The Most Powerful Sniper

There are a ridiculous number of typos, the sentences are not fluent in many places, and there are many minor flaws. Only the plot aspect is good.

Good guy, it's a tribute to the TV series "You Are My Glory", right? The plot also starts with a female star becoming the spokesperson for the game. Even the heroine's name is the same. You are quite good at it 🙂

Even the introduction has typos. Can I read this book?

In fact, the heroine is not a problem. Just write less plot and don't be too descriptive. To be honest, most of the people who watch The Master want to watch the professional circle, and like in the original work, does anyone still doubt the emotional tendencies of Lao Ye and the others? Moreover, I think there may be more people who knock against Shaotian than those who knock against the original heroine.

It would be better if there was no role of Qiao Jingjing

Because I couldn't write a full-time fan novel, I drew on the plots of You Are My Glory and A Little Smile is Alluring. . . Sort of. . . Might as well change it to the decisive battle with Heian Kyo 😅

😌Why is it another article about drilling in an Internet cafe? The starting setting of an online game is far less good than the direct competitive results at the beginning. Going into an Internet cafe to block Ye Xiu, and adding Happy to become a champion are the same regardless of whether there is a protagonist. Especially those with banned titles. They are not banned by online games, but by competitive games.

Haha, let's wait and see when the male and female protagonists get together. I guess no one will come to kick me by then. It's already been 266 chapters and it's not interesting to be together yet? Just forget about this heroine. Don't write about a heroine.

There are so many typos that the author doesn't correct them 🤫🤫🤫

You have so many typos. Can't you check them before uploading? 😅

I also read romance stories, and even film and television fanfics, but I don't read full-time fanfics for the purpose of romance! ! ! No matter how much I like to eat big knuckles, I won't like the waiter serving me big knuckles after ordering coffee at a coffee shop!

The content is pretty good, but there are too many typos. If the brain does not have built-in translation, it is not recommended👍

If the author doesn't correct it himself, the editor will let him publish it if he has so many typos?

Is the protagonist addicted to being a master? There are two professional players on the same team, but as a result, the protagonist becomes the female protagonist facing the professional players. It's just a matter of proving that she can play. Here she is directly trained by professional players. She won't play after the exhibition match. What's the point of practicing so much? It's better to let her play Summoner. I'm speechless😓.

What rubbish? There are so many typos. Author, what else do you write?

It has to be you, the typos in this book are almost as bad as those of Ou Huang😜😜😜

When thinking about Glory, it is easy to think of eternal disaster. High equipment, high latency and high frame rate will directly defeat low frame players.

When will the author change this long paragraph? I'm so confused.

The plot is boring. You don't have to show the pictures of the male and female protagonists. Why show the pictures of Su Mucheng and Ye Xiu? I'm speechless.

Update Douluo: Full-time Sharpshooter

Forget about reading the next one. How about writing the next one about Double Ghost (Slaying Formation)?

The starting value is directly exaggerated to 800. The current theoretical limit for humans is only 600.

Is there any Shennong😰😰