Tycoon: Starting When the Family Business Is Nearly Bankrupt!

I discovered it today and read it in one sitting. It is considered top-notch among many great writers. I even think it is no worse than Bread. Some points are better. Each has its own advantages.

Later, I write about going to the mother-in-law's shop to cook and eat with my mother-in-law. This very daily thing keeps recurring, which really makes me feel watery and disgusting. It appears too many times. It would be better to describe it simply, such as walking to find your mother for dinner, and then you can skip it. There are too many daily tasks. Can you speed up the process and mention the proportion of describing the company? The daily routine is just to make the character more three-dimensional, but once this side is described, it can be described less. I think we have written enough about the heroine and her mother. Can we not write a chapter about them which requires 7.8%? Otherwise, why not read those that write about daily life? People can still make jokes when writing this kind of thing. What you write about daily life, the author, is tasteless and it is a pity to discard it. The most important thing is that there is some key information about the company interspersed in it. It is easy to miss it if you skip reading. Is this business writing or daily writing? The author should think about it. Don't describe it in such detail every day. There are some things that can be skipped, and there are also times that can be skipped and stretched.

Author, are you writing a novel or popularizing science knowledge? Each chapter has a large explanation of popular science. No one reads novels for this reason. And every time the salary structure has to be drawn out and explained, it is completely unnecessary. There are so many chapters. You can only show the salary structure in a few chapters. When the salary appears later, you can give a brief explanation of the salary (the salary structure is in Chapter xx). Isn't that great? It has become more and more boring recently. I understand if the author doesn't expect to earn royalties from writing novels, but if you continue to rely on this, it will be difficult for you to achieve better results. There are no great novels that have a lot of explanations in each chapter. We are here to read the novel to make it more enjoyable, not to listen to your popular science about why the protagonist does what he does and what the meaning of it is. What's the use of telling us these things? It's just a novel for fun, but we don't really expect to learn anything from it and implement it.

Author, the frequency of erotic scenes is too high. From today onwards, I will report you if you do any pornographic drama.

Anliang? This book is one of the rare things I can subscribe to there. I remember I left a message there before. Someone copied your book here, so I changed the name of the person. I set 500 speaking points, but the report didn't work. It's so fucked up 😠😠

Time passes so slowly. Writing more than 200 chapters in one summer vacation is not over yet. It seemed like everything was done in a short time. Whether it's gold e-waste, hyping up ginseng, or engaging in scientific research. It feels like many times I can do a month's work in one week, and a week's work in one day. Feeling a bit rushed.

The front is okay, as long as it can stand up to the plot of Xia XX at the beginning (I haven't remembered the name for hundreds of chapters), but it may be that the daily description is too watery (Brother Wu Hao and Zhen 😰 😰 always appear to find a sense of presence). There is basically no profile description of the characters. Thousands of people have the same template. In addition, the dialogue between the characters is very long-winded, and it is easy to get bored. I can't stand it anymore In addition, the protagonist and Xia xx's so-called love feeling is also baffling 😅😅 The description of the relationship between the protagonist and Xia xx does not feel sweet, but it is very boring, either doing it or doing it Xia xx's concept of money changes very quickly (from her description, I don't see any difference from the so-called female anchor) Finally: I personally think the author writes very well about business development If you can learn from the side descriptions of characters and objects in other works, I believe...👍👍

All new!

This author writes very well, and many things are very detailed. He can also fill in the gaps for you in advance if the readers think of something that does not fit the bill. However, because it is too detailed, it seems very cumbersome and a bit tiring. Personally, I feel that the score has dropped from 10 to 7 or 8. Son, and then the starting point of this book is too high. I am a conscientious entrepreneur and the third generation of the rich, so it is difficult to fit in. After all, I am just a tragic little guy who reads novels to kill time. It is difficult to fit into the identity of someone who is born rich. Overall, I highly recommend it. After all, the writing is really good.

The author's first novel: Shenhao: From Zero to the Top of the World