Heroic Spirit: Love Debts from Past Lives Have Nothing to Do with Me

Come on brother, you can write more

In the past, when I read other books, if they didn't look good, I just stopped reading them. But the early writing of this book was very satisfying, so I can't help but talk about it now. I know that the author of this book didn't want to write a good book, but don't be too upset. There was so much brewing in the Battle of the Canyon, and the scene was so foreshadowed, but it ended like this, which made me feel very regretful. Especially since it is on the shelves, it should obviously appear as the climax of the previous part of the plot. Personally, I think the plot of the male protagonist pretending to die didn't work. It's like he didn't shake off the baggage and did nothing in the dark. He became the mascot military advisor for a few chapters and then came back. Also, I know this is not an invincible style, but at least let the systematic male protagonist feel a little better. There is no problem with the subject matter, but there is a problem with the plot. The emotional plot and writing style are not enough to drive other parts, so don't write it like a literary youth novel, and add some clichéd Internet writing methods.

How can I put it, it would be better to play female videos?

It's well written, but it's a bit literate in places.

Let me add one more thing. Why is the turn so sudden? After the protagonist has received cultivation initiation, what is he going to do? If he wants to be thorough, he must expose his cultivation in front of Wei Jingxue's parents. The son-in-law is still arrogant and domineering. You beat up his servants and broke up with his parents. How can you stay in the house? You want Wei Jingxue's silver armor in return. Don't you act like a fool? If you want to go through the plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, you have to keep a low profile. If you want to cut off from the Hou Mansion, if you don't want to be stubborn, just go ahead and make a five-year agreement. System cultivation will be initiated, Mu Guiying will come to vote, and three thousand assassins will be rewarded. With such strong confidence, you might as well run away. You and the heroine went to Shenfeng Mountain, waded in the muddy water, and then were ridiculed by all the people who were traveling with the princess. It was really poisonous, and it made us very divided If you don't want to be stubborn, you quickly use three thousand assassins to establish your own power in the world, and then continue to become stronger. In the end, the heroines from the past life come to the protagonist. Now you are accompanying someone as a chess piece as a shield. Maybe you want to say that you are pretending to be cool and slapped in the face along the way to Shenfeng Mountain, but this is just an attempt to make a fool of yourself. That's all the suggestions, other places can be used, just reduce the literary and green flavor, it has the appearance of food and grass 😜

In fact, when I wrote this novel, I knew mentally that this book would not be very popular. After all, most of the plots in today's online novels are about showing off in front of others and pretending to be a slap in the face, which seems too alternative. It can be said that my type of story is indeed niche. But Qidian has an advantage, that is, it allows the author to make new attempts at subject matter and story plots, and of course he is responsible for his success or failure. Many readers come to read this online article based on the traditional novice style. In fact, the idea of ​​defeating monsters and leveling up, then becoming invincible, the God of War fighting in all directions, and dominating the world, with countless heroines prostrating themselves under the bell-bottoms of the protagonist, may be disappointing after reading this book. When I read that the male protagonist of this book does not seem to be invincible, he is not fighting everywhere, and he does not seem to sleep with each other. He is just a teddy dog ​​who picks flowers when he sees them. I feel that it does not look like a serious harem novel. Actually, it's my fault that I didn't make it clear, because the theme of this book is the love-hate entanglement between the protagonist and all kinds of heroic spirits. There are sorrows and joys, sufferings and joys, reunions and partings, emotions and regrets. This book is also a cool article, but the cool thing about it is not the invincible posture, pretending to be in front of others, countless people prostrate themselves, and then the enemy kneels down and sings of conquest. The best thing about this book is that from beginning to end, it is exciting to love and to be loved. Eighty people in the world live alone. They may have loved and cared for others, but few have had a significant other, or have met the one who truly loves and cares for them. So I, a lonely widow, thought of this theme and compiled a series of unrealistic stories. After all, when it comes to feelings, to be honest, reality is too pale and cold. In reality, there is no shortage of sincere emotions between men and women that make people moved and warm. But in everything, we are afraid to talk about probability. After all, most people know in their hearts the probability of encountering that kind of relationship. Then put things that are impossible in reality into the novel, so that people who read this novel can feel the feeling of loving others and being loved. After all, this is a novel. The reality is too cold to allow many people to love and be loved wildly. It also does not allow people to have an earth-shattering and vigorous love in the novel. Even if it is fake, it should always give people some room for fantasy. Of course, my writing skills may be limited and I may not be able to include touching plots in every chapter, but I will continue to work hard to write this niche online novel. This book is about loving and being loved. Some people say that this genre is suitable for female videos. When I wrote it, I only considered the plot and didn't think much about it. But I feel that as long as this online article touches the readers for a moment, a plot, or a sentence, I feel that it was not in vain. So in this web article, all plots, all characters, including the protagonist, are written around love and being loved. Because of this, some plots may be different from the pretentious and slap-in-the-face routines of most online novels, or the fast-paced writing style. The purpose is to highlight the key chapters under the foreshadowing of many chapters, to create an instant touch and an instant warmth. I also hope that all readers can understand, and I would like to thank all book friends for their support of this work. Thank you all.

Everything is good, both the writing and the plot are good, but it's just too literary for young people. I hope there will be less plots about eachother in the future. It gives me goosebumps.

Nima, I only raised her for a week, and now she's entering the palace 😆

Adding a person who actually knows it is a bit of a drama

Since heroic spirits are marked, it's best to quote fate's settings. The best thing not to lack is the Noble Phantasm. This setting can improve it a lot, especially the empress.

Big brother, please update again, the third update in the middle of the night 🥺

The plot is okay, quite satisfactory, but there are a few issues I want to talk about. Is the first simulated protagonist's attitude towards his father too unkind? What if the man who died in the trap was not a bandit and the woman was not Duan Qiushui? The father's attitude has always been towards his son, including the mention that he is even willing to spend 30 taels of silver to quell the incident. This is already depleting the family's wealth, but the protagonist's attitude has always been as if this is a game? If this is really a game, does the protagonist really love Duan Qiushui, or is he just trying to increase his favorability?

Can't the protagonist recognize Duan Qiushui?

Update it earlier, twelve o'clock is really too late 😚

You are also a eunuch. I want to try writing the subsequent plot to see if it can be successful. Can it work? The author is great