Infinite Streaming: Invasion of the Heavens Starting from Hogwarts

The further you go, the more you feel that the protagonist is a bit confused. I feel that the author has written the novel as if it were a high-level martial artist and cannot see where the genius of the protagonist is. How should I put it? There is a feeling of humiliation, and there are obviously two years, and a lot of time has been reduced, especially when the protagonist does not need to care about losing control, pollution, etc., He should rise faster. In addition, I remember that in the mysterious world view, as long as you are not afraid of losing control and pollution, you can take several paths, and adjacent paths can also be taken at the same time. Why does the protagonist have to split his soul? Just run three at the same time. You are not afraid of contamination, and you are not afraid of losing control. The only thing you need to worry about is the oppression of the soul by the essence. The most important thing is that when the author writes a new chapter, he feels like Voldemort is possessed. After observing it, he wants to eat his classmates. Are you really planning to eat without Dumbledore? And the problem with magic potions is also the same. Apart from the gifts, there is nothing else developed by myself. Even when you digest the magic potion most of the time, it feels like a pretense, and there is a feeling of eating people and cultivating immortals. There is no fantasy or mystery, but the feeling of cultivating immortals in the underworld and cultivating immortals by eating people can be seen.

Mixed and messy, with diverse abilities but no master in one. As you write, you forget even what abilities you have. Do you still want readers to remember it?

It's too much of a hodgepodge. The power of any system such as Tao, magic, Cthulhu, etc. Can be reached to the extreme. If you write about them all, it means that you can't explain each system clearly. The protagonist of Infinite Flow does not play this way, and the power system is relatively unified.

At present, I feel that the protagonist is a little constrained, but I still hope to see some big moves after reaching the common level and becoming a druid. I don't know whether the protagonist will adopt a solitary approach in the later stage or scatter his potions. I suggest you don't give out your sequence potions in the early stage, otherwise you will be very disgusted. Let's put it this way, it is easy for readers to feel that you have given away the characteristics of the protagonist, that is, the pleasure you can get from it, and will send away some people who originally watched it. Of course, these are just some suggestions. It does not mean that you must not write like this. You can also do it this way when you are training your team in the middle and late stages. Otherwise, some of the things you just obtained in the early stage will be given away without knowing how much, which will make readers feel a little uncomfortable and may give up (the reason is still the same, which will break the perception of the protagonist). Even at any time, it is best not to touch the golden fingers that are originally set to belong to the protagonist. I also know some mysterious settings, sequences, potions, promotions and the like. However, we still hope that there will be no situation where, including touching the protagonist, he suddenly understands a potion sequence, or even suddenly acquires extraordinary characteristics, because this will easily make the viewer feel that the protagonist is also from the perspective of the reader, and is offended. This is not so comfortable. If the author wants to scatter the potion, it would be better to give a reasonable explanation after passing it through the protagonist's hands, and then have an ending. After seeing Dumbledore being influenced by the protagonist, I suddenly felt something was wrong. I feel that the author may be doing one of the above two situations, so leave a comment 🙂 If you really want to give Dumbledore If you want something, you can just use this druid form as a vest and give it directly. However, it is best to give it to the readers in a way that gives them the sense of security and comfort they need. This is the most important thing, otherwise it will become a poisonous point (conflict between the characters and the plot that the readers will take on). Of course, it depends on how the author wants to write it, because your golden fingers and some of the current rhythms are suitable for behind the scenes, or I can only follow this path, so I would like to ask, how will the plot be planned in the future? Correspondingly, how does the author plan to arrange the Harry Potter world as a novice village? Do I mean to directly use it as a transition in the early stage, or do I want to use it as the main character's base camp? Finally, I hope the author will write better and better, come on!

I bet 300,000 words on eunuch, and I lost 50 by the author v

It's really awesome writing. It doesn't have any literary flaws, nor does it have the common problem of Harry Potter turning into a child and becoming a child. I hope the author can stick to it. The first stage is to survive, the second stage is to initially solve the survival problem, and the third stage is to continue to become a god, pretend to be cool, and have fun at the same time. (Hope to keep the Madonna-free plot) Follow up to the end 🙂

The clone has no consciousness, it is really poisonous

Drive high and go low, Druid really didn't look after that

It has started high and gone low, and there are more and more problems as it goes on.

So does the name of the Supreme Mage really not change? No matter how powerful Marvel's Supreme Mage is, he only relies on strength. With the power of gods, you, Sequence Zero, are the true gods. If you say you are the Supreme Mage, you will naturally be shorter than other true gods, okay?

. . . The sequence was not well designed from the beginning. It feels far-fetched. Sequence Zero is even more outrageous than the Supreme Mage. Chun Chun didn't put any thought into it. Look at their Sequence Zero, Error Door, Fool, and a second creation paradox. This sounds right. I didn't see it. I slipped away.

I will tell you what I want to see later. The protagonist has a clone, and the clone has a separate consciousness, and can act alone and think by itself.

There is no need to hide it, the world of Harry Potter says that you are very strong, but you are also very weak... By the way, others don't know, but I am still very disgusted with the behavior of wearing vests. 99% Of wearing vests are just for the sake of improving the word count. I have read a book called Naruto. The protagonist has opened more than a dozen vests and established 2-3 organizations. Each organization can defeat the ninja world, and then the organizations are hostile to each other, and they fight against themselves every day...

After the Druid sequence, the book fell apart and became a complete mess.

The writing is very good, much better than those written by novices. No exaggeration, really. In the book reviews, some of the flaws mentioned by readers are minor problems, minor flaws, not worth mentioning. If you can ask the editor to recommend some resources to you, your level and quality are acceptable.

This book directly cancels the most exciting essence of the magical world, which is that all your wishes come true. After this is cancelled, writing about magic is purely selling people off.

As far as the first 30 chapters can be read, there is still the framework and context of the original work, but the rest can be said to be as nonsense as a dream. It comes as it comes to you. It has no logic and is commonly known as talking in a dream. Today I said I wanted to be a devil, and tomorrow I became a devil and conquered the world. The day after tomorrow I said I wanted to be a savior, so I became a savior. This is just looking at a hammer and talking in my sleep.

I don't know what I'm writing about, and it's really funny to write about a fan who doesn't understand the original work. And he always makes self-contradictory settings

Starting from Yulong, he rushed all the way towards Shibeng. . . Harry Potter is just a children's novel and cannot support the sequence at all, so when you see Harry Potter's lizard dragon, it is already foreseeable that the author forcibly transforms it into a dragon skill. . . What's next about how to transform the three pure states into one thing, why not even name it Baili xx. . . . I really can't understand it, I'm so stupid

Does the author usually read a lot of novels? Most clones with independent consciousness are very poisonous. How many of them are well written? Don't you feel awkward having another self? Most readers today feel poisonous when they see a clone. If you write to satisfy yourself, then feel free to do whatever you want. If you want results and make money, you should avoid plots that make readers dissatisfied.

Although the previous chapters of Druid were flawed, it was still readable. However, after Druid, it started to fall apart. Dumbledore and other supporting characters collectively lost their wits. If you don't revise the writing, it will probably lose popularity. After losing popularity, fewer people will read it. The author may not be able to persist at 300,000 words and it will be unfinished.

Starting from Druid, he is a bit of an idiot. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have collectively lost their IQ.

OK! Based on the "pathway" concept of "Lord of Mysteries" and the magic system of Hogwarts, I designed corresponding wizard path names for the four major colleges. Each path represents a different direction of magical growth, combining the characteristics of the academy and magical abilities, and is advanced in stages: --- ### **Gryffindor Path: Flame of the Brave** 1. **Sequence 9: Fearless Apprentice** (initial mastery of combat magic, budding courage) 2. **Sequence 8: Lion-Hearted Swordsman** (proficient in swordsmanship and fire spells, strong will) 3. **Sequence 7: Curse Breaking Vanguard** (break dark magic, lead the team to fight) 4. **Sequence 6: Glory Spirit** (summon guardian spirit beasts, stimulate group morale) 5. **Sequence 5: Red Flame Judge** (control destructive flames, charge alone) 6. **Sequence 4: Fearless Lord** (immune to fear in the field, dominate the battlefield) 7. **Sequence 3: Golden Griffin** (Transform into a mythical creature, tear apart space barriers) 8. **Sequence 2: Eternal War Song** (Reverse the cause and effect of the battle, grant immortality to allies) 9. **Sequence 1: Origin of Courage** (Become the incarnation of the concept of "brave") --- ### **Ravenclaw Path: Eyes of Wisdom** 1. **Sequence 9: Knowledge Apprentice** (photographic memory, basic spell analysis) 2. **Sequence 8: Spiritual Language Scholar** (talk to magical creatures, decipher ancient runes) 3. **Sequence 7: Time and Space Observer** (short prediction of the future, space folding calculation) 4. **Sequence 6: Memory Weaver** (tampering or implanting memory, construction of thinking maze) 5. **Sequence 5: Mirror of Truth** (reflects enemy magic, analyzes the essence of all things) 6. **Sequence 4: Star Fortune Teller** (observes destiny constellations, avoids fatal crises) 7. **Sequence 3: Arcane Sage** (creates new spells, rewrites magic rules) 8. **Sequence 2: Book of Omniscient** (knowledge is power, spells do not need to be chanted) 9. **Sequence 1: Wisdom and Authority** (incarnation of "knowledge" itself, insight into the truth of the universe) --- ### **Hufflepuff Path: Heart of the Earth** 1. **Sequence 9: Farming Apprentice** (accelerates plant growth, heals minor injuries) 2. **Sequence 8: Ring of Guardian** (summons earth and stone barriers, purifies toxins) 3. **Sequence 7: Life Resonator** (Share vitality, pacify magic riots) 4. **Sequence 6: Fertility Priest** (Instantly ripen magic plants, summon food) 5. **Sequence 5: Unbreakable Fortress** (Create an absolute defense field, immune to mental control) 6. **Sequence 4: Earthline Controller** (Manipulate the terrain, extract the energy of the earth) 7. **Sequence 3: The Holy Spirit of Nature** (symbiosis with animals and plants, transforming into a giant tree or a herd of beasts) 8. **Sequence 2: Seed of Reincarnation** (reborn from the land after death, protecting a living being) 9. **Sequence 1: Eternal Monument** (becoming the embodiment of the concept of "guarding") --- ### **Slytherin Path: Serpent of Shadows** 1. **Sequence 9: Shadow Apprentice** (invisibility, basic black magic defense) 2. **Sequence 8: Venomous Fang Warlock** (prepare potions and poisons, control snakes) 3. **Sequence 7: Legilimency** (read thoughts, implant hints and lies) 4. **Sequence 6: Blood Curse Lord** (conclude contracts to enslave others, blood magic) 5. **Sequence 5: Abyss Gazer** (Summons dark creatures, corroding the opponent's mind) 6. **Sequence 4: Scales of Immortality** (The body is nearly immortal, backlashes the attacker) 7. **Sequence 3: Ouroboros Shadow** (Creates a time loop, swallows the enemy's existence) 8. **Sequence 2: Scepter of Chaos** (Distorts the rules of reality, spreads madness and betrayal) 9. **Sequence 1: Lord of the Night** (Controlling the origin of "ambition" and dominating the dark dimension) --- ### Special settings: - **Sequence 0 (uniqueness)**: Only one person can reach the top and needs to integrate the relics of the founder of the academy (such as the Sword of Gryffindor, the Crown of Ravenclaw, etc.). - **Risk of loss of control**: Over-reliance on black magic (Slytherin) may transform into a basilisk, and abuse of wisdom (Ravenclaw) may fall into a "knowledge desert" and become a living book demon. - **Magical Characteristics**: Hufflepuff wizards are stronger in the natural environment, and Slytherins are twice as powerful in the dark or in the secret room, in line with the original academy style. (You can freely expand or adjust sequence capabilities~)

Read 20 chapters. I couldn't resist the desire to complain. Write a path that has never been imagined in the mysterious world. "Get into the Seiran!" The author, a genius at the beginning, lets the player and the player exchange cars. Yuantai and Kezi are all living in the essence. The birthplace of your protagonist is not in Sephiroth, but at the gate of Sephiroth. Without giving him any favors, the door to the source of matter was locked tightly. The protagonist is shut out. The author's idol Huang Chao. Do not choose to pretend to open the door. Choose to let the protagonist open more trumpets and divide the troops to fight in. Indeed, Huang Chao once said that entering Jingbi and entering Jingyi. It is a good way to enter the essence. The Underworld Emperor and the Blood Emperor both call him an expert.

The following is the complete wizard sequence path corresponding to the four major houses of Hogwarts (Sequence 9 to Sequence 1), including abilities at each stage, symbolic rituals and potential dangers: --- ### **Gryffindor Path - "Knight of the Blazing Heart"** **Core Creed**: Courage forges the sword, and uses blood to cleanse the haze of the world. **Alienation Characteristics**: Hair color gradually turns red/Pupils are on fire during combat/Lava oozes from the wounds of high-sequencers | Sequence | Name | Ability | Promotion Ceremony | Sign of Loss of Control | |-------|-------|-------|----------|----------| | 9 | Fearless Apprentice | Basics of Fire Spells/Sword Skill Intuition/Pain Dullness | Fighting an adult Hippogriff with a wooden sword | Burning spontaneously when losing control of emotions | | 8 | Fire Swordsmen | Flame shaping (shield/whip)/Group morale boosting | Lighting a 100-foot wall of fire in the Quidditch field | Afraid of cold environments | | 7 | Dawn Herald | Holy Flame enchanted weapons/purifying dark creatures | Rescued 3 people from the Dementors alone | Burning cracks on the skin | | 6 | War Song Commander | Sonic flame shock/Temporarily berserk teammates | Command 50 people to sing war songs to repel the Inferi tide | Permanent hearing damage | | 5 | Sun Judge | Summon the sun chariot/break high-level curses | Kill hundreds of dark wizards at noon (need to leave alive) | Unable to sleep in the dark night | | 4 | Red Watch | Flame teleportation (300 yards)/Crystallization of fighting spirit | Sit quietly for three days and three nights in the fierce fire | Blood temperature reaches boiling point | | 3 | Nirvana | Phoenix form (once a day)/Resurrection of fallen comrades | Active death and rebirth by will | Cyclic amnesia | | 2 | Sin-burning Apostle | Conceptual burning (lie/betrayal)/Fire prophecy | Burn the most cherished things | Lose the sense of taste and fear | | 1 | Lord of the Blazing Heart | Casting the "Sanctuary of Courage"/Summoning the Legion of Heroic Spirits | Opening up a land of hope in the doomsday battlefield | The heart is forever burning and irreversible | --- ### **Slytherin Path - "Apostle of the Serpent"** **Core Creed**: Ambition is a ladder, and venom corrodes the chains of rules. **Alienation Characteristics**: Vertically shrunken pupils/bifurcated tongue/high-sequence people can shed their skin and be reborn | Sequence | Name | Ability | Promotion Ceremony | Loss of Control Signs | |-------|-------|-------|-----------|----------| | 9 | Servant of the Viper | Parseltongue/Basic Poison Spells/Underwater Breathing | Swallowing Live Vipers | Skin Keratinization | | 8 | Blood Curse | Blood Spellcasting/Creating Magic Contracts | Writing Oaths with the Blood of Close Relatives | Generating Vampiric Desires | | 7 | Shadow Reign | Shadow Control/Creating Illusions of Fear | Usurping the Inheritance of a Pure-blood Family | Unable to Shine the Sun | | 5 | Immortal Serpent | Liquid body/memory theft | Replace the identity of a high-ranking Ministry of Magic official | Monthly excruciating pain of molting | | 4 | Usurper of authority | Temporarily seize other people's magical talents | Kill the superior in a duel | Fingerprints disappear | | 3 | Final Apostle | Create a conceptual vacuum (withdraw oxygen/gravity) | Destroy a thousand-year-old magical relic | Lose the ability to speak human language | | 2 | Lord of the Abyss | Control the dementor group/create eternal night | Sacrifice the entire pure-blood family | Translucent body | | 1 | Throat of Annihilation | Devour the origin of magic/modify the law of blood | Swallow the magic stone and the elder wand alive | Permanent snake mimicry | --- ### **Ravenclaw path - "Starry Sky Weaver"** **Core Creed**: Knowledge is the blade, use logic to deconstruct gods **Alienation Characteristics**: Iris star map flow/crystal growth in hair/quantization of the body of high-sequencers | Sequence | Name | Ability | Promotion Ceremony | Sign of Loss of Control | |-------|-------|-------|----------|----------| | 9 | Apprentice of Truth | Reverse analysis of spells/photographic memory | Solve 30 alchemical puzzles in a row | Compulsive collection of books | | 8 | Rune Academician | Magic text materialization/space pocket | Rewrite "History of Magic" with runes | Text phobia | | 7 | Time track observer | Foresee 5 seconds of the future/local time loop | Use 12 time turners at the same time | Memory sequence is disordered | | 6 | Concept sculptor | Modify the nature of objects (water turns into wine) | Create perpetual magic devices | Unable to understand metaphors | | 5 | Sage of Imaginary Numbers | Seal other people's magical abilities/steal thoughts | Spend ten years in a pensieve | Lack of emotional modularity | | 4 | Paradox Weaver | Create logical traps/modify physical constants | Prove a certain magic theorem is wrong | 26-hour memory hole | | 3 | Protoss incarnation | Quantum jump/manipulate probability | Reconstructing the brain's neural network under the stars | Losing the stability of the material form | | 2 | Law Breaker | Temporarily disabling certain types of magic (such as the Unforgivable Curse) | Destroying the Prophecy Hall of the Department of Mysteries | Disconnection between cognition and reality | | 1 | Truth Embodier | Writing new magical laws/creating microcosms | Transforming the brain into a living star map | Spreading thoughts into the multiverse | --- ### **Hufflepuff Path - "Guardian of the Earth's Lines"** **Core Creed**: Benevolence turns fertile soil, fighting the increase of entropy with life **Alienation Characteristics**: Emitting earthy fragrance/Wounds scab quickly/High-sequence people's bodies become vegetative | Sequence | Name | Ability | Promotion Ceremony | Signs of Loss of Control | |------|------|------|----------|----------| | Page 9 Physical regeneration/soil alchemy | Establish a sustainable ecosystem | Root-like blood vessel proliferation | | 5 | Leyline Walker | Control earthquakes/summon stone giants | Calm down volcanic eruptions | Rock the soles of the feet | | 4 | Mother tree incarnation | Create magical plant species | Graft magical biological genes | Blooming period of confusion | | 3 | Protector of civilization | Build a magic enchanted city | Transfer the fire of endangered civilizations | Part of the body is crystallized | | 2 | Witness of reincarnation | Read land memory/soul reincarnation | Bury and resurrect oneself | Lose the concept of age | | 1 | Gaia agent | Manipulate continental plates/rewrite the code of life | Spawn forests in the center of nuclear explosions | Synchronize with the pulse of the earth | --- ### Common promotion rules: 1. **Sequence Suppression**: High-ranking sequences can sense the status of lower-ranking ones (except for the Ravenclaw pathway) 2. **Anchor Point Requirements**: Sequence 4 and above need to establish a spiritual anchor point (such as Gryffindor's Oath, Slytherin's Horcrux) 3. **Characteristic Conflict**: Cross-pathway learning will lead to magic runaway (Hufflepuff pathway has the best compatibility) 4. **Final Price**: Sequence 1 must permanently assume the responsibility of patching loopholes in the world rules (Note: The specific values ​​and ritual details of each sequence can be adjusted according to the actual situation of the magic world, but the core concepts must not violate the spirit of the academy)

The self-titled article is okay at the beginning, but becomes too messy to read later.

The front part of Split Soul is good, but the back part is not good.

The first few dozen chapters were pretty good. I thought they were very satisfying and I finally ordered a copy of them all. However, I quickly fell out of control. After the clones were created, it was no longer interesting, but it was still acceptable. Later, I went to Swordsman and played another one that I really couldn't stand.

The characters are not full-bodied, and the emotional lines are too abrupt and hasty. Dry

The first part was okay, but the part about getting a clone was too outrageous.