Wizard's Secret Travel

Overall, it is good-looking and has a western fantasy feel. I offer it with monthly tickets. Please keep working hard and write according to your own outline or plan. Don't change the outline just because of readers' comments. Come on, I think there is a chance to become a fairy grass.

I have read more than 60 chapters so far, and I have already seen a lot of poisonous points. The wizarding novel needs to have a development direction or improved spells or something. There is nothing wrong with it, just waiting for Goldfinger to add some points. Other wizarding novels have a vague main line: making friends, making enemies, and advancing the plot around the protagonist's research direction and promotion route. Now that these plots are connected, it doesn't feel very satisfying to see the protagonist promoted to a third-level wizard apprentice. It feels a lot more satisfying to watch the protagonist get promoted every few days. The plot that happens in the middle, such as the partner's death, has nothing to do with the protagonist. The protagonist is separated from them at the beginning of the story. Why are you writing this plot? To put it bluntly, it is just a passerby. It does not help the protagonist's upgrade. It does not have any impact on the protagonist's mentality. It has nothing. So what is the role of this plot? After writing so many plots about the companions, I thought that after the protagonist was promoted, he would help them advance together, and then form a small group to grow step by step. As a result, one of them died, one was "parasitized", and the other had to go to a mortal country to live out his life. With this kind of description, can we think that the protagonist actually doesn't care about them very much in his heart, and just treats them as supporting characters to describe the difficulty of survival. Let's follow this line of thinking. The protagonist saves the maid in the restaurant and meets and chats with his ex-girlfriend. It doesn't look like egoism. It's too fragmented. There is no main plot, no feeling of upgrading, no research direction, and no change in mentality, so what should I watch? In summary, this book is useless. This kind of golden finger can be directly upgraded, and there is no need to study it at all. But after upgrading, it doesn't even feel good, so why read it? If you are short of money, you will write some plots to make money. If you join the association and have no position, you will write the plot of the witchcraft formation (the key is that the follow-up will only see the protagonist upgrade to the witchcraft formation, and there is no in-depth description at all). I am a bunch of people. I don't know what the use of writing these is.

In the early stage, the protagonist is given a precarious and rotten environment where he can be exploited at any time, and then he becomes stronger through cheating. After becoming extraordinary, he immediately clears the culprit, letting the protagonist go in to be grateful and shed tears, and then push the villain out. This is the content of the free part. It's so funny. What's the difference between this and the murderer who kills your whole family and says, "I got the wrong person, and takes you as a slave to compensate you, and then you kowtow to thank you."

The supporting role of the ex-girlfriend is too over-the-top. Including but not limited to: Pretending to be unfamiliar with the male protagonist before, and pretending to be a couple after more than ten chapters; In the first part, he was confidant and listened to the male protagonist's instructions to prepare and make choices. Later, he didn't even start to smell the inheritance, and he drew a knife to kill the male protagonist to dominate the inheritance; Forget about his changeable personality, he is strong-willed enough to win against a monster green plant that can control hundreds of people, isn't it? You are so awesome, and you used to fall in love with the good-for-nothing male protagonist and join a group to keep warm? He's so low-level that he's close to a high-level wizard, so he stays in the school? I worked so hard to see her being killed by the male protagonist and thought it was finally over. The good guy came back to life directly. I couldn't hold back after booking the second part. After talking about the pseudo-heroine, and now talking about the male protagonist, please remove the sofa decisively, thank you. There is no doubt that Pigfoot is an upright person, and every villain of Shark has a clear evil deed in the book. Therefore, his classmates and friends were either killed or escaped death. Pig's Knuckle, the Catastrophic Star, there are many fantasy novels, but there are also a lot of fun fantasy novels. It's nice to create your own system, and it's nice to be noticed by thousands of people after the upgrade. After closing it, ahem, the system doesn't reflect anything else but swordsmanship. After the upgrade, it doesn't depict the different points of opposition between wizards and mortal immortals. Instead, it repeatedly emphasizes the friendliness and equality of pig's feet. . . By the way, there is also a little maid who keeps showing off her beauty. When an upper-level wizard thought she could give it to him as a gift, Pig's Feet said she was a maid and a friend and rejected it. Then, she inexplicably received it as a maid at home? The endings are all the same. I have to go around in a circle to show my morality. People are convinced.

The wizarding genre has been badly written, and it is difficult to truly write the framework of a world. That's why people like Shi Yuan's writing can be read with good writing skills. And to be honest, seven or eight years ago, the industrialized wizard stream was all over the streets. As of today, is there anything new in the wizard stream? Watching the Witcher series and pursuing plot is better than pursuing writing to wash your eyes, giving up your brain and enjoying the novice plot. After all, there are not many good books in serialization right now. The current wizard style is completely equivalent to a kind of life inertia, which is the same as tobacco, alcohol and tea. It's just that people who have experienced the peak period of the wizard style keep searching for the aftertaste of the wizard style in order to reminisce about their youth.

It feels really boring. I have been experiencing conflicts. After the conflict, it is another conflict. Shouldn't the wizard learn to accumulate production and expand his knowledge, and then be promoted? This looks like a monster-killing and upgrading article. Alas, it is gone. It is evaluated as a traditional fantasy novel.

What a pity, it's a fantasy novel in the skin of a wizard. The attributes of wizards and scholars have been downplayed, and they have become golden fingers with strong scientific research capabilities. The way to make money is to kill people and sell goods! When a businessman comes to buy and sell high and low prices! Anyone can do murder and arson as a businessman, but few can do scientific research.

A swordsmanship can be divided into low-level, perfect, extreme, and medium-level entry 😵 Why are wizard novels so disgusting these days? I can even write an outline of them. I just subscribe to one chapter and complain about them. I don't even bother to read them for free.

First, the original protagonist met a female partner who abandoned the original person and took away most of the property in pursuit of better treatment. Then the protagonist later forgave the female partner, and the subsequent plot has been whitewashing the female partner and vaguely meant to be the heroine 😁 There is nothing wrong with going ashore to kill the person you want with a sword, but the wrong person is the person who is beheaded.

Did Elena give it to you? Write about her crazily, lick her like a dog

The pacing of your book is okay at first, but you focus too much on the plot, which makes it feel like water. This book is about mortals changing skins, cultivating immortality with loans, and cultivating immortality in the underworld, but this is not a problem. You have a good rhythm, but there is no climax. You feel happy as you write it. The protagonist is only a second-class wizard apprentice in Chapter 70. Converting to the mortal stream, it is the middle stage of Qi training. There are many plots that do not need to be written, so you have to write a lot of them, and it does not help much in shaping the characters. Finally, I left a 1-point comment. You think it's popular enough, right?

After reading dozens of chapters, I didn't learn the systematic meditation method. I learned a lot of random skills. Upgrading is the key. I learned a lot of skills but didn't become specialized. I looked angry and wrote like a fool.

This kind of innate ability can control other people and their dependents. Nine out of ten collapsed. It looked okay at first. Seeing that after absorbing the talent of Green Shadow, he can control his dependents whether they collapse or not. Don't even look at it.

I don't understand. In this situation, aren't the other apprentices just dragging their feet? Forget it if you don't lie to them, you are still leading them, you are brainless, and you are not safe. If you don't find a better apprentice to take it or be a lone wolf, waiting for the brainless things you wrote to bring disaster, I don't understand that such brainless things can still live. The wizards you write should not be extremely self-interested. Other wizards are independent, selfish and cruel. You are a fucking apprentice, and you still dare to be compassionate and bring instability. 6, 6

Obviously it can be simplified, but it is necessary to complicate things. Seeing the large number of people and a lot of words, it is just a shanty cultivator. Just after the small gang was eliminated, the big gang came again.

Before entering the palace, why don't you give everyone a message? Are you going to enter the palace directly with this "request for advice"? ? Don't want your "parents" anymore? (Parents who provide food and clothing are also parents!)

The protagonist is constantly being provoked and threatened, and one solution comes one after another. If you don't mind this, you can watch it.

This female supporting role is really vicious, what's wrong? I have to clear his name

What kind of bullshit emotional line are you writing?

It's time for Elena to get a lunch box. It's not that you are not allowed to clear your name, but what the hell are you doing by repeatedly jumping from one position to another? You have betrayed the protagonist three times. What else do you want, author? Is it possible that she is really the heroine? While it is still within the tolerance of readers, please log off when it's time.

The free chapters of this book are okay, but by about 4 to 50 chapters you will feel that it is not a wizard novel, it is just a fairy tale with a wizard, and some characters are well created, but some characters are very unclear. For example, the character of Elena gives me a feeling of a rural couple who went to work in a big city, and the woman left after seeing the scenery of the big city. I opened the male lead, and saw that the protagonist has grown up again, and then licked his face and came to find an honest man to marry. Moreover, the protagonist's IQ has always been very fascinating. Most of the time, the protagonist is just a little smart person, but in some places, this kind of intelligence reduction operation appears. Summary: After reading the free chapters, there is no need to spend money. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

He actually got picked up? Will he still be a pigeon? 🙂

It's been a long time, eunuch! I thought the author was missing! When will the protagonist escape from the fate of being controlled?

From the beginning of Yinhuan Academy, it just didn't look good due to the interruption.

Come on! The wizarding world is cruel and bloody. I am fully committed to keeping it up.

The Witch is very well written, it would be better if it were more divergent.

It was resurrected secretly, because I haven't watched much, so I can only recommend and support it, which is difficult for everyone.

There is still no problem with the author's writing skills, but after all, Platinum does not have its own flow. A little lacklusterness in the early stage may hinder the follow-up reading. I hope it is not the kind of wizard novel that follows the "knight style" in the early stage. That would be too slow. I still need to speed up the process of learning to become a wizard.

You were just promoted to a third-level apprentice, and first-level apprentices are the highest. Official wizards don't start from level 9, right? There are many wizarding stories about the wizarding world, the wizard's journey, the sorcerer world, etc., These are the lowest level for level 1. It would be awkward if you read it the other way around.

Well written, I'll give you two votes.