Reincarnation: The Evolution from Pigeon to Angel

What kind of writing is this? The protagonist can just become a god whenever he wants? Author, are you kidding me? He gets a godhood based on a mere fantasy concept? Let's see how you write next. 😐😐😐

I thought you were talking about plagiarism in this book, but it turns out it's from outside the site. I searched several platforms and found that there are already books on the theme of angels. So there's no point in me writing it, and then I get accused of plagiarism. It's really annoying.

Youth and vitality Youth can extend to be the guardian angel of teenagers, encompassing beauty and charm. Vitality can be extended to life, movement, and harmony. Actually, if the protagonist were to be a god of great importance to the world, without particularly strong offensive capabilities...

Since your content overlaps somewhat with the book next door, why not make it themed around angelic faith and avoid racial themes? Yours is simply about the protagonist leading his own protagonist toward angels. Another type of angel genre features a protagonist who directly becomes an angel, albeit a false god, and then needs to have faith to become a true god.

Writing novels is already defying fate; dying on the road is quite normal.

The answer has already been given by Western mythology; it's clear that we should follow the path of Jehovah or Zeus.

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It's well-written, but the dialogue and transitions are a bit abrupt, though not a major issue. The subject matter and perspective are excellent; I've only read one similar book on Hedgehog Cat, but that one had a god-like perspective. However, that book was delayed, which is a shame, given how often books are delayed. I want to say, author, keep it up! I still want to see it finished.

When will the Titans be slain? Suddenly, a madman sharpens his blade in the night, the imperial star flickers, and Mars shines high! I want to see rivers of blood flow!

The three golden chapters were well-written, but even during the initial release period, the padding was quite noticeable.