Douluo Peerless: Hai Bodong, in Charge of the Sun, Moon and Sea God

The latest version The author please give me a hint Seagull Island is also in it

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. I finished reading it in less than half an hour. I can only say that the author deserved it. Let's talk about the advantages first It departs from the original route and reasonably combines the time nodes to connect how the Lan Luoluo sisters came to Shrek, the messenger of death (who looks like his younger brother Liu Xiu) and Gongyang Mo Chen Zifeng who was severely injured in the Mingdou Mountains and was permanently disabled. It is estimated that there will be interactions later. In addition to the introduction and book evaluation plan, Ilex will follow Liu Xiu later. I am quite looking forward to how the evil soul master who can kill the Shrek Seven Monsters under Xuanzi's nose will be with Yi Lao. The protagonist's current way of dealing with things is the most consistent with Hai Bodong's character that I have read on Qidianq. After my sister died, Haibodong exploded with combat power and killed Fan Yu. It was quite cool. Xuanzi crushed Haibodong without using all his strength, which did not make people feel that his combat power collapsed. The Haibo Dongming card has attracted the attention of Tang San in the God Realm. If he can control it well, he is looking forward to the follow-up battle. Disadvantages There are too many hangings and too complicated, and the senses are very poor. Weird water? There are three kinds, which is inexplicable. The fighting spirit cultivation and soul power cultivation are not explained well enough. If you just go with Ultimate Water and Ultimate Ice, there won't be so much trouble, and you can't control it. The plot advances too slowly. It has just left the island after 200,000 words, while others are already playing games with 200,000 words. If you can write more than 1 million words, just pretend I didn't say anything. There are many touching ways of death that I want to write, but I don't want to use meaningless words in such an important chapter, which will make you feel overwhelmed as soon as you enter it. The first article will be scored 60 out of 100. The writing in the second article is too numb and seems to be misleading. Please change the line if it fails. Others are waiting for subsequent updates. If you can write an introduction, your grades will not be bad.

This book is good. To be honest, it was too slow to gain popularity If this novel had been written ten years ago or even five years ago, it would not have been slow to gain popularity. , But in this era, I think it is very slow. It actually took seven chapters to awaken the martial spirit, but in this day and age, it actually took you seven chapters to awaken the martial spirit? Today's novels wish they could explain how awesome their martial arts and golden fingers are in the first chapter But this novel gets better and better as it goes on.

Chapters that are not revised carefully are just a dish full of shit, but chapters that are revised carefully are finally a dish of good food. Can you update it properly?

How long will Dongzi continue to be a Beachcomber on this island? When to go to Poseidon Island?

I have finished writing the first article today. I feel it The protagonist of this book, Hai Bodong, was reincarnated with the memories of his past life, so he has many fighting skills in his mind. I believe some readers will feel after reading the following chapters that Hai Bodong has gone too far. But I have to say, no. This is just enough. The main theme of this book is that the biggest enemy has been born long ago. It was a peek from the divine world, from the Tang Shenwang who only stood in the background and appeared two or three times before turning Destiny's own son-in-law Huo Yuhao into a dog of the Tang family. Tang San will not allow any accidents to appear, and this book will not have a halo of wisdom. I am also a reader. After reading a lot of fan fiction, everyone will subconsciously ignore Tang San when writing books, or think that he will not watch the protagonist grow. But Tang San regarded Douluo Continent as his back garden. How could he let go of anyone who was not a member of his family but intervened to give his son-in-law and daughter an opportunity under his ten thousand-year plan. In this book, Haibodong interacts with Mingpai and Tang San in the divine world. The butterfly effect brought by Haibodong is destined to involve Tang San's interests. As in the introduction, Hai Bodong will never be the Tang family's dog. I will not stand with the corrupt and aloof gods and soar alone. He will combine all the power of the original work and spread the knowledge systems of their two worlds with Electrolux. The power of the people is endless. Only when the ending is near will the Douluo Plane move toward true revival.

Even if you don't give Hai Bodong a thumbs up, you still have to give our God King a thumbs up!

The city official of Haiou Island has all the power: he eats his salary and fights for his family. It's just that this body is buried in the sea, so why be afraid of death.

This downstairs reply name + martial spirit + soul skill—— Some readers' original characters will be appropriately added to form a teacher team and a student team to participate in the soul master competition. Brainstorming

You can only change it to a small version and put it in the comment area.

The Archon of Seagull Island, the head of the Seagull Family: What a pity this body is, it can be used for one purpose. What can I ask for with my broken body?

The chapters after they are released feel much better than the free chapters.

A good piece of work requires the viewing and suggestions of many people. Since this book does not require Shrek to decide the plot direction independently, readers can reply to some questions after viewing on this floor. After I adopt it, I will mark the chapter as "refined" + the author's words as the person to whom I want to thank you! Please support me a lot, don't keep books, just click on the latest chapter if you have nothing to do, please read it!

Sister Haibodong, a good wife and mother: I also want to become a soul master to find true freedom.

Hai Bodong's brother, the messenger of death: corpse, explosion technique, corpse witch? Mr. Electrolux, if you really learn this harmful little way, you will kill one thousand enemies and lose eight hundred to yourself. Fortunately, we met, otherwise there will be fools who would learn this evil method. I have to tell my friends of Death Hand to search the Mingdou Mountains to prevent this evil method from harming the world!

Child Hai Bodong

Order, Shen Shen, Shen Shen, don't suddenly become a literary youth. You know it's a bit confusing. Don't keep writing notes to make people laugh.

Why is this Tang San the protagonist? Shouldn't it be a supporting role? Were you killed in the end?

You can also accept disciples

It's obvious that the quality is getting better and better after it's released. It's just the chapters of Dou Si that have a poor plot. It's a bit boring and far inferior to Dou II. It's a pity that Hai Bodong's traffic is a bit low as the protagonist.

Send six monthly tickets as a memorial. The author's next new book should be faster-paced. Your book Hai Bodong is the one I've seen at the starting point that tastes most like Hai Bodong himself. Unfortunately, Hai Bodong has not been published. . . . . .

I plan to write a more sad story about death, and the core of comedy is tragedy~

Why is it not updated? Did the pigeon fall? That's a shame

Why is she a woman? She has to say a few words.

This book has a good subject matter, but it's 240,000 words long and hasn't been signed yet? To be honest, I don't know why no one has written a book about the Ice God's successor. I feel like there is a lot to write about If I were to write a book about Ice God's successor, I could give Huo Yuhao the cheats of Tianmeng Ice Silkworm and Ice Emperor Then use the Ice God Spirit to fuck Huo Yuhao and just stomp on his head😋

Is it Ye Yutong or Ye Lingtong?🙂