The Cult Leader’s Startup Handbook

No, buddy, I am the 27th person to read your latest chapter. It's been almost a day, which shows that your problem is serious. Furthermore, I saw that you skipped various battles, did not write about the process of spawning monsters, and kept pushing the plot. Everyone thought you wanted the whole big thing, but in the end, your protagonist still followed the crowd. He killed the governor for fame, helped the elves to heal his wounds, and helped the dragon to return favors. But the problem is that the protagonist didn't get anything? What is your main line? The task given by Jörmungandr turned out to be that the progress of the task was still 0, and the protagonist's strength did not improve. He gained a little fame, and then what? What about the hope of reaching level 6? How to destroy the Ouroboros Cult? When will the foreshadowing of the gods be revealed? It looks like there is a main plot, but in fact there is no main plot. It seems to advance the plot, but in fact it is like a travelogue. It writes wherever it goes. The protagonist also fiercely assumes the original ideology, like a philanthropist + nanny, helping everywhere. How about building bonds? But this group of images of yours is not interesting, is it? There seem to be many contradictions and complicated interests, but there is not much direct relationship with the protagonist? The protagonist is just running around like an NPC, but he doesn't do anything serious. During this period, he also gets to know the local customs and customs. The humanistic value is full, but the emotional value is not at all. You might as well just write an indigenous travelogue. This is not how the plot is designed in online articles. That's all, we look forward to feedback.

There is no way to link it to the recommendation position. I also understand that updating two chapters a day is not interesting, so starting from today, I will update 4 chapters every day. If you like it, please try not to read it. Even if you want to read a book, you just have to turn to the end of the latest chapter occasionally and scroll to the end. I will try my best to write as much as possible while maintaining the quality. Thank you all, I don't want to be stuck in one round.

I finished this book from Rome. If I can finish it, I will always support it.

Have an invincible body and let the believer invite a lucky spectator to play happily at the Spider Gate

What about conflicts? Don't turn the story into an event.

Is this the logic of normal people? The protagonist's things were taken away, and what he remembered was not Marcus, but the elf. What do you think? Is this your normal logic?

The main plot is too weak. How should I put it? The protagonist seems to be obsessed with role-playing and has not seriously thought about how to start a career.

Passing by the Qiqiu Suburban Cutting Path 🤫

Cut? 😡

Like the title, you can tell me what you think. The author's shelf is relatively large, and it is inevitable that there are parts that cannot be covered by knowledge. You can bring it up, you can talk about your thoughts, or you can recommend books to the author, and you will get a clearer reply.