The Wrong Way to Enter Love Apartment

In Love Apartment, Zhan Bo actually took the wrong path. If he had developed his professional career as a programmer from the beginning, if he could create a weakened version of Jarvis, he might actually be able to be with Wanyu in the end.

Later I had plastic surgery

A dog-licker will not die a good death, and he has no right to be reborn again.

It is obvious that the author likes sour literature that is painful and heart-wrenching. I would also watch this kind of plot, at least I don't think it's too toxic. But as for the scene in Chapter 8 where Zhan Bo sucked the blood off Wanyu's finger, the separation between it and the previous scene was so great that I was poisoned and died at that time. A burst of anger went straight to Tianling Gai, as if I saw a beautiful woman fart while dancing and smelled it myself. I myself became angry with embarrassment. I don't even know why. There is really no problem with Wanyu being the protagonist. On the contrary, I also want to see the various pulls between these two people. After all, they are a couple that I particularly liked when they were young. But we always remember that the couple separated entirely because of Wanyu. Let's not think deeply about Wanyu's life, three views, and character background. Even though Zhan Bo clearly did nothing wrong and Wan Yu abandoned him mercilessly, you can't sympathize with Wan Yu and feel that Zhan Bo deserves his fate, right? Moreover, you wrote six things about the reborn Lu Zhanbo earlier, which made me think that he is mature, rational, and wise. You have already raised your tone and given me a character image. Then what did you do? You let him suck a drop of blood from Wanyu's finger without any preparation and in public? You were still rushing to do it yourself, Wan Yu, you didn't even write a word. If you want to write about your interaction with Wanyu, you must at least have normal logic, right? Just reborn, just refused to confess to her, just showed us his ambition and future. As a result, he took the initiative to suck a female friend's finger, but he still didn't feel anything? Do you really not understand the boundaries between people? Don't you think this part is awkward? Even if you want to show their romance, you can't be so anxious and crazy, right? According to Shuangwen's process, Wanyu should be anxious, regretful, and take the initiative to find Zhanbo. I guess you don't want to and won't write like this. But you can't let Zhan Bo lick it so straightforwardly, right? What position and identity did he have to suck the blood from a little girl's finger? I'm really sorry, I really couldn't stand it after seeing this plot. I thought I found the fairy grass that suits my taste, but I couldn't resist the sudden punch. The words were a bit harsh, I apologize.

I won't say much else. Others have already said it, including myself. This time I will give you a piece of advice: don't write about harems, at least not recently. What is needed to write a good harem book, especially one in a modern context, is self-deception and some indifferent and ruthless scumbag thinking. And you are a young man with rich emotions. This is not your field, and all your books are not about harems. In a word, you are suitable for pure love. I suggest that you write a book with a single female protagonist according to your own nature. Regardless of whether you continue to write Love Apartment, I do not recommend that you write multiple female protagonists.

If you are willing to write a story about pure love with a single female protagonist, it would be pretty good, and the emotional scenes are also very good. Why do you insist on having a harem? The point is that you also insist on adding Xin Ling. It's simple. If you have a single female protagonist, Xin Ling and pure love, I am willing to watch it. You insist on adding it, force it on. This person has no genes for having a harem. I've read a few of your books, and they all ask for a harem. Why do you want to open one? There are many types of sexual immorality, and they must be killed in the harem.

This subject matter is already very niche, and your literary youth style is even more niche. It is impossible to support your family by pointing to it. But your writing style is very good, suitable for eating this bowl of rice

At first, I thought I had completely looked away, but Gou Gou Shou ran over again.

It's written by a female author again, and it doesn't feel at all enjoyable.

Nolan