Game of Thrones: Starting with the Coronation of the High Septon

Speechless. I was praising this book earlier, and now I don't know what the author was thinking. You kidnapped Khal Drogo's men, and you still willingly attend his banquet? If you had an army and power, it would be fine, but now you have nothing. What can Khal Drogo do if he kills you? The goal this time is to pick up Daenerys Targaryen; couldn't you just pick her up and leave?

Writing Game of Thrones novels from the perspective of the Seven Gods' faith and the Church is a very rare approach. Indeed, the original works are relatively weak in this regard, which may pose a significant challenge for the author in adding details about the Seven Gods' faith in a reasonable way, and even how to modify the original system is also a difficult point.

The first few chapters were alright, but things went wrong from the moment they went to pick up Daenerys Targaryen.

I completely failed to see any motive for keeping the protagonist alive. What was the point of Illyrio offending the protagonist first and then giving him the dragon egg? It's just a series of erratic behavior.

The author's writing is so idiotic; they forcibly altered the original characters' personalities and intelligence in order to take Daenerys Targaryen away.

I read the first three chapters before finishing the main story. The protagonist reminded me of the youngest pope in the American TV series. Well, it's probably one of the best-written Game of Thrones fanfics I've ever read. Daenerys Targaryen, Daughter of the Uncanny Valley, From Afar, The Iron Throne, and that Napoleon book from Poison Reading was also okay, but it flopped and was abandoned.

That's too abstract. The protagonist is the protagonist, and your writing style is your writing style. You started with a justification-by-faith style, and then you portrayed the protagonist as a hypocrite. If you want to write about this kind of hypocrite, I suggest you use a satirical writing style. Don't start by portraying the protagonist as justified by faith, you know? It's disgusting.

The author's writing is indeed good, but many readers are complaining about the plot of "Horse King," saying that the plot development is too abrupt and even causes the characters to break down. Judging from the number of reviews, many readers have also left the book because of this.

This reason is ridiculous. Creating unnecessary trouble just to see barbarians—doesn't it make you laugh when you see this excuse?

This book is quite good. The characters are well-developed, and it's hard to believe this is the author's first novel; the fluent writing shows the author has a certain level of writing skill. Regarding the plot, the author's insertion angle is good, and the protagonist is portrayed as quite intelligent.