Lord of Hustle and Bustle

Let's complain, this stupid author forgot the meaning of naming the protagonist Song Ke.

Stop raising it, it will raise it to death if you keep it anymore.

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It's okay. The author's writing style shows good potential, and he can build the story framework with clear ideas. At the same time, he also put a lot of effort into character creation, making the characters three-dimensional and expressing natural emotions. They are considered a relatively promising group among new authors. Although there is still room for improvement in writing and plot design, this spirit of courage in creation is an important factor in becoming an excellent writer.

In the past few days, I will probably go through all the previous content and connect it to the rest of the story. During this period, I will roughly change the content of each chapter, mainly changing and expanding some details. It doesn't matter whether you read it again or not. The author's main plot will not be changed.

The writing is clear and the words and sentences are good, but it looks a bit messy. Come on, don't be a eunuch.