Naruto: Who Made Him a Ninja?

Forcibly add some bucket numbers, a little of this and a little of that. I don't understand the essence of the dark blue plus point system, and lacks exciting points. The points acquisition limit and usage range should be set well. Leveling up seems too rigid. According to this system setting, if you fully increase your physical fitness in the mid-term, you will almost be able to reach normal death.

Hanging sheep's heads and selling dog meat! Eunuch, this author especially likes to write about many women, constantly teasing them, and then only one female protagonist! Every time a woman writes something about a woman, she makes you think she is the heroine, and then she suddenly stops talking and starts the next one. This is the case with the previous two books. I only read a little bit of both of them. I think it's okay to have a single heroine and multiple heroines, but if you're trying to fool people, it's a bit too much.

In the last book, Mikoto was used as a gimmick. After finishing, I did nothing.

Kindness! Add some overall physical fitness, why not keep adding more. How can I add eleven after so many years, and my offensive and defensive resistance will be restored. The ninja who can fight is called daddy. The curse seal is based on chakra, how can it take effect if you don't have chakra.

The difficulty of choosing this time is a bit too high. Naruto's bloodline is supreme, and the upper limit of civilian birth is too low. Akai, Hiruzen and Jiraiya are already at their limit. Unless they eat chakra fruit, it will be difficult to break the upper limit of shadow level. You can't always use system rewards as an excuse, otherwise it will become a brainless diversion. Perhaps it would be more reasonable to say that the protagonist's family is a branch of Uzumaki or Senju. For pure mortals, Onoki and Hiruzen are the limit, and Akai's eight gates are almost the upper limit.

He flirts with many beauties from the ninja world! But in the end they were all given away! Really poisonous! Send a girl! Even the heroine from the beginning was given away! Fw green turtle!

Do I still need to add chakra? As your physical fitness improves, won't chakra naturally improve?

No, what does the protagonist say about Danzo? Treating others as mentally retarded?

Why do you stare at a second-generation character created by a game every day? There is no original work about Uchiha Hikari. Why do you keep writing about her? According to the plot of the game, it is completely impossible to review at that time. There is no need to write it. Moreover, the game also allows him to return to his original timeline.

I advise you not to write it randomly. The power of Wood Escape is already very clear. It is the ultimate Yang Escape. If there aren't enough extreme Yang Releases, that would be Yamato

It's just right for Hokage Kishimoto's meal, and it's just disgusting. Writing a book to express contempt for Itachi? Have you clearly understood the plot of Naruto? ? Itachi slaughtered the village because the Uchiha wanted to rebel. The task Danzo gave Itachi was either to exterminate all the Uchiha clan, or Itachi could complete the task of exterminating the clan and keep his brother.

Are there any fans who deliberately approach Naruto these days? The protagonist is still ANBU, that is the Nine-Tailed Jinchuuriki! Did the protagonist just jump in without thinking?

I have the whole diaosi mentality all day long, and I don't understand whether you wrote this protagonist to disgust people or to attract more diaosi people.

Why does the protagonist become a hexagonal warrior with limited resources (points)? It feels very unreasonable. If you play like this, you are at best a jounin with many tricks. Isn't it good to use the same points to push one or two points to the limit to become a film level? Don't all the movies of the original work focus on one path like this?

Should the protagonist dig out Hikari Uchiha from the soil when he has the chance?

Now the plot is dragged out purely for the sake of water. With such a level of combat power, Danzo is still holding on to death. There is no need to watch the rest of the story. It is all meaningless water content.

I admit that it is true that these three abilities can reach the top and become Otsutsuki, but they are all transformed into civilians, and they are still integrated with wood escape? Next, will the eyes have to mutate as the level of Yin Escape increases? Wooden style can indeed gain a reputation in Konoha, but can't it be combined with a style of art that is not available in Hokage? There are seven attributes in Naruto, but there are many Blood Successor Snares, such as Sharing Ash Bones, Tian Zhongzhong, etc. It shows that what is fused first and then what is fused are different among the seven attributes. Even the escape techniques produced by fusion are different with different proportions of the two attributes. For example, the two attributes of water and earth are mainly water and fused with earth. , Mainly combining earth with water, as well as balanced interweaving and fusion, can create a kind of escape technique. It has to be wood escape. The main reason is that there are too many such articles. Some protagonists become Ōtsutsuki and have pupil skills. The blood successor snares are the same as other Ōtsutsuki. The sky and the sky are all the same, and there is no imagination. Don't spray if you don't like it!

The old-fashioned plot, the old-fashioned system, the old-fashioned common people's starting point!

Damn it, can you stop being so cool? It's just that bad money is interesting.

Why are you all so obsessed with Mu Dun? A lot of fanfics are like this, disgusting ones

Words like blinked and raised eyebrows appear repeatedly. It's so disgusting.

Isn't this a parody of the novel about the working class? 🙂

Can you please stop being so procrastinating? You can obviously write well, but writing like this just for the sake of word count is really disgusting.

I came here because I saw the Uchiha going too far. It's true that there are no high-quality products, and stock trading should be cool. It was written when I was 24 years old. The previous version had everything written out, but Ipshiki and other Otsutsuki were not included.

In Naruto, if you want to be a eunuch or a savior, Chun Chun is sick. Isn't it reasonable to not play more female characters?

The writing is good, but I like the single/no heroine. I don't quite understand the situation that cannot be accepted as long as it is not a harem or a CCB-driven text. It feels like I have gone back twenty years ago.

After watching it, it was okay. The scapegoating was done well, the plot logic was okay, and the characters were well developed.

To be honest, this book is pretty good

When will the new book be released? It's been half a year and you still haven't prepared the outline?

It makes me feel sick to my stomach. Please make sure you are writing a hot-blooded comic.