Cultivation of Immortality: Start with High-Grade Spiritual Roots

Adding points, systems, panels, etc. Are not the fairy tales in my mind. Writing like this is very fast, all contradictory logic can be pushed to the system, and the excitement and emotional rhythm are full, but the traditional fairy tale is not like this😭😭. The real classical immortals in my heart are "Xuanjian Xianzu", "Sword Soldier Crossing the River", "Surveying the Sky with a Heart", "Immortal Cage", "Ask for the Immortal Way", "Haoyu True Immortal", "Immortal Industry", "Immortal Barrier" and so on.

Finally there is a protagonist who is not a miscellaneous spirit root or a three spirit root.

This book is good, but the main character is an Aboriginal, which made me really confused. There are very few purely indigenous protagonists on the Xianxia rankings. They are either reborn from the golden elixir in their previous lives, or they are people from earth who have traveled through time.

It feels devoid of awe, very reckless, and very unlike someone who has experienced the world.

It's a bit long-winded. It's been ten or twenty chapters and it's not on the right track yet, so I'll just leave this question here and there.

A very classic fairy tale. I hope I can keep writing in the future.

Inexplicable and not worth watching.

Pay more attention to the description of women. When she was beaten severely by Xiao Hechan, a woman with a body in a wedding dress, it was obvious that she was begging the protagonist, and it looked like the protagonist begged her.

The start is baffling. Said the protagonist kept them waiting for half a year. There will be no explanation later. Sometimes chapters are inexplicably connected to the content of the previous chapter, which is strange.

It's really beautiful. The author will update it soon.

Recently, there have been a lot of new lv5 books by great gods. I don't have any illusions about great recommendations. I hope readers will read them and let me go through the four rounds of recommendations😭😭

If you want your book to be more popular, you'd better write about cheats. Don't look down on cheats. This is the only way for newcomers to get started. Nowadays, there are very few popular books without systems and cheats. Except for the great god Platinum, if you challenge the highest difficulty level from the beginning, you will die very quickly.

The book is average, and the three golden chapters are very bland. If you don't work hard later, you will lose popularity.

It was hard to find a book that was not a waste material, but it turned out to be an aboriginal cultivator.

It's watchable, but that's about it. The plot, writing, and characters are not outstanding. There is no golden finger in Genius Liujia, and there is no golden finger in the big poison, but the small poison is in these women.

The natives are pretty good, they have the talent to be great, but Goldfinger still needs to arrange a reasonable one early on that can run through the whole story.

After reading a few more chapters, I feel a little scared, because there are hints of embarrassing love.

Stop writing about Du Wu all the time. He is not a master, nor is he an important character. Even if he has an important plot, there is no need to talk about him so many times. And don't write your little poems either. They don't rhyme and are boring. They sound like vernacular.

The Order of the Immortals has nothing to do with XDS, right?

The writing is a bit too streamlined. I don't deny that the story is coherent, but the narrative of the plot is a bit shallow. To put it bluntly, it's just not that interesting to watch.