Marvel's I Have Shining Fruit

Author, you are rushing too fast. You have already reached the Heavenly Father level before even describing the growth. As a result, the male protagonist in the article has no foundation for his strength, and all his moves are based on copying. In One Piece, ability users must have physical strength as the basis for developing moves. Even Kizaru's physical strength in Taijutsu is only as weak as that of the Yonko. In Marvel, the strength of the Heavenly Father is basically star-destroying. The Shining Fruit itself may have the power to destroy stars, but the male protagonist definitely doesn't because the author didn't describe it carefully. I hope the author can draft a draft of his next work or the following plot before starting. Otherwise, readers will get tired of following the plot of the original work. Thank you to the author for the novel.

I really like this book, cheers for the author, Oli

Not bad, but the double pronoun looks a bit awkward

After reading a few chapters, I still like the Shining Fruit. I hope I won't become a eunuch Come on, author

I came here because of the title of the book, but is the author screening readers in these first few chapters? I am seriously advised to quit 😅

Since it is a sparkling fruit of the natural type, then if there is no armed Haki in other worlds, then wouldn't it be invincible? Not to mention there are still difficult battles and the like.

It made me so embarrassed that I almost had cancer.

For now, this is a warm and invincible novel. More like it. Come on, author＾0＾~

In Chapter 2, the dialogue between Lan and Mephisto was out of place. Consider the cultural background. It has a strong Chinese style...

There are no wet markets in the United States. To buy ingredients, they usually go to warehouse supermarkets, which are about half an hour's drive from residential areas.

Regarding typos, the author typed on a mobile phone, so everyone knows what the input method is! Don't blame the author!

Ten years ago, this novel was a masterpiece, but now it's 2021

Originally, I was very interested in Marvel adding the Shining Fruit, but why do you want to learn magic? It feels weird, and it is not interesting for a pirate fan.

By the way, the author is definitely a middle school student, so he didn't buy a computer, resulting in a lot of typos when typing on his mobile phone. Because this is not only a problem of poverty, but also a matter of parental control, so you can only code words secretly on your mobile phone. . .

Let's talk about Yin Sen's name. I thought it was Ethan at first, but when I went to watch Iron Man on Youku, the subtitles were Yin Sen, and the pronunciation was that Yin Sen was closer, so I changed it to Yin Sen.

You are probably a new author, right? Sometimes sentences are broken incorrectly and there are a lot of typos, and you are a novice author, so it is easy to lose a lot of readers in the early stage.

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This book, haha, I can't stand it anymore and I'm going to vomit.

The childishness is still there, and after reading it, I felt like this...

I came here because of the name of the book, but I was beaten to death by random sticks in the first chapter. Brother, the author, this is 2021.

Chapter 2 gave me a headache. It's not that I dislike the main theme. There is no problem with the main theme at the right time. For example, in the Marvel world, you can write about how the Spear protects citizens and how to check and balance S. H. I. E. L. D. But a powerful and mature mother of Kama Taj, a mage, shouting that the flower growers will be killed even if they are far away when fighting the devil from another dimension is a bit too mediocre and cannot be done by an adult. Normal people won't sing long speeches like speeches during battles, and you don't have much time to perform for your opponents during battles. And the author, do you think the main melody is very popular, so you just forced it? This part of the content uses the main theme as a reason to forcefully write down the number of words. Can it ignite anything? In order to force emotion, force affectation, and force the main melody, right?

The author has written so many original characters at the beginning. This is the most taboo thing about writing fan fiction. Even if you are OOC, you cannot write original characters.

I've only read eight chapters and there are a lot of typos, and there are two or three chapters that are really awkward.

Good guy, no one left? 😏

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that kills decisively and has many joys. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies" is hilarious...