Douluo: Eternity Is Empty

Personally speaking, this is one of the few combat-type Douluo fanfics that is not much worse than the previous fanfics on the list. The writing style is delicate and very realistic. It neither blindly writes the children with Tang syndrome as little fw, nor overly praises the children with Tang syndrome. It is a little bit more satisfying. In one sentence: It is a thimble of words and it is identified as fairy grass 😋

Are the Thousand Jun Ants useless martial souls? Although this thing is quite weak, it is definitely not useless. . .

It's really good, with ideas, imagination, and smooth writing. It's just that the orange sky with the white dragon and the black knight in the front is very graphic, but it's missing in the back. It's a pity, and it doesn't have the inexplicable blackness of the Douluo fans. Those fans are disgusting. What I want to watch is the competition on the same stage, not the mentally retarded children fighting Down's syndrome (I'm afraid someone will say I'm being disrespectful, so it's better that I didn't directly name the fans)

Generally speaking, one is a time traveler or a child. I don't believe that anyone who travels through time and doesn't regard themselves as the protagonist, and finally recovers, goes back to die. He was raised by his father since he was a child, and the martial soul awakens and disowns you as his son (the protagonist's mother has been raising a fetus). I have always believed that nurturing is more important than giving birth to kindness. If I give birth to you and ignore you, is it not the beginning of hell? It is said that rich families have no family ties. Look at how Yu Xiaogang came out. The protagonist is also the main lineage. It counts. The son of the sect leader has already left and cannot recognize the family. You, the son of the next sect leader, are nothing. It would be great if you just practice on your own, pursue strength, and pursue immortality. And some small details are not handled well. The protagonist is so fucking powerful. The martial spirit is still the Qianjun Ant Emperor. He is so powerful. There is no way that there is no legend about this person on the mainland.

When your talent is not enough, look more at your family's beloved relatives and friends, siblings and loved ones, and think more about your family's honor and future. They are all the motivation for you to move forward! With strong backing! Hey🤓👆, I happened to hear that a kind and loving person single-handedly raised the entire clan's cultivation to the peak of the ninth rank.

The protagonist seems to have a style more than ten years ago. Since he knows that his body is weak, he doesn't know how to use medicine. If he wants to evolve his martial soul, why don't he hire someone to hunt the soul beast with dragon blood? He has been practicing step by step, and then he is humiliated. He deserves it. He doesn't even know how to fight.

I wonder how famous the author is? I don't know how high the strength is? But this madness is really mad, and this kind of arrogance is really rare, even rare!

The writing is okay, but the plot is a bit bloody and the connotation is not deep enough. It is suitable for passionate young people under the age of 30.

The writing is okay, the author has done his homework, the setting is in line with the original work and is a bit original, not obtrusive, but the soul ring acquisition is too confusing, the first few plots are too frustrating, and have persuaded some people to quit. Now it seems that the protagonist brother will not be able to pass the god test. He may be able to fight the protagonist, and he is already ahead in terms of cultivation level. My brother's innate talent of level 20 is useless. According to the current plot and book reviews, the protagonist's mother is also a mid-to-late stage Dabo4. She is a very good Douluo fan. The author continues to maintain

This kind of family deserves to be wiped out in those 10 years. If the protagonist really takes action by then, I will despise him.

The heroine Tang San? Disgusting reader, right...

​ ​ ​ What are the Three Golden Chapters? What is the function of the three golden chapters? In today's fast-paced era, let alone online articles, the first thing readers read is the introduction. A well-written introduction will attract many people to read it. As long as the follow-up writing is not too bad, there will be no shortage of readers. After the introduction, there are three golden chapters. The first three chapters are extremely important. The introduction should attract people and make others want to read. The first three chapters should retain readers and draw readers in. Simply describe the world view and explain the background. If you add too many settings in the first three chapters, you are putting the cart before the horse. Instead of retaining readers, you will drive them away.        ，，，，，， It conflicts too much with the original plot. If you write an introduction, it might be more attractive.

The writing is very good, but it underestimates the human heart. As a mother like an evil soul master, it is impossible for you to leave.

The protagonist's mother eats people, this taste

If the protagonist has any relationship with this couple or this family when he grows up, author, don't blame me for giving you one star.

For me, it was still okay in the past, but I stopped eating beef after the evolution of Wuhun, and I still haven't written the taste. This is the limitation of fan fiction. The original protagonist's strength or future lies in it. The protagonist only needs to be stronger than the original protagonist and open a harem. The author has more to consider (how can you attract people without opening a harem and not torturing the three)?

The writing and settings are pretty good, and the personal style is very obvious, but it is not to my liking. After reading a few pictures, I finally understood that I am not the audience of this book. "What's yours is mine, and what's mine is mine." This is probably the concept of the male protagonist. I admire his courage to struggle for survival, but dislike his selfish character. He has no moral baggage, but there is no bottom line. Sorry for being so long-winded. It can be seen that there are still many people who like this book. I will not add any trouble or add trouble to myself. I wish the author good results. I voted for the monthly ticket and it will be withdrawn.

An additional explanation. I also deduced it. First of all, the three young masters read a lot. This is definitely true, especially in Dou 4. The Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus is a real dragon. So according to this setting, the Holy Dragon of Light cannot be at the upper level. It is at the same level or higher, so Dou 4's statement is not adopted. Most of them are golden-eyed black dragon kings, so only kings in the dragon clan have them, so it proves one thing that Long Xiaoyao's dark holy dragon does not have the ultimate. Similarly, the light holy dragon does not have the same level as him. If there is, it should also be the light holy dragon king. There is another evidence that Long Yeyue is a double holy dragon. In Dou San, it is not said that she has the ultimate, so according to this reasoning, having the ultimate must be the king of the dragon clan. The evidence is that the Dragon King of Zhongshan in the third part has the ultimate earth

A time traveler who has a mental age of at least 20 and started with a martial soul awakening went wrong. Don't blame his parents for his younger brother. His mother gave birth to him while eating fairy grass. To put it bluntly, the time traveler himself is a person who should not exist. Of course, the correct time travel process should be to directly soul penetrate his younger brother.

Hey, when I saw the new chapter, I was immediately... Speechless. In my opinion, if I were the protagonist in his kind of environment, I would just feel out of place. If I were to compare it with my parents before time travel, I would feel even more miserable. In fact, when the protagonist awakens the useless martial soul and sees his father's attitude and mother casually treating a few sect disciples as blood food, You should have seen clearly the nature of this world: the weak and the strong. There is no right or wrong. The strong is the truth. In the eyes of the protagonist's parents, the protagonist is a tool pawn from beginning to end. The martial soul was abolished by his mother, which is equivalent to killing him once. In Douluo Continent, the martial soul is the soul master's second life. Is this child's play? With such heartless parents, it would be nice for me as a time traveler to grow up and not settle accounts with them. When the protagonist gave his parents a fairy grass, he owed them nothing. But in the latest chapter, the protagonist's "mother" is going to kill the protagonist. After the protagonist kills his mother and becomes stronger, he will resurrect his "mother". Isn't this the protagonist's lack of love? (There is a sense of Tang San's vision here) It is true that the protagonist won this time, but this is because the protagonist is a time traveler and has a God's perspective. So the "protagonist" is a native and deserves to die at the hands of this mother, right? In my opinion, the protagonist's unwillingness to wait before her death is so ridiculous. Her innate natural way can be said to be a perfect show of the law of the jungle. The soul beasts, people, and sons she killed will probably be as unwilling as her or even worse after their sons die, because they don't have the chance to fight. In short, as the saying goes, in this world of great power, there is no right or wrong, only strong and weak

A blind guess can lift the sky and hold the sea. The sky inside is an angel. The sea is the god of the sea

The author is not simple😃

This was actually released. Thank you. It was a day when the three ghosts did good deeds.

Speed ​​update, can't sleep at night

After reading more than sixty chapters, I felt a sense of dissonance. The direction of the plot was like doing a task. It was a task machine with no emotions and no routine. It was all about completing life planning tasks.

Not bad, I almost stopped reading.

Uh-huh~, is this mother a soul beast, or an evil soul master?