Ke Xue: This Police Officer Is Too Virtuous

I hope the protagonist of this book is not a pervert, and the heroine must not be Haihara Ai again. Nowadays, the heroine of Conan fan fiction is Haihara Ai, and I almost vomited. Nine out of ten Conan books have heroines named Haihara Ai. Even if some of the heroines are not Haihara Ai, the protagonists in them also treat Haihara Ai as a princess. I really don't understand why Haihara Ai is that good? There are a lot of women in Detective Conan who are more miserable than Haibara Ai

What kind of ghost could pull off such a plot? The instructor was hoisted up. The two of them stepped on the shoulder height. Instead of quickly finding a ladder, they went to assemble a firearm, find a bullet, and wanted to shoot off the rope. A large group of police academy students, even if you use a personal ladder 😅 The protagonist was thoughtful during the process because others said that he was quick to assemble and had a strong fist. He was a bit pretentious.

Previously, it was more appropriate for Makino to call Megure the police department, but here, although Megure is older, it is not appropriate to call someone with a higher position than himself, the brother. Japanese professional titles are still relatively serious, and now the protagonist Makino's position is a police officer, and he will not do everything personally like the police department or the police department. Some small cases are handed over to the people below to handle, and subordinates must always be given a chance. Those with more serious plots and difficult cases can almost be handled personally. After all, now he has a reputation.

The protagonist is a graduate of Tokyo University, but it is not stable enough. It is better to add a graduate of the Faculty of Law. Nine of the ten top police officers are graduates of the University of Tokyo, and among these nine, 7 are graduates of the Faculty of Law.

The heroine is Suzuki Ayako. One thing to say is that Suzuki Ayako's face is too obvious and she is not as good-looking as her mother. Her mother is more beautiful😋

Author, your plot jumps too fast... It gives me the feeling that I don't know how to write without being separated from the original work, and I want to get into the main plot immediately. As a result, all the other supporting characters were written like tool men. Obviously there is a lot more to be written about the police academy, but in the end, there is no change at all when the protagonist is inserted. I need to write more about the comrades-in-arms and let the protagonist have some chemical reactions. If you want to write Ayako as the heroine, you should dig deeper and write at least some emotional scenes. And why does the protagonist suddenly change his appearance? Why did you contact the FBI? How come the protagonist is not a management officer but suddenly confronts a winery? It's not like you're setting up a suspense, it's like you're preparing the eunuch to just lay out the outline. There is no need to rush into the main story of Conan and skip all the places that should be written. You are already on alert now that you have only written 100,000 words.

The gangsters kidnapped hostages and just called a bunch of police academy students and left? Going without any equipment? What's even more outrageous is that the teacher knew about it and still covered it up? Don't say that the Conan police are useless. No matter how much they say, they are regular law enforcement agencies and they are equipped with weapons and equipment.

I hope the heroine is Reiko Akiba, her new name is Kahori, Asami Uchida

When it comes to Nergigante, we have to tell a story about traveling to the end of the world with your beloved🤓

I've only read Chapter 5 and there are a lot of people criticizing Matsuda. Is your book aimed at so many primary school students?

Maybe it's because the plot hasn't developed yet, it's quite boring.

No, your current rhythm is weird. Have you noticed it? Just write like you did at the beginning. Now you just skip a chapter for a while, and then there is no warning or anything. It looks like you are trying to speed up the appendix in the later period.

Seeing that the position was already so high before it was put on the shelves, except for major and extremely large cases, it is basically impossible to personally intervene in the frontline handling of cases. Without the support of individual cases, only running accounts are left. At this rate, there is only one possibility of unfinished work.

So far, I've been using my brain more than my hands, so why isn't it exciting yet?

I hope the heroine is Momiji Ooka and has a good figure and good net worth.

Things have changed much since Conan appeared.

The beauties in Conan like the most, Reiko Akiwa, whose new names are Kaori Kaori, Natsumi Kasaka, Reika Yoshino, Reiko Suzuki, and Kimie Shimabukuro. I hope these people will be the heroines. Of course Hideko Kamijou, Eri Fei, Yukiko Kudo, and Prosecutor Kujo are also great beauties.

It didn't earn enough to be put on the shelves. How can I put it? The writing is actually not bad, but it's really a running account, mediocre and unattractive...

Isn't Sister Bei delicious? Isn't Concubine Xizhi Yingli fragrant? Doesn't Mary smell good? Isn't Fujiko delicious? It's no longer a bus if it's a comprehensive comic.

I find that many authors like to confuse the theater version and the TV version. As we all know, the theater version and the TV version of Japanese anime are not the same thing at all. That's why Kyogoku Makoto appears in the theatrical version, punching out marble pillars and kicking satellites. I don't know if anyone has noticed it yet. One punch exploded the marble. , This kind of operation basically only appears in the early stages of the anime, and is missing in the hundreds of episodes later. Of course I am talking about TV, I strongly disagree with a novel emphasizing combat power levels. This thing should be a vague description.

Author, can the protagonist not use the method of predicting the plot to solve the case? What should the protagonist do if a major case occurs that has not appeared in the plot? Also, the protagonist intervenes in cases in other areas without authorization. This is a taboo in the political world. Unless invited, the protagonist is not allowed to intervene in cases in other areas without authorization.

There is almost nothing to write about now. The case in the latest chapter of the comic is directly about the prisoner. The new case uses criminal profiling, and does not include much content directly describing the characteristics of the prisoner. Even if the organization is destroyed by trouble, there is no big advancement.

Author, the protagonist position is set so high! Do you think it's appropriate to rush to the front line alone every time?

Book recommendation, Detective in the Detective World 🙂

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

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Can we include the plot of the search for the first section chief?

The system is a failure! Those abilities at the beginning are enough!

What about the new book? When will it be released? Can't wait

In the first few chapters, the protagonist recognizes a boss. The author keeps saying that Datehang has a charismatic leader and can direct this and call the shots. You are cheating and you are in the professional group, are you rebelling against Tiangang?