Family Cultivation of Immortality: I Use Incense to Create Immortality in the Underworld

Father, grandfather, great-grandfather... Taizu, why don't you have Tai Nai? Have you forgotten Tai Nai?

There are too many supporting roles, more than the main characters! That's putting the cart before the horse. The writing is okay and seems smooth, but you've lost the protagonist.

No, it's been ten days since I stopped updating. Can you recommend me a daily guide 🙂

I stopped updating for ten days and still pushed it back? Lead poison!

Good idea. It's a pity that there is no distinction between priorities, the scenes change too quickly, and the story is a bit fragmented. It's like someone taking a video and constantly changing the camera, making the narrative incoherent.

Come on, there is finally a family story written outside the framework of Xuanjianwen. It's great!

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but there are a lot of new things, so it's not very suitable for novices.

It's quite an innovative novel, but it's confusing to see this realm. The traditional Qi training and foundation-building Zifu golden elixir would be so good.

This is cool. Send the outline and take a look.