
Islands in the Southern Ocean
南大洋的岛屿
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 194k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Evolution & Mutation
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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38Chapters
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That's interesting. The background should be our real world? Due to my poor knowledge of foreign history, I really can't tell whether it's the real Western world or the author's fabrication. But the author's writing style is very good. The long dialogues between characters, as well as large sections of popular science paragraphs and descriptions of scenery made it not very annoying for me to read. Of course, you may have to calm down and be patient. Is the protagonist the harbormaster? Or a group portrait? When I read the first chapter, I thought it was a time-travel novel, but later on it turned out to be an aboriginal novel. To be honest, in today's cool literary world, this is not flattering. Most book friends give up immediately when they hear it is aboriginal. Personally, I prefer this. What attracted me to reading is to know what is waiting at the end of the journey? The expectations are a bit high. If you can't meet them, you may give up the book or keep it. I don't know how the author will develop it. Will it be a pure adventure novel or will it have supernatural elements? I personally think it would be more palatable to add supernatural elements, such as ghosts and ghosts, or ghosts blowing out lanterns. If it is a pure adventure novel, it will test the author's storytelling ability. The author has such a good writing style and is extremely rich in relevant knowledge. I will not give you any professional advice. I will give you two small suggestions. One is about paragraphs. As far as current online articles are concerned, the author's long paragraphs are too long and too long. It is a bit annoying and tiring to read. It will be better if you divide it into sections. Another question about the opening chapter. I mentioned it above. You may have to calm down and read to get into it. However, in the current online literary world, there may not be many patient book lovers. You have to be interested in this genre, and even fewer. Does the author want to slightly change this traditional way of writing foreign masterpieces? How much interspersed content can particularly attract the reader's attention? For example, some magical treasures, or some mysterious phenomena, or some magical characters, etc. The latest chapter of Dead Water is good, but it is too late, and many people may give up before reading this. Of course, the above is purely personal advice. Finally, looking at the author's writing style, it reminds me of famous books such as Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea and Robinson Crusoe from the vague memories of my childhood. I don't know if I have misremembered it. It tests my patience. Come on, author