Starting from the God of Death and Going Through the Infinite Comics

In terms of settings/characters, it feels like it's obviously an imitation of Samsara Paradise, but the imitation is okay. It's a high imitation, but it also has a lot of problems First of all, there's the problem of world selection. The first one is the crappy (crossed out) classic Demon Slayer and Sea of Fire, and then there's the spell. The advantage is that everyone has seen it, and the disadvantages are also everyone's. I've seen it all Coming to the character issue, I guess the author may have wanted to write a pure reckless character at first, but the response was not very good, so he tried the route of establishing power, pretending to be cool, and having fun; it must be said that the writing of each route is not bad, but when mixed together, the character of the protagonist seems to be a bit broken Finally Post-pacing problem, it's too long to write about the same world, and it seems very easy to get bored in a world where it's all fighting/all construction/all making trouble (but not many people can grasp the rhythm of 99 flow, maybe my appetite has been spoiled) In short, the article The pen is okay, but the creativity is not, the world is safe, the pace is a bit slow, the human setting is not very stable, and I can only give food and grass -, but based on the scarcity of unlimited streams of fans, those who like unlimited streams can add some points to eat it as food and grass But there is an ultimate question in this book: Why don't I just watch Samsara Paradise?

Dragon Ball Z should be released later, otherwise Li Bao will be beaten to autism.

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The author is actually very good at writing, but as a newcomer, I read this book instead of your previous one. The shadows of the previous one kept appearing, and they hinted at the power of the protagonist and his tribe friends in the first half. They always seemed to be on the same level as the protagonist of this book. I always felt like Tang San. No matter how many Douluo, you Tang Shenwang is still the biggest feeling.

Shennong's summary: Newcomers can leave after reading Volume 3. Those who are patient can read Volume 8. If you really can't help it, run away as soon as you see the clearance of Volume 11. Don't hesitate and don't think about finishing this volume. The following are the reading evaluations of each volume Volume 1. The first entry into the Bleach: good-looking 2. The world of boxing: good-looking 3. Demon Slayer: Invincible crushing 4. The first time into the pirates: farming throughout the chapter, abandoned 5. The arrival of Naruto: average, not as good as the first three volumes 6. The return of the death: faint plan Frequent appearance, discarded 7. Spell Return: Novel design, less watery 8. Pirate Peak: Repeatedly pretending to be B, boring 9. Overlode: A replica of the world of spells, discarded 10. Naruto Dances: Normal, water 11. Death's End: Patience exhausted, poisoned to death

To be honest, the author is not suitable for writing about battles of wits, and it feels a bit disconnected. Isn't it strange that you are very reckless in the front and are constantly fighting wits in the back? There is also Uchiha Itachi, I think it is quite funny that a few words can make Uchiha mad.

I don't know why, but I always feel that the protagonist is stronger in an external object, rather than in himself. I know that things like Soul Eater and Origin Spirit Seed should also be counted on himself, but it just looks awkward.

The writing is good, but there are many suggestions in the book review that are poisonous... Since it is a book about seeking enlightenment, I hope to abide by the following: 1. There will be no female protagonist and no ambiguity in the book! A reckless man does not need a woman. I don't recognize my younger sisters, nor my female pets. 2. The world of Infinite Streaming must be a popular theme that is well-known in the streets. Animation is never wrong! At worst, you have to be a full-time hunter, and you will die if you engage in unpopular anime (certified by a 15-year-old bookworm, I have seen countless fan authors commit suicide to play in a niche, and a large number of fans abandon the books, and they quickly become eunuchs) 3. Refuse to be indecisive and suppress the fighting ability.

It's too related to the previous book, and the comment section keeps mentioning and comparing it, making the protagonist of this book look like a clown. The author probably wanted to write Lu Chen and Lu Li into a relationship like Shi Hao and Ye Fan, but if it was written crookedly, it would become like Tang San and Huo Yuhao. Really annoying! Why are Lu Chen's family so annoyed! Lu Li's many cheats and so many efforts are nothing compared to a secret bloodline, nor a family background of a descendant of the Martial God! A novel about the supremacy of bloodline Oh no! Lu Li's plug-ins were all given by Lu Chen hahaha, and his soul was also passed down by Lu Chen. How could Lu Li come from without Lu Chen? It's so funny.

This book is the beginning of a comprehensive manga, but there is no heroine. If you like the novel without a heroine, you can read it. I still prefer harem-style comprehensive comics, which is more traditional, and I can't enjoy them without a female protagonist. I hope it will be of some help to others 🙂

The first comprehensive comic is okay, but the second one is fantasy, and the data processing is not good. It is too outrageous to brag about the infinite size On a land several times the size of the Milky Way, there are only hundreds of billions of people Is this a vast land and sparsely populated land? The author has no idea at all Looking back at the previous chapter, Lu Li was extremely talented and full of troubles. It took him thousands of years to go from a mortal to the eighth level peak of 280. As a result, the bottom line of the fantasy world is 280. People are born with attributes of 280. Moreover, this world has a huge continent, bigger than the universe. It is unimaginable how many people there are, hundreds of billions? Trillions? Trillions? Too many to count! How much space is there? Is the space so rubbish? Spending so many resources, is the space just playing house? Is it still necessary to have a space training ground? The attributes of Lu Li 294. When he first entered the Martial God Mountain, all the disciples passing by were similar to him. He laughed to death. This is an outer disciple, and there are more than 10 million such outer sect disciples in the Martial God Mountain! More than ten million! The sudden spread of data makes people look stupid What is the previous passion? What does the previous effort count? What are the dead and intertwined supporting players on the way to upgrade? This book gets more and more complicated as I write it. It's not worth ordering the whole book. I'm a little lucky that I read one chapter and ordered one chapter. I spent less money.

Try writing two original articles. You can't live in the shadow of Samsara Paradise all your life.

I don't know why, but I always compare it with Samsara Paradise. It feels like Samsara Paradise is a world where everything revolves around tasks, but this author doesn't like to delve into the plot. The key is, this shouldn't be a comprehensive comic, right? It's more like infinite flow.

The character design of One Piece Naruto is obviously different from the previous worlds. The protagonist inexplicably has a mouth escape skill... The lone wolf and ruthless character of the previous worlds is basically invisible 😅

Li Bao: I remember all your money, totaling fifteen million! I will pay you back as soon as I make money. Zhongyan: It doesn't matter, I'm not short of money 😁 Libao: I can't help you Zhongyan: No, no, no. Fortunately, Li Bao has the Eternal Tribulation Snake Ring. Without the Eternal Tribulation Snake Ring, I would have delayed you for the rest of your life 😊 Li Bao: I'm leaving, take care of yourself Zu Yan: Take care of yourself too🙂 Li Bao: Goodbye Zu Yan: Goodbye! Will we see you again, Li Bao? You have to be stronger when we meet again, okay? Li Bao, you have to become stronger, you have to become stronger, okay? Become stronger, become stronger! 😢 Li Bao: Origin, let's go Ending: Your world will not have me anymore, it doesn't matter, you have to become stronger. Libao! Libao! Libao, how can I live without you? Libao! Libao! Libao! Libao! Libao! Libao, take me away, Libao! Ahhhhhh! ! ! 😭

I feel uncomfortable with the role of Valkyrie. In the Bleach ending, the protagonist has a lot of cheats and pretends to be Yhwach, but isn't the protagonist also more flashy than Valkyrie? Just one bloodline can crush the protagonist and a bunch of cheats. This chapter writes that the protagonist is a clown, and the chapter comments all praise the protagonist of the previous game.

I don't know why the descriptions in other anime novels are so unbelievable. The supermodel's abilities seem particularly weak when put into this book. There is no expressiveness at all. Regardless of what unbelievable abilities the protagonist has acquired, the final performance is still to cut him off 😅

Is this Elephant planned to have a single female protagonist, no female protagonist, or a harem of multiple female protagonists? I personally support the harem😁

The most attractive thing about Death is the Zanpakutō, brother. It's been more than 30 chapters, but you still can't bear to finish it?

As the title says, I can't write emotional dramas but my writing skills are very good when I write about other people's emotional dramas. I write about other people showing affection.

Ah? From death to fist wish, are you serious? Isn't there a big difference between the two? I really can't imagine that there are any good things in the hospital that would be helpful to the protagonist?

Can you believe that any of the descendants of the main character Lu Chen in this book can crush and beat Lu Li in all aspects with the same attributes, and even blow him up with one punch? In the author's opinion, the secret blood is the most invincible bloodline. If Lu Li tries again and encounters the secret blood, he will be tortured and killed. The more I watch it, the more unpleasant it becomes. The character of Valkyrie is portrayed like shit. Why is there so much going on in Lu Chen's family? In this case, is it still necessary to have a mechanism for attracting people and training people in space? Let Lu Chen find more wives, spread more seeds, and have a lot of descendants. Wouldn't all of them be monsters? How many failures did Lu leave have? The author likes routines that allow the protagonist to break through in battle, and also likes all kinds of coincidences. If one link is missing, the protagonist will simply die Classic process ① (Breakthrough and counter-kill) The enemy is too strong → The protagonist cheats to close the gap → The protagonist still can't beat → The protagonist barely supports → The protagonist walks around → The protagonist has a new account → The protagonist's extreme counter-kill Classic process ② (Repeated breakthroughs Counter-Kill) Strong enemies descend from the sky → Passers-by collectively badmouth → Exaggerate the strength of the opponent → The protagonist does not believe in evil → Coincidentally, the protagonist has a new account before the fight → After the battle, the protagonist is lucky that there is no new hook and he will be killed → The protagonist learns hard while fighting → The protagonist breaks through in battle → The protagonist is tortured again → The protagonist is killed once → The protagonist has an epiphany → The enemy Vegeta behaves → The enemy waits for the protagonist to upgrade → Evenly matched → Forced draw

Hey, I don't like a stupid protagonist very much, it's too unrelatable.

Don't write a Samsara Space-style comprehensive comic. There is such a big gap between your first one and this one. Do you really have no idea? The Death God and the Dragon Clan are both well written separately, especially the first one starting with the Dragon Clan. It is really well written. If you study other anime or novels carefully and concentrate on writing a fanfic with a separate world view, it will definitely be very good. Grab your own strengths. Don't always show your weaknesses.

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The writing is based on the idea, and the protagonist of the book is insistently included. Fairy fantasy and comprehensive comics are not compatible at all.

As long as this book isn't related to the characters in the previous book, it can't be this rubbish 🙂

In the original world, the higher the number ranking, the more powerful it is The gap between World No. 0 And World No. 1 Should not be big, but the data given by the author are inconsistent, which simply presses the reader's brain to the ground and rubs it hard The Lingxu Palace, which often arbitrates world battles in various major spaces, is not low in power in World No. 0, And forced it several times in the early stage. The status is kept relatively high For example, in the captive world of Gourmet, the position of the guardian in the final land is the steward of Lingxu Palace. The 220 attribute points still put some pressure on Lu Li at the time And it is also said that only elites can enter the Lingxu Palace to serve, which shows that this guardian is considered a small elite in World 0 But! Later, when Lu Li went to World No. 1, The author set the bottom level of this world to be level 80, which is 280 attribute points. This means that in World No. 1, Ordinary people are born at the peak of the eighth level! As long as the steward of Lingxu Palace in front enters World No. 1, Even if he is not crushed to death by the world, any ordinary baby can kill him! In conclusion, an ordinary baby in World No. 1 Can easily kill the little elite in World No. 0! Looking at it this way, is the data outrageous? The following are two screenshots of the original text

I've been watching Dragon Ball since then. There are too many private goods, and it's not as good as the previous King of Humans 😅

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