I Don't Want to Pick up Corpses Either, but They Smell Too Good

There is a problem with your plot arrangement. It has always been frustrating. By chapter 50, there is no excitement at all, and there is no explanation of the world view. Each sect has a single peak and there is no elder. Don't you think it's humorous? The two peaks are fighting as if they are not from the same sect. To be precise, you shouldn't be a sect. Also, the body of the junior sister was stolen as soon as anyone said it was stolen. The person at that peak also looked like a fw. How could this be a sect? This was just an organization that was formed casually and should not be called a sect.

The biggest poisonous point at the moment is: the internal fighting between the two sides will lead to the death of the people in Yaoguang Peak, and the sect does not care about it, but the leader mediates it with just one word, which is equivalent to not caring about the death of the disciple at all. After everything was done, he turned around and still had to fight for the sect? ? It is really poisonous to accept the challenge with peace of mind. Why are you so big-hearted?

The world of immortality written by the author is too petty and the structure is too small. It is outrageous for a sect to be able to exist with such disunity I don't even believe it if you tell me directly about the Demon Sect, the Demon Sect should at least create a sect that makes the best use of everything! If you, a fairy sect, can do this, why not write it as the Sanren Alliance?

The plot cannot stand up to scrutiny, nonsensical ideas come up one after another, the causes and consequences are not written, and the suspense is not felt and the writing is not smooth enough to be considered a plot twist. Summarizing the worldly wisdom is still a novice.

If the plot is not well organized, it will not look good when you return to the sect. Don't leave foreshadowing at every turn. Very few people can persist until your foreshadowing comes out. If there is no fan base, they will just leave if there are problems or bad things.

Tens of thousands of people have ordered this novel! ! ! Read! ! ! Experience! ! ! Author, you are charming! ! !

There are flowers blooming in front of me. If I don't appreciate them, it would seem that I don't understand the style

If you don't get scolded for this kind of writing, who will get scolded? If you don't cater to the public, it is destined to have low traffic. The author is generating electricity for love, so I have nothing to say.

Surviving in the cracks with a small and broad-minded person will only look very cruel.

I am posting this post for three reasons: first, to ask for Zhui reading; second, to ask for Zhui reading; and third, for damn, I want to ask for Zhui reading.

The 100,000-word debut is about to happen, come on...

The fairy grass is like a spring breeze. Brother, you can also read my books when you have time. I am also a fantasy person.

Baffling. . Although that bow is considered a treasure, but so many people died, do you ask if the bow is worthy? How big baby?

This introduction almost seems like there are tens of thousands of novels that have been ordered...

Book title, setting, plot, world background. All good. But I don't have enough motivation to catch up on updates, and I have too little fun.

Is there something wrong with the new chapter? The protagonist is as if he has lost his mind. He just lets the snake lead him into the lava. But he wants to beat him. Why did he design this plot? →_→, It's poisoned to death.

The setting of this book is quite interesting. It should be able to read three rivers. If you are lucky, you may book thousands of books. Fortunately I invested early.

It's better to cut it, right?🤭