In Konoha, Ashura Chakra Drops at the Beginning

I don't know when it started, there are a group of harem writers who come to instruct others not to let go of the harem or even ask for a harem without a heroine. If you don't like to read a harem, just read a story without a heroine. How come I haven't seen stories without a heroine that ask others not to write about a harem without a heroine?

First of all, you must have the bug-level recovery ability to exercise intensely for twelve hours one day and repeat it the next day. Secondly, you must have the bug-level perseverance to push past your physical limits every day. Third, open the Eight Gates of Dunjia = Say goodbye to Ninjutsu and Illusion. Fourth, the upper limit is too low. Without plot killing, the damage of the Eight Gate Dunjia to the Six Paths level is basically zero. The best you can do is play Super Shadow, and the winning rate is not high. (Against Eternal Madara, there is a high probability that the eight gates will be defeated before the eight gates are opened, and even if the eight gates are opened, at most one Yixie life will be exchanged; against Hashirama, it may be exchanged for one, or it may not be exchanged, and it is generally less than or equal to; against Nagato, there is a lack of perception ability, there is a high probability that the eight gates will be exhausted after defeating Pain, and there is a small probability of finding the main body and one exchange for one) There is no guarantee of a sure win against some strong shadows with special abilities. (Sage Mode + Jiraiya of Counter-Psychic; Betsutenjin + Tsukuyomi + Izanami's Itachi; Hashirama Cell + Kamui's Obito; Flying Thunder God's Second and Fourth Generations) Fifth, the restrictions are too great. When you encounter someone who doesn't fight for the front, you can open the eight doors to escape directly, Counter-Psychic, Kamui, Flying Thunder God, Izanagi... There are too many ways to avoid it. In the final analysis, this is a specific trick that Kishimoto specially opened for Kai. Any protagonist who has a trick who plays this thing is mentally ill.

Except for the explosion of Asura Chakra in the beginning of the competition with Naruto, he did not take the initiative to discuss with them later, and just waited for the competition arranged by the school. That's all for Naruto, what happened to Sasuke? Is it that risky to be alone after the genocide is wiped out? Compared with the harvest of Indra Chakra, it is not a risk at all, not to mention other bloodstained families and various secret techniques. You will not learn from each other. After graduation, you will not have so much time and reason. It is not like this to suppress the protagonist.

The reason why he didn't become Hokage as a daimyo was because he didn't want to manage. Then you want to be Mao's Hokage? You wouldn't think that the Daimyo's workload is greater than that of the Hokage, right?

This book is getting worse and worse as it is written. What is the author trying to do? Nagato's reincarnation eye-absorbing senjutsu is not a big deal. Have you ever watched Naruto?

The author can just write according to his own ideas. In the harem running novel, he cannot shout about opening the harem. In the running pure love novel, he shouts about opening the harem. What kind of brain circuit do these people have? At the very least, they can't filter novels according to their own preferences? Still deliberately disgusting

In order to finish it as soon as possible, the author has changed Naruto beyond recognition. Alas, it's a pity. I used to think that this book was really good. I even suspected that this book was indeed plagiarized by the author. I saw a Naruto fanfic some time ago. The main plot is very similar to this one, but the use of golden fingers is different. This outline was written by the author on other novel websites in the early years. Probably the eunuch has not written it. Later I'm going to rewrite it here, but it's later than this book. Then the comment section said that the author may have plagiarized, but the book was published earlier than that one, so it's hard to judge. But the more you write, the worse it gets. You also explain the whole article. It's hard not to make people wonder if you read the eunuch in the first place. You just copied the smooth writing in the previous part. Now you can't copy the bad writing in the later part. You just write it yourself.

I don't recommend having a harem, it's boring

The title of this book should be called, People in Konoha: Being a Scumbag at the Beginning

The plot is okay, it's a standard Hokage harem, and it's not mindless. There is no big problem with the plot. The only drawback is that the eight gates are too much boasted. The protagonist has a fairy body, S-level water escape, ice shield, one-hand seal, Asura chakra, three magatama sharingan, and has used shadow clones to practice Taijutsu for 6 years. I saw Xiao Li who opened the 5th gate. , It feels dangerous and stressful, and it's really a bit difficult to hold on. The protagonist's combat power is sometimes high and sometimes low. It's clearly written before that the three magatama correspond to jonin, and the protagonist's strength is close to that of the shadow. As a result, seeing the teenage Xiao Li will have a sense of urgency. If it is written like this, doesn't Xiao Li think he is a jounin? Too exaggerated

🙂 I was deceived and thought I was trying to practice writing. As a result, she started to have a harem without even having a career. Started when I was only 6 years old. It really doesn't matter if I have a harem or not, I still like to focus on my career and have a harem on the side. If you have no career and no strength, you will start to think about women and other harems. This will make me unable to feel the shining point of the protagonist. Instead, I feel that the male protagonist is a loser.

The emperor of the ninja world should not be a village chief. You don't think that the workload is calculated according to the position, right?

Suddenly I realized that this book doesn't seem to have the "King of Hokage", it's not the authentic Naruto 😁

I don't hate harems, but I am disgusted that more than 50% of the whole story is about romance.

It was originally good, but unfortunately there were too many women, so it was boring.

The latest one keeps talking about progress, but at first glance the extent is the same as that of the clown. Absorbing stones can heal wounds within a few hours. In Immortal mode, you can only absorb stones. Even if you have an Immortal body, you can't feel the natural energy. Natural energy Jiraiya and Minato Kabuto can do it without the immortal human body, but the protagonist just can't. You have said yourself that you can use wood clones in just a few days to develop chakra properties and blood successor limits. If you use a thousand wood clones in the ninja world for so long, you can eliminate blood successors and create a lot of blood successor limits, even if you don't directly snare the blood successors. Just come up with a fusion ninjutsu that will soon be like the third generation.

The protagonist has no brains. At the age of 6, he lost Asura Chakra by exchanging ideas with Naruto. Generally speaking, normal people should explore the system mechanism first. If something can be exploded later, something that is uncertain about whether it has side effects should be left alone or used as a trump card. Then... The protagonist doesn't care about the system mechanism and directly bets that Asura's chakra does not have Asura's will or that it has will but cannot affect him... He is really not afraid that he will be affected and become someone else, right? In short, the beginning is a bit toxic, and I haven't read the rest yet. If I can survive this wave of toxicity, I will come back to comment on the rest...

Let's put it this way, I have been reading novels for almost ten years. Basically, writing single-woman novels with poor writing skills relies on my own love and persistence, or fans of the subject matter, and there are no single-woman fans to support them all the time. But as long as your harem writing is bad and doesn't have any serious flaws, there will always be a group of LSPs to support it, and the same writing situation will always be better. Only those great writers who are good at writing will not care about the heroine, because the plot they write is exciting, but sometimes writing a heroine will delay the plot. But I've already written about fan fiction, and there's nothing to write about.

All the interactions with the female characters are very boring. They are basically carved out of the same mold. The dialogues and expressions are very dry. There is no way to connect these female characters with the original work. They are more like passers-by with the same names. Regarding the writing issue, I suggest you write more about combat strength. The main problem is not that there are two authors, it is basically the same. As for the harem, if you can't write a single female character well and still write a lot of them, the more you write, the less sense of existence you will have, and all these contents will be very boring. The plot is pretty good, but the details are really poor.

I really hate people with Aizen's character. He has a fake smile and has no personality at all. He just looks for women and friends for his own purposes. Is this a good fanfic?