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Your problem is, you have to sell hot and sour soup in Mixue Bingcheng Of course, there must be people who are willing to buy it. After all, they just like this taste, but the sales volume cannot be high So don't worry that no one will collect it and subscribe.
What I wrote before was okay. When I saw Dong Xiaoxiao was pregnant and wanted to have an abortion, the male protagonist ran over to her and had repeated pulls with his ex-wife regardless of the show. It was really poisonous. Then he skipped to the finale and watched it, which was really disgusting.
If you are stupid and have too much money, please subscribe if you are insane.
To be honest, I can accept everything else now, but when I saw the violent comments made by the champion and Shen the night they were together, it felt so intellectual and poisonous. It was like you fantasized about such a woman when you longed for love the most, but when she actually appeared and was with you, you called her despicable and responded to her with the most filthy and vicious language.
After seeing Chapter 140, I have to slow down first! The author should be a woman, right? Anyway, I don't think men can write this kind of article. This novel made me nervous... The protagonist fought for it again and again, then was relieved countless times, gave up countless times, and finally refused to let go... I have a curse word that I don't know whether to say or not! Also, I still think the author Wen Qing's style is good. After all, I think I am the same kind of person hahaha It's the plot, I can't say it's not good. The disadvantage is that it's too awkward.
I have been reading novels for so many years, and today I am really tortured. Although there is such good writing, but the plot is always so paradoxical, it is like you are outside a restaurant and you are very hungry. Then you see that this restaurant seems good, and you try to walk in. Then you are surprised to find that the decoration is good, and you like it. Then the aroma of food comes from the kitchen, and you are full of joy. Later, he serves the first dish, and you taste it and discover It's very delicious, very suitable for your taste, and then you can't wait to look forward to the next dish, but the next dish is very nauseating, but with Zhuyu in front, you try to look forward to the next dish. While you are looking forward to it, the aroma of the kitchen seduces you all the time. Then the last dish comes, you taste it, you are fooled, this is not a kitchen, this is a toilet that makes dada more fragrant [Emm]
I'm totally fed up with watching it today. The male protagonist is so pretentious and his thoughts are so extreme. He deserves a divorce and get out. The relationship between the two women is directly pulled and pretentious over and over again. It's disgusting. I really can't follow it anymore. Goodbye.
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Can I unsubscribe from this? I feel like the money is not worth it. A man who is mentally exhausted cannot control his lower body and wants this and that. There are also a bunch of mentally ill women who are trying their best to attack. Both men and women cheat on each other and go crazy. When I watch entertainment, I just want to listen to songs, review variety shows, and watch movies. Why do I still want to vomit? It's late at night. Can I unsubscribe? Damn it, pay me back.
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The biggest problem in this book is not the characters, but the plot arrangement: the title of the book gives people a sense of expectation for a comeback, which means that the readers come in not to watch the emotional drama, but to watch the protagonist take off step by step and become invincible in the world, and then the ex-wife regrets her mistake and other queens throw themselves into her arms. It's okay to write about entanglement, but you should write it later. Write the beginning first, and then write about what happened after others regretted it. You wrote dozens of chapters for the Eighteen Days Variety Show. You wrote it quite well and the characters stood up, although they were a bit sick. One post complained that the protagonist even said three times that he wanted to start over, but he still looked like he was about to lick his ex-wife's sister whenever she pulled him. No matter how exciting the writing is, the last relationship has already failed. Don't write about it at the beginning. Just go through it in one stroke. The entanglements will be written slowly and slowly when the story unfolds and the protagonist is on track. The producer of the Civilization series once said that a huge empire slowly came to an end, but it was reborn from the ruins and became more glorious. Isn't it cool? No, players don't like to fail. As long as they succeed and succeed again and again, when the empire they build is in decline, they simply can't wait for the production team to prepare a script to turn the tide, and they will just start over. The same goes for readers. Readers don't need you to spend dozens of chapters explaining how the protagonist bids farewell to the past and starts over. What readers want is for you to start writing from "start over", don't just talk without practicing. The author also defends himself in the text. The protagonist is not a dog licker, but he is too emotionally involved, "ten years" and so on. He seems to have not realized that it doesn't matter whether the protagonist is a dog licker or affectionate. The important thing is that you write the main story. The dissatisfaction of readers is that you wrote "failure" for too long, and no gains can be seen at all. As long as there is dissatisfaction, no matter what you write, it will be wrong. To meet the needs of readers is to write about how the protagonist "turns the tables" first, as the title of the book says, and then to write about emotional matters later. You might as well have the protagonist die from grief and excessive drinking at the beginning. After the time traveler took over the body, he had no feelings for his ex-wife and immediately threw himself into his career. His ex-wife's sister was hit a wall after several attempts, and he regretted that he had played too hard and his temperament had changed drastically. This book is also finished. I hope the author will consider more plot settings while maintaining his own style. I think the author likes to write about such muddy, stomach-ache, and inextricably linked emotions. This is not impossible, it is very stylish, but more consideration should be given to the plot arrangement.
Alas, this licking character almost poisoned me. I originally wanted to endure it and see if there would be something darker in the back, but I didn't expect it. You really licked it to the end. How did you discover such a niche track? Also, who reported me? You can break the rules without even using any illegal words. It's really six