Simultaneous Time Travel: Be Invincible Starting from the Comics!

Personally, I think Xiao Xing in the tennis plot is disgusting. The protagonist invites others to play with him, and then he comes over and forces the protagonist to go on a date. The so-called date is still causing hatred for the protagonist. I personally feel that it is quite disgusting.

I can say responsibly that there is nothing wrong with the writing, and it is not a big problem if the details are slightly wrong. The problem lies in the world you choose. Light novels are either combative or funny. Actually, it's okay to pick up the King of Nets in the beginning with Sword. Both are hot-blooded types, so there's not much sense of incompatibility. But when you pick up a casual type in the third, it feels very fragmented. I skipped your third world entirely. The best choice is to choose between passionate combat power and casual comedy, and then choose 1 to 3 power systems. Too many are too complicated, easy to write and difficult to arrange growth routes. Then when it comes to character selection, diversification is possible. For example, if the protagonist of your Digimon world travels through Rollermon, there is something to watch and look forward to, because everyone knows that Rollermon can evolve into the ultimate form. But to be honest, there is no expectation or excitement for the coolie wave in the Yu-Gi-Oh! World, because it is very weak and will be weak in the future. If we replace the coolie wave with a human being, or a powerful monster, but in a special state, such as being sealed or in a different space, readers will have expectations and find it interesting. Let's take the Dark Master as an example. The first time he appears in front of everyone is a sealed foot. Wouldn't it be more interesting? Readers also know how powerful the Dark Archmage is, and they will look forward to the powerful strength of the Dark Archmage after he gradually lifts the seal and finally completely lifts the seal, and what kind of chemical reactions he will bring to himself in other worlds. The last thing is my personal preference, not a suggestion. I actually don't like splitting up the official version, unless the protagonist is disgusting.

Nothing exciting, but Shuhuang can read it

I was originally reading this type of article, with the same starting point of Death in Fire, and wanted to write something else, but what was the result? Sure enough, there is still a sea of ​​​​dead fire, even if it is a bad street, it is still popular. After all, how many people really like the second dimension (ToT)/~~~ Is it true that the only fandom is a sea of ​​​​death, and there are only migrant workers in the second dimension?

Putting aside the fact that the world revolves around the protagonist and the plot, is it true that the world was full of hypocrisy before Kirito was born? Will the world be destroyed at the end of the plot? If you really want to play, you don't have to give it a try. Can't you just dismantle the electric shock device? You have to commit suicide. If you have to open the "gene lock" between life and death, just pretend I didn't say anything.

Whether you are popular or not has nothing to do with whether you write about the sea of ​​​​fire or not. It only depends on the setting of the emotional idiot you give the protagonist...

Shen Nong is here Originally the sword was quite nice, but after finishing the first level of the sword, he went to the Prince of Tennis to play tennis. How many people are willing to pay to watch someone play tennis? It's really a mind-blowing operation. I'll probably continue to explore plots from other worlds in the future. If you can accept it, you can watch it.

The sword is okay, but the world suddenly changes. Net King has seen it at least, but the kid I recommend has never seen it at all. The three worlds are game fighting, sports competition, and urban idol. Can you grasp it?

Why does your system, which provides cheats for the protagonist, need so much presence? The second chapter will disgust readers, right? Instead of writing in so many ways, I chose to write in a way where the protagonist is systematically coerced, and it still looks very logical.

The author of Naruto World writes about beasts and weasels? ? ! ! ! ! Itachi? ? ? ? God? ? What three views?

Difficult to stretch

The Prince of Tennis, what the hell has become now? Aliens come to earth to play tennis, giants play tennis, balconies play tennis, and female ghosts play tennis weakly! It's a completely retarded episode.

The part about the Spirit of the Halberd Eater. . . Does the protagonist have a sword? If you are so strong, why should you be tested as a student? ? ? When someone pointed at your nose and said you were eliminated, you just turned around and left? Do you have such a high moral value? Then he stayed again after being persuaded and provoked. . . There is no bloody anger at all. . . Like a retired old man. . . If Zhang Yong, the protagonist of Command and Conquer, dared to speak so arrogantly, his whole family would be killed. . . True nest

The introductions of some books can give people the feeling of being illiterate just by looking at them.

The world of high demons and high martial arts is over, but Demon Slayer can't speed pass, what a joke. To annihilate a single ghost, judging by the pace, I'm afraid I'd have to write hundreds and eighty chapters! 😰When will the Demon Slayer end?

The subject matter doesn't matter. The biggest problem is how to create something exciting. Many of them are under the guise of invincible writing but make readers feel upset and frustrated. The problem lies in the lack of priority. 90% of the space is devoted to describing how the villain is so awesome, how he makes the protagonist laugh, his messy psychological activities, and repeated narration analysis, and then in three sentences, he expresses how the protagonist defeats the villain and the protagonist is awesome. Isn't this enjoyable to watch? Here too, space is always spent on things that readers don't want to read. If you really need to write it carefully, I'll just brush it off. Asuna's confession doesn't even have some dialogue or scene descriptions. The parts that highlight the protagonist's slowness are written in long paragraphs, which is really speechless.

What Shiji writes is really disgusting, like a whole bunch of indigenous people, they don't recognize anything. It makes people look like they are pretending not to understand. Insulting people's intelligence

Ha, I finally made myself exempt from the limit.

The character description of the protagonist is too bad, The heroine of Net King World deliberately causes trouble and lets others challenge the protagonist, and she provokes others from time to time.         ，？ It also gives the protagonist an emotionally dull persona.

Why are you writing and recommending me? Such a clown anime

The start is too poisonous. You can just set it up to enter the sao before opening the system. If you insist on making it look like a fake world, the foundation will be shaken if you leave the main line. Also, "Blocker" was a nickname only used by Kirito during the open beta. It was not a good word, and his reputation was a little worse than that of ordinary closed beta players (at least at the beginning)

Both Sword and Net King are well written. I've read Net King before and it's still relatable. What's the third one about Pushing the Child? I haven't watched it at all and it's a completely daily thing, or is it daily entertainment? I looked confused 😅

Can you wear less clothes together? All the astronomical objects are almost crowded. To be honest, I am almost tired of aesthetics! There are only so many recommended spots that you can see;

I wonder what those of you who have watched it for so long think? I couldn't read more than 100 chapters in. The main reason why I gave up the book was the part where Asuna came to visit. Tsukiha misunderstood Asuna as Death Gun, and the protagonist didn't give any explanation. He also said that he would let this misunderstanding continue like this, and he immediately lost the desire to read. Written like this, my rough prediction is basically that one of the two girls was hurt by the other girl, and then the other half of the girls felt guilty, so there was no Shura field.

New book seedlings need care. As we all know, if you keep reading, you may die. Therefore, the new book is about to start, and all readers need to read it. I'll test the waters on Thursday, and I'm looking at the paid follow-up on Tuesday. Everyone, please~ (ps: It only takes 3 months for readers from the country of consumption of any book on Qidian to be recognized as paying users, and recharging 1 cent will count. If a paying user catches up to the latest chapter within 24 hours after the chapter is released, it will be counted as 1 catch-up) After everyone has finished reading the last page of the novel, if you continue to swipe right, you can see the ranking of follow-up reading. New books are updated twice a day. If the results are good and can be put on the shelves, I will give back to everyone even more, Finally, a 360-degree circle of thanks.

Hakoniwa requires two digits, and playing Luo Hao in Godslayer requires a buff. I don't understand.

It's a pity to throw away the food if it's tasteless. Even describing the protagonist's extraordinary fighting power doesn't feel satisfying.

Doesn't this introduction mean that even the author has no control over his own book?😒

Is it because the computing power of the virtual world is needed to help with future development?

Minotaur and Beerus have tasted Bulma.