The American Revolution: Fully Unlocked

It's not bad, but I think the author still needs to work on the pacing of the plot. Currently, the main conflict revolves around Gloria. In the early stages, the protagonist's bodyguards are basically useless, and there are always people trying to target him. The author describes Gloria as repeatedly trying to control the protagonist and gain leverage over him.

Chinese is actually not a difficult language to learn. Saying that Chinese is difficult to learn is purely a stereotype and prejudice, or simply because too few people learn it. Subjectifying the issue of learning Chinese is, to some extent, due to a historical inferiority complex.

After reading the part where the protagonist trains his troops, I have a suggestion for the author. Of course, the author may choose not to accept it. There is no need to create a so-called People's Liberation Army; it is unnecessary, or rather, not everyone needs to become a high-quality soldier.

There's a reason for the poor performance. They're almost under siege by a large army, yet they still have time to create drama. They wrote about the conflicts but failed to convey the protagonist's sense of urgency or plan. Either don't write about the conflicts and just let the story unfold slowly.

I mean, many of the NPCs' inner thoughts in the show are so out of place. Take Hans, for example, an ordinary peasant. In an era when Prussian line infantry didn't even have live-fire training, and British cavalry only had 30-40 rounds of live ammunition per year, he'd only trained in drill and posture for a few days before starting to wonder why they weren't doing target practice. Why didn't he think about sniping? Or is he actually a modern college student who time-traveled?

The protagonist has no personal superpowers, so he can only kiss and hug the female characters, and can't even have sex with them. When will this be resolved?

To what extent has land consolidation reached? Will the lower classes be able to live well? 😥

In mathematics, the advancements were phenomenal. It's fair to say that differential calculus was accelerated by at least 120 years, if you were to attribute it to Newton. However, Newton's contribution to calculus was merely opening the door; the analytical theory was developed by the French.

North America can't do without Coca-Cola, just as the West can't do without Jerusalem. So when will our Coca-Cola make its debut? 🤔

Overall it's alright, but the details always fall short. Many parts are written awkwardly. For example, it describes a scalpel cutting through iron like mud. How can such a small piece of tissue cut through iron like mud? Was it because it was written in too much of a hurry, so it was just sloppy?