Become a God Starting from Sou Shan and Conquering Demons

1. If you keep fighting monsters and upgrading, the homogeneity will be very serious, and it will not look good in the middle and late stages. It is recommended to sort out your ideas and set up a few foreshadowings in the middle and late stages, commonly known as digging holes. 2. I can't see the mid- and early-stage bosses so far, so I suggest you write some foreshadowing. 3. The plot has no contradictions and is straightforward. It is recommended to learn the tricks of the masters. Generally, in the early stage of the work, the protagonist will be given one or more enemies and friends to compare, write about conflicts, write about emotions, and polish the atmosphere of the work. If you just hit the genius list, add a little setting, and write a few impressive supporting characters, it will make people less tired than writing about the protagonist all the time. 4. When writing a novel, you should start to conceive of the ending in the early stages of writing, and you should write it in a concise manner, and do not become more biased as you write. 5. At present, the world setting is still relatively weak. I hope that as the protagonist grows, I will start to complete the world setting now. In short, the setting is still interesting, go for it!

The combat power is ridiculously suppressed. The protagonist deduces that practicing for thousands of years is not as good as others who have practiced for decades. He is drunk.

The emotional writing is too childish. Your loved ones are tied up and you are assigned a death mission. What's the use of going and dying somewhere? Your relatives will definitely be exterminated. Shouldn't you keep your useful body and go for revenge? I don't understand your thinking a bit😵

Just here to complain, the author made the main character, the fourth uncle, very awesome. He is a mountain patrol official. His status is probably not lower than that of a county magistrate, and he is also a master of breaking through five levels. As a result, his nephew was almost forced to death. His own father and son did not dare to fart in front of a tax collector. He was about to starve to death at any time. I feel like my nephew's mother is a direct descendant of one of the largest families in the area. I don't know what to say. Isn't this the county magistrate's son who works as a manure collector? My nephew is being fed and asked for money every day by an ordinary civil servant in the local tax department, and my old father is refused admission by the local hospital. Do you think it's reasonable? Even Bao Qingtian's relatives wouldn't have lived that miserable life, right?

For a newbie, the writing is barely okay. There are also many problems. I can't help but complain about a few points. Personally, I think it's a bit weak and overpowering. Knowing how to practice and match resources and then using time will have the best effect. I know that medicinal materials can be used for medicinal baths. The mountains are full of medicinal materials. If you don't collect them, you will waste your time and develop a hard liver. The effect of the almost paranoid archery is not very good. I was almost knocked off by a kidnapper in the middle and collapsed in the middle, so I won't complain. Later, I learned that melee combat is my weak point, but I just put it off and didn't change it. I barely practiced sword skills and it was just a matter of time. I also used a broken hatchet as a knife. I went to the latest chapter to suppress the bandits. My archery skills are only one-shot and one-shot and breath-holding. Continuous arrows. Rapid fire. Scattering. Ability such as farsightedness is a person who doesn't have the core of being a sage in front of others. He looks like a genius. It looks like Gou Daoliu. What the fourth uncle wrote is also inexplicable and wonderful. The life trajectory of the original Jiang family, the memory of the original person, the Jiang family's self-perception, and the surrounding people's perception and attitude towards the Jiang family are all too inconsistent and too abrupt. It feels like the character was added on a whim to arrange the plot behind it.

When this relative is arrested, he sheds tears and wants to listen to what the other person says? Li Yunlong's wife didn't listen to Little Japan when she was arrested.

The front part is okay, but the back part is really lazy. Brainless, irrational, emotional and childish 🙂

The protagonist's talent and cultivation speed are seriously mismatched. He has cultivated something in 100 years. Before, it can be said that his family was poor and he could only drink porridge slowly. Now that he has become Master Liu, do he still drink porridge? ?

Later, when you have a horse, you can learn mounted archery... Then there is the left and right bow shooting technique that can hold a bow with both hands and shoot arrows. This thing has little effect in rifle shooting, but it is very important in mounted archery... After that, it is almost juggling, but it can also be used in certain situations. It is used for emergencies in emergencies, using your feet instead of your hands to draw a bow and shoot arrows... Finally, it is a combination of different skills, such as four arrows in one hand (four arrows held between five fingers) + ten arrows in a row... As for accuracy, I have been able to hit the flying target while running. If you are an eagle, the next step is to kill two birds with one stone while riding on horseback... If you can do these, then it is basically the pinnacle of mortal archery. Subsequent improvements should be combined with spells... For example, making the arrows shot invisible The art... The art of locking the enemy's energy before shooting, and the arrow actively chasing the enemy after shooting... The art of continuing to control the arrow after it is shot, modifying the arrow shooting trajectory, and guiding the arrow to shoot... One arrow shooting It is a technique that can actively transform into multiple arrows... The most critical thing is the attack spells with various attributes such as ice, fire, thunder, etc. That are attached to the arrows and erupt after hitting the target... Only when shooting, you no longer rely on the sharp edge of the arrows. To kill the enemy, it is possible to replace the arrows with small, easy-to-carry projectiles... As for the material, it is naturally necessary to design a material similar to the Western fantasy mithril, which is strong and suitable for enchanting. This can effectively explain why it is a silver bullet instead of a cheap iron bullet. Bullets... Of course, if this silver bullet is not made of physical materials at all, but condensed with its own strength, then it would be better. There is no need to consider the issue of material consumption... In addition, is it possible to adjust the archery level? Previously, level 4 was 100. Penetrating the Yang with one step, and then upgrading to level 10 just adds a breath-containing technique. Is it possible to change it to level 4, piercing the Yang with a hundred steps, condensing the breath at level 5, and then upgrade again to master various archery skills before reaching level 10? Of course, if it really needs to be changed, there will be too many modifications...

🤔️Hey... The slow heating is too slow. The fire has gone out and it hasn't started to heat up yet. Brother, you are not a tomato. You have to pay to read this book.

Intelligent writing, easy to read without any brains

Good-looking, Gouhusband will slowly become a real Erlang Shen. He doesn't want a heroine, come on! ! !

When you become a warrior in Chapter 83, you will be strong enough to lift 2,000 kilograms of stone locks, which means you can lift a ton... When you break through to the second level in Chapter 106, your body will be a hundred times that of when you first become a warrior, which means you should be able to lift a hundred tons... After nine refinements and nine turns, in Chapter 161, when the fifth turn is upgraded to the eighth turn, it is said that the strength is dozens of times stronger than the fifth turn... Now I have opened the blood sea of 300,000 miles, and I have also opened the magical power of three heads and six arms. According to Chapter 175, after opening the three heads and six arms, the physical strength has increased more than dozens of times... In Chapter 176, it is said that the physical strength has matched the six realms... In the end, the strength only exceeded Wanjun? Even if you set the average week to be a thousand catties, Wanjun is only 5,000 tons? ! Even after you broke into the second realm, your strength has not improved at all. Just relying on the dozens of times of physical strengthening brought by the three heads and six arms should have this strength? Emotions, your nine refinements and nine turns, driving three hundred thousand miles of blood sea, have not brought any improvement at all? Even if the improvement rate of each of your realms is a hundred times as high as the first realm to the second realm (the improvement rate of the subsequent realms will not be as good as the previous realm, right?), The sixth realm should have at least tens of billions of tons of power... The destructive power setting is obviously not weak. One sword can cut off mountains, and one sword energy can plow down most of the county. How come the power setting is so low?

The emotional scenes with the master are a bit jarring. It's not that we can't get close to each other, but it's too boring. He's like a child being pampered by everyone. I even shuddered when I saw it 🤤

I originally read your book because you updated a lot, but then you started to show off, so what else should I read?

Just like this, it's better not to be an Erlang God, but to be a Dog God 🙂

It feels like it's beginning to overwhelm my realm, and I won't use it for hundreds of years, haha

There must be no female protagonist! ! ! Otherwise, I really can't watch it.

I haven't watched it for so long, and it hasn't been updated for two months. Is it really a eunuch?

What's going on? I have collected 22 chapters before. When I read the book, there is no red dot mark for updates. When I open it, it says that the previously read chapters cannot be found. Does the author want to drastically rewrite it or is it a eunuch?

It looks good later on, if you survive the early stage it will be a good experience

Many people write about this theme, let me see what you can write that is different 😁😁 Actually, I quite like bows and arrows, but many novels on this theme end up returning to other weapons. It's not impossible, it's just too common.

The writing is okay so far, and I will continue to subscribe as long as I am not a supervisor.

Is this a eunuch? No update for so long?

It's pretty good writing so far.

The author's writing is quite good but there are too few updates