Naruto: Thunder Cloud Hidden, Destroying Konoha and Unifying the Ninja World

The Naruto timeline itself is contradictory and not particularly accurate.

It might have been possible ten years ago, but it's not popular now. The characters are well drawn, but there is not much useful content throughout the story. Some awkward dialogues and operations coupled with some unclear psychological descriptions, what is intended to be expressed cannot be conveyed to the readers, but instead makes people feel inexplicable and watery. There is a bit of writing style, maybe it's because an old guy from N years ago returned to his old career and hasn't adapted to today's novels.

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If you encounter a famous person in Konoha, should you kill the protagonist such as the Sannin? I'm really tired of reading novels with a million words about life and death and the finale where no one on the Konoha side dies. If Konoha is completely destroyed physically, then I will stick with this fanfic. If it is just the title of Konoha being destroyed, but the original characters are left alone, or the original character is turned into a high-ranking Kumogakure, then this book is not suitable for me. I am really tired of reading this.

Yunyin follows the principle that the strong should be respected... Are they all about hooks, palace battle dramas?

Aren't the Raikages all from the Yeyue clan? Why did this book say that the Yeyue clan and the Thunder clan were separated?

One crime, one incident, a few perspectives and a few characters. It would be really fun to fight, but adding this amount of daily updates would greatly affect the viewing experience. The Golden Finger Steel Escape, the protagonist of the Second Sin, is okay, but I personally think it belongs to the original owner Xiao Tiandou. The real talent comes with the Golden Finger Analytical Eye, but I haven't seen any effect yet. It's not good for you to list the weaknesses and so on so that people can see clearly. Three Sins has a slow pace, and I feel like I can't get out of Yunyin Village with 200,000 words. You want to write a million words in a long term, right?

According to the setting of the Book of Formation, the first Raikage was not from the Yeyue clan. The author's setting paves the way for the protagonist to cheat. Set one of our little transparents, the second-generation Raikage, as a member of the Yeyue clan.

You can't do this in online writing. You should be more comfortable first. Now go ahead and look at your daily life. The latest chapter has appeared. "Beiliu Hu Uchiha Kagami Orochimaru is suspected of having just opened the main line. All the people have run away and he is still being scolded."

At least show your face

Cut it off as soon as possible, it's full of loopholes. Other questions about the timeline without looking at it. Hiruzen was at least 40+ when Orochimaru was called the Sannin. Hiruzen was less than 20 during the Golden Horn and Silver Horn rebellion. How old is the protagonist? According to your timeline, the protagonist was at least 30 when he arrived at Kumogakure, which is much older than Orochimaru.

I'm used to skipping through reading. I finished reading and didn't understand what was written.

Thunder Escape trains the cells, Earth Escape strengthens the internal organs under the gravity of the Rock Technique, Steel Escape adds defensive power, and the eight permanent body exercises... Practice the Human Immortal Martial Arts

1. The protagonist doesn't appear in several chapters, so what are you doing? Not once or twice. 2. Isn't the protagonist a distant relative of the Yeyue clan? What is he doing when he enters Yunyin Village? Shouldn't he return to his ancestral land to pursue strength or scientific research technology? 3. The novel you wrote is not a video. Shouldn't the protagonist be the first point of view and write from so many other people's perspectives?

Raikage has always been a member of the Yeyue clan. This conspiracy theory of yours is really speechless. It is fundamentally untrue😒

I would like to call you the strongest water injection king

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