Peninsula House of Cards

Similar to Baipao's "I Want to Progress Too Much", both have opened up a new track in the Korean entertainment industry. Now it is not like before. The pure Korean entertainment industry novel market is too niche. It is time for the fourth and fifth generations to live up to the peak era of Korean Wave. This kind of writing is very good, but the author in the group seems to be not very active. Personally, I hope there won't be too many female leads. The current Taeyeon and Seohyun, the potential Yoona and even Baicai are almost the same. Don't turn it into a purely female-promoting article. Four to five female protagonists are enough to support the plot. There are also Shura fields in between. Don't write the amazing opening of the life-death double-travel with Yoona, which feels like a pair of two people in two lives, like the white-shirted one from the Korean city, and turned it into a later female-promoting article.

Is there a House of Cards in Peninsula? There is only one hunkered-down American dad in the peninsula

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You're such a bad eunuch, you're going to be a total stink.

Let me ask you seriously, Sister Pei is short and at least she has good looks to attract fans. Kim Taeyeon is neither good-looking nor has a figure. Why is she always treated as a heroine?

As I write, I have another problem with the previous book. What you wrote was House of Cards, not purely Peninsula entertainment. What proportion of the plot do you focus on the political part after it is released?

It's okay, it looks a bit bland, the feeling is not enough, and the progress is slow. Other than that, it's okay. Come on!

Adding so much English won't make you look cool.

This kind of writing is not flattering. You either have politics as the main line, or celebrity love as the main line. You mix the two into it, and I find it a bit confusing.

Literary youth is very ill, has a strong sense of petty bourgeoisie, and cannot speak a few words in English.

I'm speechless, the climax has to be delayed, and the number of updates is not enough. If you don't have that amount of updates, don't follow other people's foreshadowing tactics. Enjoyment is the most important thing, okay?

The first few chapters are about the protagonist's candidacy, which is undoubtedly very attractive, but why is it changed to an auxiliary role later? What we want to see is the protagonist becoming a congressman and climbing up step by step, rather than assisting others. Even if you want to write Zhu as a congressman, can you wait until the protagonist becomes a congressman and then lend a hand to help? Some people may say that the author mentioned in the article the reasons for helping Zhu become a parliamentarian, but this is a problem of unclear main line! The main plot revealed at the beginning is that the protagonist becomes a congressman, and then starts to assist Zhu. I don't know when the protagonist will be a congressman. I feel that I am going off track...

He brags too hard and always changes his tune when doing things. He can make U-turns at every turn and is more flexible than a wallflower... Bragging is something you have to do under the auspices of your subordinates. It would be too embarrassing to brag on your own.

The way the movie script is written, the background is not clearly explained in more than ten chapters, including the age of the protagonist, where the protagonist comes from, and where he is going. Korean entertainment is already a niche, and the way it is written is also so niche.

The rhythm of the plot this time is very good after reading the first 8 chapters. The import of events of different nature is very smooth. In the last book, the plot fell apart. I hope the author will give full play to this book, please go for it.

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Additional refinement

Let me just say one thing, reading novels is for happiness

Having said that, if the author wants to write a more formal novel like House of Cards, it is better to use House of Cards to drive some excitement and pain points. The previous novel was awkward, and this one has almost become a science and education of social economy, production and life in the cold country. Come on, there are not many good Korean works, but you still have some brains.

It feels like the writing has been messed up since it was put on the shelf. The paragraph structure and wording and sentence making are all messed up.

Just like the title, if you improve slowly, your work will still have merit in terms of concept.

Fortunately, I thought it was the banned book😁

It's better to write a book from beginning to end.

Weirdly, I posted a comment to correct typos. After commenting, the author first deleted his own comment, and then deleted my comment.

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Where is the Xuandan constituency? Corresponds to the real Gangwon Province?