Etc! You Are Not Allowed to Take Away My Rags!

The protagonist is not abstract enough, almost meaningless

This introduction, this setting, a sexual reversion of "The Legend of Heroic Alice's Social Death"?

Mark, hang the bookshelf first to see the effect.

It's so terrible. It's only 20,000 words, and it was sacrificed before the buds even sprouted.

Why do some authors always write Western fantasy themes and write Chinese names under the Western fantasy background, names of people, and place names? To enhance the sense of substitution? No, I just feel it is awkward. Can you find a popular Western fantasy-themed protagonist with a domestic name on the Qidian popularity list? No, this is as outrageous as Patrolman MacArthur going to Tongfu Inn and asking for a piece of borscht from Mike, eating it with a baguette, and then going on patrol in Fangshi. Moreover, the name Xiao He 😒 is even more dramatic.

According to the setting that the worse the items are, the better their properties are. Wouldn't it be possible to ascend directly by jumping into the septic tank?

There's no need to say that the protagonist's shabby one will add abilities. But if you want the tattered one, you can't sell the good stuff if you can't use it? Don't you want to live with gold coins? He just can't equip it for his own use. The protagonist in the end is a fool and doesn't want all the good stuff.

Reminds me of "What bad thoughts do I have" I watched a long time ago, the genre is the same, but cut 🙂

Starting point, witness every cyber tombstone

No, I'm not a buddy. It's been 11 days and I'm still pushing it.

Not dead, but still able to induce poison

Although these tattered bonuses make the protagonist very strong, they are still tattered in nature. For example, is it possible for the protagonist to be fine when facing a fire spell, but all the tattered equipment on his body will be burned away, and then he will wait to die?

Why are there always male protagonists with Chinese names in Western Fantasy?

It can be seen that the author has great ideas, but the overall direction of the story is too rushed. Although the characterization of the characters is very clear, the length is too short. Various settings are introduced too quickly. It can even be said that in order to understand the direction of the plot, the general settings, and various grooves require a threshold. The threshold is very high. It means that a little story is discovered in a large number of jokes and settings. However, even so, it is quite interesting, but I doubt whether I can maintain the level of writing.

I am Shennong, this is a simple essay written by Ben Jixing

Insert the ward, kick me if it's on the shelf or in the grave.

Which book was the last one sacrificed by Crow and Xixi at the same time? It seems to be over, right? You only have 40,000 words, so just put it on the bookshelf and eat dust!