
I Support the Entire Salvation Organization by Myself
我一人撑起整个救世组织
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- 1.4M Words
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- Eastern Fantasy
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- Male
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- High-Martial World
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- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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It's all ordered. It's obvious that the author is not experienced enough🤔
The next few books will follow the same path, tinkering and adding some popular harem elements, maybe it will become a god, but the writing of this An is a bit too abrupt and out of tune. (Either this An is not written at the beginning, pure behind the scenes, or it is better to simply set it without emotions. It is written with a sane mind that keeps teasing the protagonist without starting, and the readers will be enthusiastic after reading it) In addition, I will give you all the monthly tickets for An 😋
I like the creativity very much. The logic is really flawed. There are too many intelligence manipulations. The strongest local official combat power can only be regarded as high-end cannon fodder in the mid-range game. Thousands of people died unnaturally in a month. The mysterious organization of villains who are said to only live in the dark and little-known ones has a thriving population. The combat power is so strong that no protagonist can push it all the way. The so-called low-key behavior is to advertise and brainwash extraordinary people in the city to make monsters, a bunch of monsters wearing human skin. Monsters occupy temples in local tourist attractions. There are a lot of large-scale abnormal disasters. None of the above combat forces have been here. They are all municipal-level units rescuing each other. There is a clear distinction between the two cities, and each other does not know the abnormal organizations facing the other. There are also things like Dabai being regarded as a trustworthy person no matter how suspicious he is. Conspiracy loudly in public places. Things can only be done in a single thread. You have to attack the sarcastic character. In short, it is a pity.
Full order, make a summary
I've read two hundred chapters so far, mainly because I like the subject matter and want to see how bad it can be. . . Not because I like it. First, the villain's design is stupid. For example, after spending dozens of chapters setting the stage, using an entire city's cultists as sacrifices, and spending two chapters summoning an evil god near the city, it died with zero harm to civilians. So what exactly was it attacking the building after it had been attacking the building for a long time? Concrete lovers love buildings, right? The villain likes to let the protagonist off at every turn. The first big hero at the beginning, when there is no legendary combat power in the entire city, he is invincible, and the speed is first, he cannot catch the hero. I don't know how they could prevent him from sneaking up on the male protagonist and catching Xiaobai at the same time. The two new lords in the temple at the back are even more humorous. In the last chapter, he was still furious because his subordinates were eliminated by the Executive Bureau. In the next chapter, he let the Executive Bureau go in one sentence. He thought they had some conspiracy to let the tiger return to the mountains. However, within a few chapters, he was directly ordered to death by the Executive Bureau. To describe it as a little Tang Dynasty person is a compliment😅. 2. The male protagonist is designed to be humorous. He clearly knows that he is in danger, but he still asks him out after a phone call from a stranger. The key is that he doesn't want to go. I know you need a plot conflict to advance the plot, but can you write it worse and more far-fetched? For a game, no information can be found on the entire Internet, and it can still be played when the Internet is disconnected. The plot development speed is consistent with the flow of time in the real world. I don't know how stupid people are to not guess that there is something wrong with this game. When I played Plants vs. Zombies in elementary school, I knew how to change the system time to collect garden plants. When the male protagonist saw that there was something wrong with the game, he didn't know to change the time or use the system process to check the foundation of the game. 3. Inconsistencies in the plot In the early stage, Wu Ji was like a wild dog on the roadside in the dark hall and was taken away by a trickster. After a few chapters, he became "the ultimate genius who has not received the protagonist's equipment", "the ultimate genius of the twelve-year-old celestial being" and "the most talented person in the entire Tianqing Temple". No, buddy, where did your extraordinary perception go when you were attacked by a sneak attack in the early stage? You were kicked to death like a wild dog. Now let's say that you are awesome without relying on the male protagonist. The lighthouse is even more humorous. It says that evil spirits have no way to hide. When the plot requires it, they are so clever that they can see everything. When the male protagonist needs to have a conflict, the villain doesn't even fart in his face.
Why are all the apostles female?
Don't say that all male videos have to be female. This is not a harem story. If you want to write about a harem, you can write about a harem in addition to the apostles. Do the all-female apostles like office romances? I have never seen a few hot articles on male videos that are all about women. It makes it seem like there are only women in the world, which is illogical in itself. My feeling when reading this kind of novel is that I clearly know that I am reading a harem novel made up by the author, not a story. Obviously, the story is far more attractive than the harem novel, which makes readers continue reading. The harem novel will basically be over once the female character is written out. If some people think that apostles equal harem, rather than women equal harem, and writing about men is disgusting themselves, then I can only say that it is a bit retarded, and it is also a little bit funny when it competes with the male characters in the novel.
Chapter 41, Goldfinger is currently purely strengthening his subordinates, and the protagonist is still an ordinary person
Hurry up and let the protagonist discover the connection between the game and reality, otherwise there is a high chance of being thrown into the street
I saw 163 in one go
Disadvantages: Eat heartily Akaashi Advantages: Eat heartily
Abstract, all the operators are female, right? Isn't that too outrageous?😥😥
Remind the author that you are writing a novel
You are cheating, and then the protagonist is forced to be safe in the center of the storm and does not know anything The summary is that the protagonist's halo plus ideological enlightenment (wisdom halo) The protagonist can be temporarily kept in the dark, but it cannot be almost 100 chapters and still be in the dark This is the poor protagonist who has cheated and cannot control his own life Readers don't mind knowing the true nature of the world at the end of the novel, but you're already 200,000 words short at the beginning, and the protagonist doesn't know the basics of the world yet, so it's really dragging you down It was so uncomfortable to read, I kept reading just to see when the protagonist would become a sensible person, but in the end he was still a fool Generally speaking, readers will be drawn into the protagonist when reading novels. Not many people would want the protagonist to be like a puppet who doesn't even know the truth and can't control his own life. No brainless novel would be written like this.
This is this online game, the title of the book is ridiculous
A story about the protagonist playing a stand-alone computer, an ordinary person without any abilities. The title of the book is not supported by one person. The protagonist basically has no role and no character characteristics.
Seeing small gains and forgetting one's righteousness; seeking big things but cherishing one's own life
The protagonist is the kind of small character who can only run errands as a villain, with no plan and no purpose. Complaining constantly for petty profits, serious investment and mother-in-law. It has the aesthetic feeling of a farmer suffering from stomach perforation due to irregular eating for a long time in order to save ten yuan. It is a classic of small farmer thought. In addition, in this book, the system does everything. The only thing left is that the system takes care of the male protagonist. I can't say whether it's the male protagonist or a puppet.
This kind of writing usually knocks the protagonist's IQ to the ground and rubs it hard. When will the protagonist's IQ come back online? What's even more annoying is that the protagonist is being targeted without even knowing it, and he just manages to escape through luck every time. This kind of deliberate plot has an indescribable feeling.
The protagonist has been playing for so long, but his abilities have not improved at all. It seems that the author has no intention of letting him know in the early stage that he is playing a real game. If this world is connected to another world, it would be fine, but in the same world, playing this game, giving away various treasures, he is still an ordinary person, isn't it awkward? The author can write something different if he wants, but at least the protagonist must have the ability to protect himself? Tell me what's the benefit of making the protagonist so weak?
At present, participating in the class reunion is really a failure. 1. You, a protagonist who can make a robot puppet that can pinch your face at will, can participate in the memorial service of your classmates. 2. The protagonist's soul has no memory. Are you afraid that you won't have enough acquaintances when attending a classmate's memorial service? 3. The forces that have thoughts about you have to go out to hang out even though they have two big bosses that they can't defeat. It's not that you have no brains. This is only possible when your brain is controlled by 🐷
Chapter 150, in a world of high martial arts, the protagonist is a noob?
Too bad, the identity of the Holy Master is known to the apostle with the least loyalty. Author, just be happy 😅
Is this appropriate to write?
Is it appropriate to accept a young man and hand over all the information? If you believe the government so much, the bigger the body, the more garbage there will be, and it will make you sick just looking at it. I prefer cooperation rather than letting the protagonist pull a kid who may betray the real-life identities of all the apostles. You can give her a special position, but you can't train Er Wuzi and let her know about betraying the lighthouse information. Do you think it's reasonable to kidnap a person who has been groomed for more than ten years in just a few months? It feels like a fork in the middle of a cake. 😅
So far, there are no big problems, but there is one thing that is quite confusing. What is the reason why the villain can see that the protagonist is extraordinary at a glance? What is the principle that cannot be discovered by decent people? Does the protagonist have an aura of ridicule?
Advantages: The setting is innovative. Disadvantages: The protagonist has a low IQ, which is manifested in the fact that he quickly accepts the identity after time travel without understanding his own experience, and is unaware of the danger; the danger of forced intelligence reduction, an ordinary person in Chapter 40, and has been in fatal danger many times, but he relied on good luck to get help from others and escaped from danger without noticing. Summary: A somewhat novel poisonous weed.
I just ate it this morning. I just like to break it off myself. How else can I put it? It's become a bad habit. I don't know how to describe it
The plot behind this is not only dull, but also very interesting. Every chapter is talking about the lack of lights. If you are short of lights, go and get it. Damn it, every chapter is repeated about the lack of lights and not getting the lights. It has always been like this, and when something good comes out, he opens the apostle's panel to look at it, and then says that it is not appropriate to give it now. Then when the apostle encounters trouble, he takes out the thing and introduces it and says to take a look first, and finally gives it to a certain apostle for no reason. When I read the latest chapter, I couldn't help but feel that there wasn't enough light and there were some inexplicable plots
As soon as I write about the traitor, I start to feel like I'm trying to force down my wits. Author, you'd better reorganize the outline. There's already a big problem at this point. You can ignore some things before and read on. But it's no longer possible at this point. To be precise, it's terrible. You can crush that traitor with sheer strength and you don't even have a single price. It has no value at all, and as a businessman who values value, he can't see the value of life-saving teleportation from a lighthouse. This is a very big problem. If it were replaced by Samsara Paradise, this guy without backing would just be treated as a t-shirt on the roadside by Su Xiao. He couldn't survive even a word, but you insist on starting at this point.
It has been stopped for three days. Is it broken or something happened? I think it's okay
After reading Chapter 119, I really don't know why An was asked to use Yue Jun's name to spread the word. Wouldn't it be exposed if the apostle held a meeting to exchange information? This is a bit poisonous to me for the time being 🙂
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