The Condor: Yang Guo in His Twilight Years, Returns to His Youth

It's only 6 chapters🐔? Wasted investment

Finally someone writes about the divine sculpture, come on

Although Yang Guo has a beauty, there is no confidante. Gongsun Lu'e died, and Yang Guo even forgot to collect the body. Cheng Ying and Lu Wushuang have not seen each other for sixteen years. Jiaxing and Lin'an are only less than a hundred miles apart. After the ending of Guo Xiang's sculpture, he avoided seeing her for twenty-four years. Yang Guo's confidante... It's okay to talk about a confidante, but it's outrageous to have a confidant. He, Yang Guo, doesn't even know himself, let alone others.

The setting is quite interesting, and the writing is okay. I hope the author will stick with it until it is released on the shelves. Recently, there is a book shortage. Most of the books on this subject I have read are quite toxic. This one is okay, but the plot is a bit bland. I hope the author can design the plot with more twists and turns.

The writing is still good, with a lot of changes that are difficult to reconcile, and it is quite refreshing. However, the setting of rebirth is a bit incompetent, and it is not as good as the young Yang Guo gaining future memories or the reader traveling through time. It is true that judging from his interactions with Guo Xiang, even middle-aged Yang Guo is not less arrogant, but at this period Yang Guo is already very good in both Qi-nurturing skills and human sophistication. This can be seen from the plot of the ghost in a cave in Xishan and the respect for him by both good and evil masters in the world. Apart from Xiao Longnu, there was basically nothing that could make him happy or sad. If Yang Guo was really reborn, he might be disgusted with Guo Fu and the people of the Quanzhen Sect, but he would definitely not be so violent. After all, he had a deep enough understanding of them in his previous life. He would just shout and kill if there was no reason to mediate (except for Zhao Zhijing and Zhen Zhibing). His various psychological activities would not be so childish, and he would not have a heroic demeanor at all. Middle-aged Yang Guo is a wild and uninhibited Condor Hero, not a wanton self-proclaimed hero. When I saw the words "Don't take me seriously as the Condor Hero", I felt out of touch, and felt a little disfavored by Yang Guo. (Jin Yong likes Qiao Feng and Yang Guo the most, Guo Jing is too upright), and it goes without saying that Yang Guo valued Xiao Longnu at the end of his life. There is also "at the foot of Zhongnan Mountain, the tomb of the living dead, the Condor Heroes and the couple, extinct", even if he wants to change something in his life again. If he doesn't want to choose to live in seclusion, he will definitely prioritize Ouyang Feng and Xiao Longnu (Little Dragon Girl was very afraid of going down the mountain in the early days), and even Guo Jing may not care. After all, he has not set foot in Xiangyang City in sixteen years. Although he still respects Guo Jing, he still has a grudge. In short, if there is no rebirth setting, it would be fun to watch (I was forced to watch it as the young Yang Guo), and there are many things I want to complain about. This is the best Yang Guo fanfic I have ever seen. First of all, the author's writing is very good, not at the level of a noob; secondly, the character's personality is close to the original work; and finally, it is a rebirth novel, which is neither time travel nor system. No matter how the soul travels or the system is written, it will be interesting. Some suggestions for the author, 1. Yang Guo does not need to die of old age and be reborn. This is too eye-opening. You can consider rebirth after breaking off his arm. 2. Expand the content of the original work. Fans who choose to read Jin Yong's novels will not be afraid of you as long as your writing is exciting. Write more side plots. I gave up the book in the later period. It's not that your writing is not good, but that after leaving the original work, I have better choices. 3. The Divine Eagle is the most difficult to understand in Jin Yong's works. Various tragic characters, whether it is Guo Fu or the Cheng Lu sisters, can have emotional scenes with Yang Guo. Although Yang Guo only loves Xiao Longnu, it does not affect other people's love for Yang Guo. You can design more plots between Yang Guo and them to get acquainted. , Mutual acquaintance, and the process of unrequited love, because Xiao Longnu is destined, so as long as they are together, there will be no emotional drama in this book. In fact, everyone yearns for and awes Yang Long's pure love, but more readers are greedy and selfish, so even though it is a single female protagonist, you can be ambiguous and touch the readers' heartstrings. And you can develop and test the end of the story, which not only maintains the single female protagonist, but also gives readers room for imagination. After all, Yang Guo is not the only one who has trouble with the Condor Heroes. Five stars are given and I wish the author good results.