Panlong, from Random Rewards to Transcendence

Have you started suppressing the protagonist? This kind of collapse is very easy and cannot be stopped.

Punctuation marks! Feeling dizzy looking at it

I have a problem. Is there a problem with the layout or the "" in the character dialogue? Anyway, it affects the reading.

The writing is a bit messy, I guess I didn't write an outline, nor did the dialogue.

Do we have to tolerate Ao Fu again and again? Being provoked by him all the time, the protagonist is like a grandson. He is obviously no longer afraid of Ao Fu. He is really a coward.

You can suppress the protagonist, but you should write out the exciting points as soon as possible. Don't suppress your desires all the time. You can suppress them first.

There are no quotation marks for "". It's so uncomfortable to see.

Random rewards, what's the point? This is unlimited cheating, cheat at will. One day, you will be directly rewarded with a golden elixir to become a saint immediately, which can directly lead to the ending of the whole book.

There are too many secondary settings. The master of the Magnolia plane died early. The system reward avatar card turned out to be a real thing. When Hongmeng died,

Awesome, killed one-tenth of the main gods

It's interesting. I'll save it first and then read it slowly.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

Can someone who is not a local main god still enter a plane prison?