Red Mansion: Heir to the Lin Family

😰😰😰 For my taste, I read other Red Mansion novels, licking this and that. I can't save myself, but I also want to save Jia's family, especially some of the ones about Jia Huan's retrograde movement. It's so funny that if Jia Huan got up, I'm afraid he would have died a long time ago.

The entry point of this book is really good. Many Red Mansions have the entry point of joining the imperial examination and joining the army, so the entry point of this book is very novel. When I saw this entry point, I thought of Liu Bang's Zhang Liang, Zhu Yuanzhang's Liu Bowen, and Yongzheng's Wu Sidao. If the author's writing style is deep enough, this book may be popular if he writes about the intrigues well. The shortcomings are also obvious. The author feels very naive when writing garden dramas, and the relationship with the Jia family is too fast. Girl, there are still some questions I don't know how to answer. The author can check the information. If you write about the plot and garden drama, you should be more careful, otherwise there will be a strong sense of fragmentation. Then there are also problems with the background. The author set the background of double days on the same day, which is too strange. He used the backgrounds of Zhu Qizhen and Zhu Qiyu, but when writing, he wrote the emperor too well and the emperor too stupid. It will collapse when written like this. Zhu Qizhen and The political intelligence of the two brothers Zhu Qiyu is not low. Zhu Qizhen can win because Zhu Qiyu has no body and no successor. The author applies and changes the characters here. It will look very strange. The old emperor has an army and he has been a prince for more than 20 years. He also has a certain period of time to prove that he must have people in the court, as well as means and ideas. When he reaches that position, it is not a matter of whether he wants to fight for it. It is impossible for the new emperor to bring the court to the throne. They are all his people. Talents need to grow. When he becomes the emperor and there is a Supreme Emperor above him, he will pay more attention to the rules. Even if he promotes all young people, it is impossible for there to be no old ministers in the court. If the emperor promotes casually and does not follow the rules, there will be a reason for the restoration of the Supreme Emperor. Therefore, this setting is unreasonable. I am still looking forward to this book. I hope the author will write a good conspiracy drama in the Red Mansions and not write it as a novel.

You can compare this to the movie A Good Marriage. Mrs. Wang and Jia Lian and Wang Xifeng discuss exterminating the Lin family. Can Jia Lian tell Mrs. Wang how to stand up to the rules and fight Lin Daiyu to death? No matter how messed up Jia Lian is in the book, he would rather be beaten to death by Jia She than get a fan. He still has a bottom line. Even if Wang Xifeng treats the sisters eighty times in the past?

{"NickName":"Lonely Luoyang","UserId":420791915}How about using this as a character image? Please don't use Chen Xiaoxu, every book is hers

How did Qin deal with this? It's been more than ten chapters, and there has been no action. They have all been sent over, and no one has a name? Qingwen let it go, because it was easy to talk about it because it was a maid, and Renqin was a serious official's wife. Isn't it appropriate to stay here for so many days without knowing anything?

I haven't started reading it yet. The title of the book says that it is Lin Ruhai's heir. I first asked if Daiyu and the protagonist have a pure brother-sister relationship. If not, I won't read it.

Let me talk about my personal opinion. From the words and deeds of the protagonist, it can be seen that the protagonist is not a great and upright good person, but an egoistic person. I like this very much. If it is the Virgin, there will be nothing to see. In terms of character portrayal, there are relatively few group portraits. I don't know if it's because I'm not good at it or if I just deliberately portray them one by one. At present, Qingwen has finished it and started with Qin Keqing and Lin Daiyu. This isn't a big deal, it's a matter of opinion. The characters' words and actions are more in line with their own personalities, which is also good. Let me praise the plot again. At first I thought it was a purely Machiavellian novel, but it turned out that the author was driving in it again. This is quite unexpected. Finally, let's talk about the shortcomings. I forgot which chapter it was. There is one point about returning to Jia's house. Although this is needed for the plot, it still feels a bit uncomfortable and may dissuade many people. There is also the butterfly effect due to the arrival of the protagonist. The personalities of each character will change. This is what it should be, but it feels like it will also discourage some people.

It's a pity that Daiyu brother and sister can't stand it anymore

Will Wang Xifeng accept it? Will Qin Keqing accept it? Will Li Wan accept it?

I beg all the grandfathers who keep books to remember to come back and turn to the latest chapter every Tuesday and pause for 30 seconds. New books require more data. Thank you (❁´ω`❁) I wish everyone a bright future.

Since there are two people, the lame Taoist and the leprous monk, who also have supernatural abilities, the fate of the Jia family has basically been doomed. If Jia Baoyu is really the reincarnation of Shenying's Waiter, then he came down to earth to experience. The Twelve Hairpins have little to do with the protagonist. Even if the protagonist becomes the emperor, there is nothing he can do. After the experience, he will be patted on the butt and become an immortal on the spot. What will happen to the protagonist without cheats?

Which sister Lin do you like?

The most important aspect of an adoptive child in ancient times is that the maternal uncle's side must be present! And my uncle's side also thinks it's appropriate! It's not just that you accept it as your adopted godson, and you don't have to worry about other people!

From the time when it was over 20,000 words to now, it is also on the shelves. I have also recently written a book, which has been submitted to internal investment. I will sign the contract tomorrow. Can I ask for a chapter recommendation + investment?

It's okay, I finished reading it unconsciously

Among the recently added books, Red Mansions is a pretty good book with rigorous logic, which is very good, especially the part about Jia Lian, Mrs. Wang and Wang Xifeng. I just feel that the development of the novel is a bit slow. I only mention the girl in the red mansion at the beginning, and the remaining characters have not yet appeared. Too much garden drama will make me tired, but too little will not retain readers, right?

Take in Jia Mu too

There are big problems with the characters in Dream of Red Mansions. When Daiyu entered Jia's house, she was about six and a half years old and less than seven years old, including the time spent on the road, and Baoyu was about seven years old, less than eight years old. The day after Daiyu entered the house, she heard the Xue Pan case being discussed. But the next year when Jiayu Village tried the Xue Pan case, Xue Pan was fifteen and Baochai was thirteen. How could Baochai be five years older than Baoyu? Similar situations abound: The snow goose brought by Daiyu from Suzhou was ten years old. When Jia Mu saw that "the snow goose was very small, it was like a ball of children", she gave the parrot (later changed to rhododendron by Daiyu) to Daiyu. But according to the content of Chapter 63 of "A Dream of Red Mansions", it can be seen that Xiren was born in the same year as Baochai, Xiangling, Qingwen, etc. Therefore, Xiren is two years older than Baoyu. In this way, Xiren was sent by Jia Mu to be Baoyu's maid when she was less than ten years old. Xueyan was also ten years old, but Jia Mu thought she was very young and childish. Could Xiren not be childish? In addition, Xiangling's age cannot withstand scrutiny. Everyone understands what the eldest maid does, but Baoyu can't be eight years old when she first tries Yun Yanyu, and Xi is ten years old, right? Therefore, Xiren, Qingwen, and Xiangling should be at least a little older. There are many similar unreasonable places. In addition, a group of eight or nine-year-old children come to perform a garden opera. It feels a bit weird. Therefore, in order to make the story more reasonable, the article has been changed. It was three years after Daiyu came to Beijing that she heard about the Xue Pan case, and the Xue family only came to Beijing at that time. Basis: After hearing this, Baoyu came up and said quietly: "You are such a sensible person, don't you even know that 'there should be no estrangement between relatives, and no arrogance before the latter'?" Although I am confused, I understand these two sentences. The first thing is that we are uncles and sisters, and Sister Bao is the second aunt. Sister, in terms of relatives, he is more distant than you. The second thing is, you come first, we two eat at the same table and sleep on the same bed. He has just come here, how can anyone be distant from you for him?" (Baoyu coaxed Daiyu after the Xue family came to Beijing) The timeline of this article begins more than two years after Daiyu came to Beijing and the male protagonist came to Beijing. Jia Lan is 5 years old, Xichun is 6 years old, Jia Huan is 7 years old, Tanchun is 9 years old, Lin Daiyu is 9 years old, Jia Baoyu is 10 years old, Yingchun is 11 years old, Xue Baochai is 12 years old, Qingwen Xiren is 15 years old, Qin Keqing is 17 years old, Wang Xifeng is 19 years old, Lin Jingyun is 19 years old (not crowned), and Jia Lian is 22 years old. If you have different opinions, please leave a message for discussion.

Usually there are articles about older brothers and sisters. . Sister Lin is particularly stupid and ignorant.