Honghuang: Senior Brother Chanjiao, I Am Guangchengzi

It's well written, I just hope it doesn't overly vilify Jie Jiao. Because I have read many ancient novels, the protagonists are all in the Jie sect, so it is normal to dislike and be hostile. However, since the Three Pure Ones have not become saints, there is no need for the disciples to be incompatible with each other.

The plot will not be about the human saint master again, and then Zixiao Palace listens to the sermon, seizes the treasure and money, and then deceives the Western sect.

If it were called Guangzhi, ten times more people would see it 🙂

The writing is good, and it almost reveals the true Jie Jiao. The Honghuang novels have one characteristic in the starting point, that is, they must despise the Jie Jiao and praise the Jie Jiao, as if Jie Jiao is the best place in the world and gathers heroes from all walks of life. However, if you really read the original work of Fengshen, you will know how evil and terrifying Jie Jie is. Even the so-called Yuanshi Tianzun, who has the final calculation, can be regarded as a true moral immortal in the Jie Sect. Even the leader of the Tongtian Sect doesn't care about the disciples of the Jie Sect. He talks about you beasts

The writing is very good, but the main character is not very likable.

Yuan suppressed his own brothers. As a result, his disciples were scattered, nearly half of them apostatized, and the orthodoxy was almost extinct! When the three brothers were together, they suppressed an era and turned against each other to kill them. If I hadn't had some tricks, they would have been completely ruined!

Looking at the introduction, it looks similar to traditional prehistoric times.

Damn, you monsters are killing humans, looking for treasures, and the protagonist is fighting monsters, is this the case?

Finally, there are those who are not Jie Jiao. The Jie Jiao people are all sick of seeing them. There are only a few Jie Jiao people with good character. The others do nothing but commit murder and arson and brag about it every day.

The protagonist is described like a piece of shit.

The first part is pretty good, but the later parts become duller and boring. It's so boring.

In Fengshen, Guangchengzi is not a senior brother. Each of the twelve Immortals of Yuxu has an average of 1,500 years of Taoism. Among the second-generation disciples of the Chanjie Sect, they are much younger than Shiji Shitianjun and others. They may not even be direct disciples. The twelve of them are opening caves outside. The one who is the benchmark for the four direct disciples of Tongtian Cult is Anji. Immortal Old Man, Ran Deng is the benchmark for Zhao Gongming. Ran Deng Taoist in Fengshenyan is only a disciple of Yuan Shi Tian Zun, not a deputy leader, and because of his age, he is called the teacher by the twelve immortals. In any case, this senior brother cannot be Guang Chengzi. The most likely direct disciple is Nanji Xian Weng, who has been accompanying Yuan Shi Tian Zun.

In Journey to the West, Guangchengzi was transformed by Taishang Taozu

You can kill a few outer disciples, and even if you are punished by Tongtian in the end, your life will not be in danger 🤐 I don't understand why you always write about the conflict of interpretation. From the beginning, I thought that there are no fools who can succeed in becoming a disciple. There are so many people in the prehistoric era, how come they are the only ones who succeeded in becoming a disciple? Everyone knows that Tongtian has a teaching without distinction, why can't others do the same? Besides, are there tens of thousands of immortals who are famous for the Jiejiao? No, there are only a hundred or ten people in total, how can you be so stupid?

I've read about ten chapters. First of all, the writing style of this book is average. Then, comes the main event. Here I will not discuss the subjective issue of who is right or wrong between the two religions, but will only talk about some objective aspects: There are very few characters who write about the protagonists of the Chan religion. I think there are the following reasons (based on prehistoric novels). 1. The result of Jiejiao is a tragedy, and Tongtian's "image" is an incompetent tragic hero 2. Jiejiao's teachings of "there is no distinction between teachings" are more relevant to the general public 3. As far as the enshrinement of gods is concerned, there are many behaviors of Chanjiao that cannot be put on the table. For example, using the big to bully the small, using the crowd to bully the few, disciples replacing the tribulation, intercepting the sect and catching but not killing, the sect only kills but not arrests, Yuanshi is partial, Ran Deng is shameless, unites with outsiders to bully the brothers and even leads the wolf into the house, etc. 4. Others, such as the title of god is the slaying of the twelve golden immortals of the sect, etc. To summarize the above 4 points: story. From a story point of view, it is much easier to write with a Jie Jiao disciple as the protagonist, and it is more easily accepted by the general public. For example: 1. The Zhuxian Sword Array cannot suppress luck, so you have to find treasures that can suppress it 2. Although the divine way is lower than the immortal way in the prehistoric world view, the plot after becoming a god, whether it is about Journey to the West, Shu Mountain, White Snake, Liaozhai or even the Endless Plane, the importance of heaven is self-evident, so the gods of heaven Here comes the role 3. The pressure of becoming a god as the driving force for the protagonist's progress, or to be precise as the main story line in the first half of the novel, will make the novel more three-dimensional and easier to write Wait a minute Speaking of this book, I haven't read the back yet, but I am thinking about how the author should write that the protagonist is in the god. After thinking about it, I estimate that it will be like this: mainly "Chantian", which means that the protagonist thinks that everyone who intercepts the teachings deserves death, and "covers" for his side to use some unseemly methods. I think it should be like this, otherwise the method of "explaining the sky" would not have been repeatedly emphasized and explained in the previous ten or so chapters I have read. As far as the writing method is concerned, I personally think there is no problem, but it may screen out most readers... And the result of teaching two or three big kittens after becoming a god is not easy to get back... This reminds me of many similar "In the Name of the People" fan novels that have become popular recently. Basically, the protagonist is Qi Tongwei. When I think about it, the two are really similar. Like... Honghuang novels are actually fan fictions: most of the Honghuang novels take the disciples of Jiejiao as the protagonist, just like Qi Tongwei as the protagonist, this book seems to have Hou Liangping as the protagonist, and the way of elucidating the sky is like Hou Liangping marrying Zhong Xiaoai and then laughing at Qi Tongwei for eating soft food and being a corrupt member who should die...

I haven't read the book. Is there any difference between what is written in the introduction and Fengshen? It's not the past now. It's impossible to write about the Ancient Gods without adding some features!

I don't know why, but the more I look at it later, the more twisted it becomes.

Just read more than a hundred chapters, the rest of it is no different from the original work

Tomato has someone who steals your work called the original disciple, who is exactly the same

These chapters have been getting better and better recently. Come on, it's good to write your own way~

There are so many spiritual treasures at the beginning, what else is there to write about?

There is too much nonsense. Breakthrough Da Luo only describes the breakthrough scene in two or three chapters. He is too good at writing.

Your book is very popular. There is a guy in Tomato who copied your book

It feels like the author has been suppressing the realm for a long time and hasn't moved. So the author wants the protagonist to go all the way to becoming a god, right?

Guangchengzi was one of the first human races created by Nuwa.