Clear the Game Early, Then Enter the Horror Game

I haven't read it yet, but I ordered a chapter to review. How can I let the seedlings be read freely and bully the author and readers at the same time 😡

Feel free to delete comments, but I hope the author will listen. I will give it a try and give it up. As the title states, especially the copy of Yelu, it is not fun at all. It is just watching the protagonist pretend to be B, but the pretending is not good. The reward of the copy is that I have forgotten it now. The whole copy is about what the protagonist did, and then the teammates said nb. The protagonist commanded the teammates to do something, and the teammates listened honestly. The protagonist is in the same plot as the multi-game player, and the background story of the dungeon is not explained clearly. It would be OK if the snowy mountain section could describe a specific atmosphere and the appearance of the monsters, but the problem is that there is no such thing. The appearance of the monsters is mentioned in one stroke, what they did is mentioned in one stroke, what they got is mentioned in one stroke, and there are no emotional ups and downs at all. The whole thing is inexplicable. I don't understand the purpose of arranging this interlude. I spend so much time writing it, and then the plot inside is meaningless and tasteless. I don't understand the meaning of putting this paragraph here at all. If you just want to strengthen the protagonist with multiple hooks, then one or two thousand words will definitely be enough. If you talk about expanding the world view, then there are only a few sentences about this aspect, which is really incomprehensible. The biggest problem now is that the plot is very boring. It was said that it will be the end of the world, but then there is nothing else. The dungeon that said it will become more difficult has not changed. The villains have a pitiful presence. They have no meaning except highlighting the waste of teammates. Moreover, the scenes where the protagonist defeats the villain or tricks the villain are not written at all, and it feels like someone who does not want to be locked up. The friendly forces value the protagonist and want him to join the round table. It makes no sense. I can't see that these friendly forces have any purpose other than atm. Others are all friendly forces who brag about the protagonist every day. It's boring. There is no plot that provides emotional value at all. Everyone and all the characters are included. The protagonist's sense of existence is very low. Reading this book is like reading an outline. It just fills up the word count with a bunch of nonsense that will be forgotten after reading it. If it continues like this, it will be really useless. Of course, if it is written by a gunman, just pretend that I didn't say anything. Anyway, I will give up after a few days of reading. You'd better change it quickly. Fewer people will read the recent update.

It's not satisfactory, the plot is almost enjoyable, the protagonist is a little bit like the Virgin, but there are no unnecessary scenes after saving people, so it's not unpleasant.

The introduction is too bad, as is the title of the book. Please change the introduction and make it more interesting. Your book will definitely have more than this score. Come on! Have more confidence in yourself. From the perspective of a ten-year-old bookworm, the progress is still obvious.

Is there always a copy behind the live broadcast settings, or is it abandoned? It's too poisonous 😅

The content of the Poisonous Virgin is so heartfelt to players who destroy the variables that destroy their own arrangements. Do you really think that the game is paradise? This is a thriller game. The kind that kills people at every turn, and the protagonist doesn't have any cheats on how to survive. The author just adjusts it however he wants, regardless of whether others can read it or not.

No matter what game, it's already in public beta, yet you still need to be invited to qualify.

It doesn't matter if you go to your mom to stream, it's still a live stream 😒. It's still acceptable alone. Live streaming plus go to your mom. . . Slipped away

My writing style is not good, but I designed this kind of set-within-a-set 😥 If I do this, I will just skip ordering.

What I want to know most is that the first dungeon settled for 16,000, 10,000 for training, and a dozen or so points were sold, leaving 3,000 at the end. Where to spend the other 3,000? Also, why doesn't the protagonist know where to refill the gun? (Chapter 42) Didn't the item introduction provide a path?