The Peerless Tang Sect: Xiao Ding Zhentian

I read it for free. There are no major poisons, but there are constant minor poisons. The writing is not good, the protagonist's personality is not good, and there are many personal settings, but they are all poisonous points. The emotional line is a mess. It doesn't matter if I like orthopedics, but it is not well written. If the poison resistance is high, you can read it, but if it is not, don't read it, so as not to disgust yourself, come and scold the author. Writing a book is not easy. Come on, author.

My sister Lexun😭

It's pretty good to watch, and the plot is pretty good too

I don't know if the author will accept Ice Emperor. If you don't accept suggestions, don't give them to Tianmeng. I feel that there are always disgusting things in Sangou's books. They like to force pairing. In Douyi, I remember that Ma Hongjun and Bai Chenxiang seemed to be forcibly paired. Poseidon took a test and was drunk. What, Jiang Nannan and Xu Sanshi in Dou Er were unable to deal with each other at first, but later the woman hated the South and wanted to force them to get together. Tianmeng Ice Emperor directly raped them and then blessed them to be together. Dou San and Dou Si did not pay much attention to these. These are really disgusting.

After reading two or three chapters, Xiao Xiao wrote a book that was like a giant brother. This is so-called. The sixth-ring soul emperor lives in a small shabby house and struggles to spend ten gold soul coins to awaken his martial soul. It is also so-called that Xiao Xiao's two top-level martial arts + innate full soul power are written as innate ninth level. It is also so-called. I mainly want to see how far this book can be written to my liking, and to improve my poison resistance. The author is free to use whatever he wants. Writing a novel for the first time is to show all the shortcomings and grow from the readers' criticisms!

By the way, can't the protagonist and Xiaoxiao use martial soul fusion skills?

The Six-Huan Soul Emperor can be written by you into a well-off family and is also a talent

The power of the cauldron, the transformation of the cauldron, etc. Feel too low. Recently, the names of the soul skills have been changed, and some of the questions you have raised before will also be slightly revised.

There's something wrong with the protagonist's character, or he can't see himself clearly. It looked fine before, but looking at his dialogue with the senior management of Shrek Academy, he has always put himself in a very strong position. For example, to suppress Ma Xiaotao's anger, he must practice in Poseidon Island for three days, otherwise he will not do it. But this is meaningless except for making the academy's senior officials hate themselves, because the current protagonist only has cultivation talent and no strong background. It can only be said that Shrek has a love for talents and wants to be cultivated as a direct descendant, but he does not have the qualifications to be valued or even treated as an equal by Shrek. Like Yan Shaozhe, who valued the protagonist before, it is normal for a leader of a big power to immediately look down upon the protagonist when he hears that there is no power behind him. The protagonist is not treated like this and can only say that he is lucky, but in the end, the protagonist still looks down on this one and that one. In fact, the current protagonist is not qualified to be selected at all. What he should do is to continue to show his excellence, let Shrek continue to value himself, and then show that he agrees with Shrek's philosophy to the outside world, so that Shrek can truly treat him as one of his own in order to get the best training. Because to be honest, the protagonist's talent is not good enough to make Shrek desperate. In the final analysis, he is just a twin martial soul with innate soul power. He was only looked up to because there was a peerless strongman in his lineage. Normally, he should be treated like Xiao Xiao in the original work. Huo Yuhao was so valued by Shrek because of his ultimate martial soul. Later, his true martial soul awakened for the second time, and he risked everything for Shrek's honor many times. The current protagonist is honestly not worthy of it. The original Ultimate Martial Spirit and the original Martial Spirit are so valued because even if they reach the realm of Super Douluo or even Extreme Douluo, they still have great blessings on combat power. Once Huo Yuhao grows up, he is basically destined to be the strongest in the mainland, so Shrek attaches so much importance to them. The current protagonist can only say that he has great expectations to reach the Super Douluo, but he may not be able to become the Ultimate Douluo. He may be stronger in the Super Douluo but he will not have an absolute advantage. After all, the one who can reach this step is not a genius. There are people like this in every generation, and Dingtian is a young and old man, so Shrek will pay attention to him, but not at all costs. If the protagonist still behaves like this, there may not be much in the short term. Over time, some people will definitely not be able to stand it. After all, Shrek is really good at brainwashing. Most of the outstanding inner academy colleges really believe that Shrek's glory is supreme. Your disdainful attitude will only make them think that you are insulting the academy. Therefore, the protagonist can dislike certain people in his heart, but he cannot show it, especially to higher-ups.

I can't complain anymore about suppressing the fighting power, removing the evil fire, and having a woman disguise herself as a roommate. It's too poisonous for me, and I can't stand it. Why do everyone come up and lick their faces to remove the evil fire? Ma Xiaotao herself isn't that good-looking, and there's that devilish temper. If you don't tell me, this is 90% new to the original work.

I don't want to read it because the protagonist didn't express the feeling of the important weapon of the tripod. He even made Ding appear as a clone. The Cauldron's heavy weapon doesn't have the ability to suppress seals.

Jiulong Zhentian Cauldron and Jiufeng Lai Yixiao, I personally feel that this is better. Wouldn't it be perfect if I add the self-spirit fusion skill. Nine dragons and nine phoenixes sound pretty good.

The relationship line is really a mess. The single heroine is neither a harem nor an orthopedic surgeon. Just like Yi Nian Eternal, the biggest failure is to send a woman to a person who has no harem aspirations. If you don't want to write multiple heroines, just write it clearly. It's as unclear as a hypocrite. This kind of thing is the most annoying.

Anyone who has seen Peerless Tang Sect should know that Xiao Xiao definitely does not belong to the common people. Can ordinary people directly say that they are twin martial souls? Look how long Huo Yuhao kept it secret before he dared to say it. There is also Xiao Xiao's martial spirit. Do you know what a flute is? What is a tripod? The flute is an ancient sacrificial instrument, and the tripod is an important weapon of the country. With these two martial spirits, even if Xiao Xiao is not a princess, she is still a member of the royal family. (It is estimated that the third young master wanted to set it as a princess at the time, but he forgot about it after writing about it. Just like later, in order to restore Tang San's image, Huo Yuhao parachuted a younger brother Dai Luoli to let Huo Yuhao vent his anger. In the end, Tang San's image was not restored, but instead It directly messed up the previous settings of Dai Yueheng and Dai Hao.) Although Mr. Zhang is indeed not good at writing and arithmetic, he is at least somewhat literate and can forget his own foreshadowing. If you write a fan novel and cannot see that other people's foreshadowing conflicts with the original work.

In fact, Xiaoxiao's twin martial souls are the most powerful. In the original work, he didn't realize that his two martial souls can perform martial soul fusion skills on their own Fusing Sansheng Soul-Suppressing Cauldron and Jiufeng Laiyi Xiao into Xiao Cauldron can kill immortals🤓🤓

All I can say is don't be Shrek's glorious dog, don't join the Tang Sect.

This second soul skill is just a bunch of stuff. I just started writing it as pure power and ended up with this. It might as well be said to be the innate ability of the martial soul. Every additional soul ring creates a clone.

This is my first time trying to write a novel, and I have little experience, so I can understand everyone's criticism. The addition of the soul ring to the protagonist's martial soul will be designed more rationally in the future, mainly following the route of using the cauldron to suppress all things. As for the Freshman Competition being so short, on the one hand, it is because it will be on the shelves soon, and I plan to write something different in the far north. On the other hand, the Freshman Competition is still a bit childish for the protagonist. If it is written too much, people may not be interested in reading it. Finally, I hope you can continue to support me. I will improve it and try to make it enjoyable for everyone. Please read and collect!

The cultivation techniques are not suitable. If there are no techniques, does it mean that the innate soul power is useless? I think it is pure suppression.

Although weight is a major feature of weapons, why is it that the Poseidon Trident is a super artifact, but what you are obsessed with is the weight. If you really want to control the weight, it is not that it cannot be stacked. Things like this are the easiest to stack, but if it is not heavy, it is impossible to reach the level of a super artifact. Obviously, the Poseidon Trident does not rely on weight to become a super artifact, so why do you have to be obsessed with the weight of the Poseidon Trident?

Well, I personally feel that after reading the free version, there are a lot of poisonous points. First of all, the father of the protagonist is the Soul Emperor. This setting is obviously not written well. Later, the third soul ring said that he does not want outsiders to know the secret of hunting souls alone. Has the author forgotten this? There is someone behind the scenes who hunts souls alone. He is also a god. Also, the character design of Xiao Xiao feels weird. Although the relationship between brother and sister is good, is it too much? Then the heroine is also weird. Zhang Lexuan and the protagonist have a good impression after meeting each other a few times. Well, I don't know how to complain for a while. I also watch multiple female protagonists, but I can't accept the five or six at the beginning. Is the protagonist a succubus? To be honest, I don't see the character of the protagonist that is so attractive to the opposite sex. His talent has not grown and he is not that attractive. Of course, it's understandable that the author is a newbie and can't write well. If someone sees this and can't accept it, don't read it, and don't criticize the author. Respect each other. There is also a subjective point. Do anyone really like a heroine like Wu Feng? Although she doesn't have many unnatural behaviors in this book, to be honest, after reading the original book, I really couldn't stand it at all.

My soul power is not suitable for cultivation, and I can't even find a good reason to suppress the protagonist.

There are so many female protagonists that I don't even want to watch them. I don't know if he is in love or if he is here to become a god.

The author has done a great job, including Ma Xiaotao, Ling Ruochen, Zhang Ruoxuan, Han Ruoruo, and Bingxuedi.

Why are you included in the Three Kingdoms label😅

I'm looking for a fanfic about Xiao Xiao, the heroine of Dou Er, thank you all (I really like the character Xiao Xiao)