One Person: Start by Joining the Company

The writing is not good, and the protagonist makes a lot of complaints and nonsense. The characters are poorly portrayed, the plot setting and rhythm are poorly controlled, and there is a serious sense of fragmentation. To put it simply, it is a diaosi protagonist written by a diaosi, which is uncomfortable and embarrassing to watch.

I have a suggestion, make a distinction between the inner drama and the spoken one, otherwise it will feel weird.

The writing is too confusing and the reading experience is not good. It needs improvement.