV series The Young Pope. Well, it can be said to be the most well-written group of Game of Thrones fans I have ever watched. Dragon Mother, Daughter of the Uncanny Valley, Come from Away, The Iron Throne, Napoleon, etc. Are all good. If you can't throw away the writing style, there are too few system articles that can be read... Is the super power in Chapter 3 equivalent to mind reading? Read memory? Guiding control through mind reading? I hope this "plug-in" of the protagonist is not too strong. I think the most interesting part of the Game of Thrones is the power struggle, war, conspiracy and so on... Don't write it into a war between gods and demons in the later period... Just like Dragon Mother and the Daughter of the Uncanny Valley.

The author's writing skills are indeed good, and the writing is pretty good. Even Ma Wangna, many book friends are also complaining that the plot is too rigid and even causes the character to collapse. Judging from the number of book reviews, many book friends have also left there. In addition, the character's psychological description is too frequent, and the protagonist has to emphasize his Wang Mang ambition almost every few chapters. It is a bit tired after reading it, and the plot is also slow. It seems that the author wants to write a long story. I hope it will not collapse later. It is still rare to take the religious route.

This reason is funny enough. In order to see the barbarians forcefully making trouble, don't you want to laugh after reading this reason?

It's too abstract. The protagonist is the protagonist, and your writing style is the writing style. At the beginning, it was written in the style of justification by faith. Then you portray the main character as a hypocrite. If you want to write this kind of hypocrite. I ask your writing style to be playful and sadistic. Don't initially portray the protagonist as being very righteous by faith, you know. It made him sick just to look at it.

This book is very good, and the characters are well portrayed. It is hard to imagine that the author is writing a novel for the first time. Such smooth text can be seen that the author has certain writing skills As for the plot, the author has a good angle of insertion, and the protagonist is also quite smart. There are no unsavory authors who in the name of growth crazily derail the protagonist in the early stage, and the protagonist does not want to follow the plot, and is begging The Beggar King must pick up the Dragon Mother when he is wandering. This changes the entire plot from the source. It is very bold. It can be seen that the author is very confident in himself and feels that he can grasp the plot that is completely different from the original work There are not many words at the moment, but it is still very exciting so far. I have recently become obsessed with Game of Thrones-themed novels. It has been on the list for so long. So far, this is the second Game of Thrones novel that I can read.

It's really rare for Game of Thrones fans to take a religious route

Originally, the plot had already undergone a huge deviation from the original work after bringing Dragon Mother back, let alone sleeping with Dragon Mother? I just want to ask, is the woman who is already in a relationship with the protagonist still such an important role in the original work? Isn't her relationship with the protagonist equivalent to a death-free medal? And the protagonist is obviously a magic stick, so he insists on having a son. The euphemistic name is: inherit the protagonist's career! You clearly wrote that the protagonist has superpowers, but you still have to make the protagonist's lifespan similar to that of a mortal. Aren't you asking for trouble? All in all, my results were pretty good at first but then they got worse and worse!

Horse King is so confused. He can walk but he has to wander.

It's a pity. Originally, the idea of ​​the game of Thrones on the religious route was quite good, and the author's previous scripts were also good. Judging from the outline at the back, it was pretty good, alas.

The writing is okay, but the protagonist's IQ is not enough!

The writing is quite good, but it is always written in a long paragraph, just like popular science. For example, when writing about Duke Blood Crow, it is a long paragraph about his experience. The meaning of this is unclear. Those who know it will know it without you writing it. Those who don't know it will be confused even if you write such a word of one or two hundred words. I just don't know what it is called, it feels like when I think of where to write it.

If you want to read religious articles, you can cancel. I don't understand the meaning of this identity given by the author.

There are now thirty chapters in total, and you have spent twenty of them wasting your time with the Beggar King. Go for Dragon Mother, but look at how many times she appears. If you are not a master, you should grasp the rhythm well, otherwise you will die sooner or later.

It's a pity, because the author's writing style and writing style are very good in the early stage. Very distinctive. I originally thought that another masterpiece of Game of Thrones was born, but it turned out to be the beginning of writing. It would be great if any author could learn from his idea 😜

The two plots between Yi Di and Ma Wang are just stupid, why don't we let them talk about it? ?

I can't say it's not popular. It's only finished with over 500,000 words, and many people haven't gotten into it yet. You won't be popular if you don't persist

The biggest problem with this book is its verbosity. Many times there are no characters, scenes, or dialogues in the entire chapter. It is all about the author talking to himself, with all kinds of speculations, descriptions, and comments.

It's a pity that it didn't include the transformation from human to god. Although there was no killing or fucking, I still enjoyed reading it.

Rubbish, selfish character, pretending to be kind

Not bad, the characters are vividly depicted, gkd

The romance is very well written, but a bit slow.

Why the protagonist of Game of Thrones does not use long weapons when fighting on horseback, but uses a sword? I am speechless

Establish the Papal State? Is there no heroine?

This progress is too fast. Westeros will soon have a unified rhythm.

Your progress is too fast, it's like a historical narrative