Full-Time Hunters Just Want to Make a Little Money

You can tell it's AI at a glance, and the starting point has now become a garbage dump.

What is written here? The invincible protagonist forces a 50-50 fight with the brigade? It's like the 8-year-old Chaoying next door, who was still fighting wits with F4 in Konoha He was too hung up, and then he had to forcefully eat the traffic of the original characters, and the result became completely different.

It is obvious that he is the strongest human being in the world, but he is tied up by a troupe whose abilities are clear in the original work. Nobunaga couldn't win in a single fight. What's the point of being the protagonist? If you want to make money, you might as well just stay in hiding and hide in the dark forever.

May I ask, Sir, does One Piece have a general whose physical strength can only last ten minutes?

Isn't the male protagonist a fool? Are you going to rush to the front in the Hokage War? Do you think you are Naruto? In the world of pirates, don't you have the invincible power to kill the Celestial Dragons and get kicked in the head by a donkey? I don't see how an idiot like Luffy can do such a thankless thing.

I am full-time, the Ant King can punch the Four Kings, and kick Uchiha Madara. Argue if you are not convinced

The protagonist has a brain problem. If you don't mind, don't enter. Anyway, I can't handle it. I can only say that pigs are smarter than the protagonist.

Bisuki's strength should be considered powerful in the brigade, right? The protagonist crushes Bisuki but is evenly matched with Nobunaga? Don't understand

Hunter supports, I hope there will be no eunuchs! !

If you compare it to the picture, the pirate is more destructive than the hunter, right? May I ask which general or candidate in the Navy is unable to fight for a long time? I want to see who it is?

Does the protagonist only have two devil fruits? Did the protagonist feed the Shashao Fruit to a woman with a C+ talent who wanted to kill him without any means of recycling?

The writing is too messy, here and there

If you eat the Thunder Fruit, will you still be killed by the cPO?

This introduction, are you a rich man who traveled through time? Still passionate?

After watching the Naruto game, it is indeed becoming more and more boring. I feel like I have lost sight of it, so the complaints made by some authors at the beginning are interesting. The main character setting is too energy-saving. He just joins the battle with the brigade. There are basically no other major plots. None of the highlight characters I know are described in depth. It is also called lazy cancer 😅. Even his subordinates have no arcs. The character description is flat, and the plot is still very streamlined. In particular, I feel that the author doesn't know much about Hunter, and at most he only watches anime seriously. If you want to make money by writing about Hunter, I'm not satisfied with it. There is not much popularity in this circle.

The design of telekinesis ability is difficult to describe in one word, and the understanding of the hunter's telekinesis ability system is too poor.

I haven't finished the first chapter yet. No matter how many times I wear pig's feet, they are dead.

Just from reading the introduction, I can think that even if you die, you can be resurrected in another world. So why bother just wandering around? It's just a matter of changing the world.

It's so unimaginable to write about Thunder Fruit in the world of Hunter. No matter how you write it, it will never satisfy people. If you were to write a superhuman fruit with special abilities, it would not be usable just after time travel, and it would be better than that when it automatically awakens after being read. The most important thing is that the superhuman brain is relatively simple and matches the telekinesis ability relatively well.

You are, oh, it turns out you want to make some money from me.

Can you change the introduction...

Are you still a full-time hunter? I'm off topic. Three guns

What the hell is that? It's so speechless and illogical. It looks very awkward.

This is fucking shit, dirty eyes

Focus on an abstraction

What is this written about? Did you say you just want to make money?

The introduction looks like a mess. The author is not very old, probably only 13 years old.