Pokémon: a Journey to the Heavens Beginning with Marvel

The setting is novel, and in terms of the overall direction, the plot basically has no major flaws, and there is nothing too out of the ordinary. Overall, it cannot be called excellent, but it can also be rated as average. Now that I have finished talking about it, let me talk about the reason why I rated it medium. I am not very good at talking about the advantages of a certain thing, but I still have some thoughts on what is wrong with the reviews. There are two main points. However, because they are all personal evaluations, they may be biased, so read more When friends here read the following content, please make your own evaluation based on your actual situation. This page is only used as a reference to give everyone a basic understanding of the possible poisonous points of this book. It can also be regarded as some small suggestions for the author. Whether you accept it or not, I can accept it. The first point, at least for now, is that the quality of the overall plot has dropped significantly from the beginning to the present. I don't know whether the author is a newbie or not. After all, I won't pay special attention to this, but at least the plot is too disjointed. The story is short, fast, and not polished enough. , The middle is too delayed, and the ending is too abrupt. This is very obvious in the section after leaving Yulong's house and returning to Marvel. The ghost king's hidden thread is intermittent, and the plot of Thor in the middle is also very weird. In short, in my opinion, the author still has a lot of room for improvement. The second point is that the emotions of the characters are not handled well. This problem is considered a common problem in male videos. Either the emotions are not written, or the emotions are written in all kinds of weird ways. The emotional line of Hua Zhulan is quite satisfactory, but the emotional line of Zhulan is very weird. Not to mention the sudden setting of the Yulong family for the protagonist. I can only say that I am used to this. In the relationship between Zhulan Yili and her brother You can say that you forcefully insert a love story, but again, the current environment of male videos is like this. This may or may not be considered poisonous, but I think the author, if you really want to insert a love story like this, you can make it a little more subtle, lengthen the whole story line, and first use the relationship between brother and sister to muddle through. It doesn't have to be so obvious, so the reading experience may be better. In short, if the author can improve the plot later, it doesn't need to be too much. As long as it returns to the level at the beginning, I feel that this book can be regarded as a good one. I may continue to pay attention to see the subsequent performance. Apart from these, I think it is better for the author not to add more female protagonists. After all, it seems that even if there are only two, your writing power will not be able to control it, let alone other...

It's poisonous. It's the most disgusting time travel novel about Demon Slayer. Nine out of ten people who travel through Demon Slayer are trying to flirt with girls. Picking up girls is nothing, but the protagonist is a bit of a dog licker and the plot is awkward. The protagonist can't understand his status, but he still licks his face to help others. He doesn't take it seriously when he's polluted, scolded or killed. Author, your novel is good, but Demon Slayer is really disgusting.

In the second world (Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba), the protagonist is not invincible, but he is also transcendent, and he also has the ability to cure ghosts. In this case, he is still required to prove himself. Just like the Qi refining period in the female channel slanders the Mahayana period, the Mahayana period also requires various self-certifications. Author, let me tell you, no matter how much you do if you don't change things here, you won't achieve much.

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No wonder it hasn't been changed until now. The author doesn't dare to read the comment section now. How can everyone's feedback be seen? He himself knows that his writing is not good and the plot is not good. All aspects are not enough. A relatively novel theme retains some readers. Now the theme is also fake. It belongs to the kind of plot that promotes Pokémon in the world. For me, there is no need to follow it.

I feel like the author doesn't know much about the combat power of Pokémon. So, except for the current world of Marvel, all other worlds have to be ranked below Pokémon. The strengthened alpaca and the mini-dragon from the comics wiped out a city with one strike of Dragon's Fury. Let's not forget that they can't beat the data-eating on TV 😥 Can't fly and the Fathead fish create the ocean and the earth. Dialga, Palkia, time and space, etc. Can't touch porcelain. They are ordinary Pokémon. The data are not those that can be collided with in those worlds. For example, the duck-billed Salamander can easily hit two thousand degrees with a fireball and swim in the crater. The dragon is faster than the eagle by Mach 2. The breath of the ice rock monster Ice Nine Tails is more than minus 100. This is just the physical data. Counting normal skills, the elves can explode buildings and streets. The elves who explode the city are not without Gigantamax or even city explosion per capita. If we talk about mythical beasts, basically anyone who can fight below level 2 can explode the city. Give it a while and go up to level 2. You can simply calculate the Black Super Explosion Star in the game, not to mention that in the comics, everyone can destroy the world. Even weak Pokémon can't be individually strong. After all, garbage bags are trainers. What does it have to do with Pokémon? Boars, these two representatives of pure trash that have become gods, except for the fact that they are more powerful than Pokémon in Marvel and other worlds, they have nothing to offer Pokémon with this strength. They are just a little flashy. With this skill, it is better to gain experience. After all, besides breeding, You can't change your clan value. When you reach the full ability level, you can even kill someone with an armored pupa. 😰 The Pokémon's combat power is quite strong. However, the weight and type of the Pokémon are not very consistent with the Pokémon's composition and materials. For example, the volume material of Big Rock Snake and Howler King is completely inconsistent with the weight. Big Rock Snake is described as having high-density rocks all over its body, but it weighs less than half a ton. Players like Howler King, who can trigger big waves, only have more than 300 kilograms, which is not as dense as air. It is outrageous.

As a human being, ghosts must be destroyed; as a Chinese, should we also destroy the little devils? The protagonist's family was destroyed in about 1913, and he was recruited in 1926. The Anti-Japanese War started in 1931. Don't just focus on impressing people and picking up girls, okay?

Demon Slayer successfully persuaded me to quit. I guess there are many people who have been persuaded to quit in the second world.

To put it bluntly, just read the introduction of this kind of book and have a good dream.

Aren't breathing techniques and ghosts just rubbish in the universe?

The theme of traveling through the worlds is destined to always be a passer-by, so the only things that are suitable for emotional description are the things around you. The love plot is not important at all. If you choose the Pokémon theme, Pokémon should be the top priority in your emotional description. Daily life with Pokémon, training, fighting, and getting stronger are the plots that should be focused on. Adventures in the universe with partners are the focus of the story. Single girl? Multiple heroines? In my opinion, the current descriptions in the article are awkward, childish, and poisonous. With the author's current writing level, he simply cannot grasp it well. A strong argument will definitely lead to a dead end. It is better to focus on what needs to be written most at the moment. The love between men and women should be put aside or even discarded. Describe your Pokémon partners that will be throughout the entire text well, and clearly explain the idea of ​​becoming stronger.

Don't write emotional dramas. You can't write emotional dramas well. If you write them like this, the next chapter will be removed from the bookshelf.

What is Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba written about? Japanese-style bullying + dog licking + bastard girl? You are so talented, write it like this

The demon slayer is really against the sky, the monster is on the brain

Inexplicably, he became the young master of the Yulong family and got a champion childhood sweetheart. It's really boring.

I will look for opportunities to change the plot of Demon Slayer later! It will reduce the emotional drama between humans! Increase interaction with Pokémon! Thank you for pointing it out, I will pay more attention to this in the future!

It's OOC+disgusting written by Demon Slayer There has been a scumbag in the Demon Slayer Squad for thousands of years, Butterfly Ninja is also written as a piece of shit, and the interaction with Hanashira is also a piece of shit, licking the dog

My suggestion is to just cut off all the plots of Demon Slayer. It's completely useless. Also, the time in each world is too short. It's good to have something that can definitely make you stronger, such as Rotom possessing a mecha. However, in Demon Slayer, I don't feel that there is anything too powerful that can make the giant needle bee very powerful. It gives people the illusion that it becomes stronger inexplicably.

The writing style is really not that good, and the world selection is even worse. I couldn't make it past Chapter 3 of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, so I slipped away.

A good subject is written like this, but it is constantly poisonous.

If you have any Pokémon you want to see or some interesting Pokémon versions, you can comment in the book post and I will try my best to arrange it. Or if you want to see some of your favorite characters and want to arrange Pokémon for them, you can also explain it in the comments. Let's create a diverse and open Pokémon universe together!

For example, after reading the first few pictures, you can jump directly to Chapter 25, so that you will not die from the poison.

Please, follow-up reading is really important for new books. Readers who can click in are destined people. Please slide down to the last chapter and use your follow-up reading to penetrate me hard (#`O′)

I think the writing is pretty good, not as poisonous as some people say. Whether the book is good or not, you'd better read it yourself.