Douluo: the Ultimate Soul Master

And this final chapter will be written by me

White Tiger Cousin yyds🙂

I can only say that Dou Yi is a very good fan, but now the mainstream is Dou Er and Dou San. If Dou Yi was the mainstream back then, this would have been quite good, but now Dou Er and Dou San start at level 20 or 30, which makes the values ​​​​in this book too primitive.

Let me talk about the praise first: this is an excellent Douluo humanistic book, and it can even be considered an excellent group among the entire Douluo fandom. 1. The combat power system is rare and has not collapsed. The great soul master beats the soul master, and the soul master beats the soul sect. (After all, the original work set Tang San up too much, so that in order to overpower Tang San, the current fan works can't wait to let the protagonist soul master fight the soul sage head-on). 2. The characters in this book all act out of their own interests. They want to help the protagonist and gain benefits from the protagonist, but if they want to kill the protagonist, the protagonist hinders their own interests. (The most representative one is the Xu family, who chose to abandon the protagonist and let him die in order to intervene in the empire's military affairs. Later, he found that he could take the opportunity to get rid of Empress Zhu, weakened the power of the royal family, and rescued the protagonist.) This seems simple, but it is difficult to grasp in real writing. The villain is often written as a tool to pretend to be a slap in the face of the protagonist, and decency is written as a welfare package for the protagonist. 3. The protagonist's soul skills are reasonable and adopt Dai Mubai's soul skills in the original work. Defense, attack, attributes, amplification, single attack, and group attack are all developed. Instead of the single attribute bonus in the fandom now. The next is the shortcomings 1. Queen Zhu, this character is okay at first. From her point of view, killing the protagonist is normal, but when the protagonist saves her, it becomes a bit OOC. The conflict between her and the protagonist is irreconcilable. Her core need is for her son to sit on the throne, and the protagonist is her biggest obstacle. The more dazzling the protagonist is, the harder it is for her to achieve her goal. He can temporarily give up assassinating the protagonist in order to fight against the Xu family, but he cannot give the Zhu family's meditation method to the protagonist just because of the protagonist's words. Instead, he will secretly use trippers to slow down the protagonist and deceive the protagonist, especially after discovering that the protagonist may become White Tiger Douluo. 2. The protagonist is too obsessed with what he wants. He thinks that the soul ring will explode if the Shaluo Sanpao can explode. He thinks that the Vajra baboon can make the indestructible Vajra. I offer you two monthly tickets

Author, how did you come up with this plot? You are awesome. You really wrote Douluo Yi with new ideas. Among all the fellow Douluo people, he stands out from the crowd, which is incredible.

You may not believe it, but I kind of want to beg him to put it on the shelf, it's so beautiful... Use love to generate electricity, there was a chapter before that said the data is not good... I'm afraid, brother, don't run, you can put it on the shelf, I am willing to spend money to see it, this is the kind of food that I can pay to see at ease.

Why did you stop the previous one 😡

It shouldn't be. You write so well and it has over 100,000 words. Why isn't it popular?

This book is really well written. The author should change the title of the book. The content is novel enough, but the title is not novel at all. To put it bluntly, if I hadn't run out of books to read, this kind of topic wouldn't have attracted my attention at all.

Come here because of the reputation, come on author🎉🎉🎉🎉

Finally got the latest progress on eating, it's delicious, I love it, please write more 😍.

I saw Chapter 5 and it was very well written. But when I clicked on it and saw the results, the results were not very good. I feel like the title and introduction of the book have stopped a lot of people, so I suggest the author change it.

I specially forward this comment. This is one of the best works. It can be said that it has reached the level of a great god.

The author deserves a reward of 30 yuan.

Two words: Excellent product! The level of writing in this book makes it feel like reading a text. As I said before, Douluo or fanfiction is too restrictive for your performance.

The author asks you about the setting of the previous book. The protagonist's affection for his mother in the early and middle stages of this book can be interpreted as being charmed or controlled. Why is it that the protagonist's father is so moved after revealing his identity? It's clear that his father made two bets and the protagonist's mother succeeded and won. He beat and scolded the protagonist in the early stage. The protagonist is the only one who can not absorb the soul ring to see the level. Is this really considered a father's love for his children? Is there a foreshadowing that the protagonist's mother can survive after eating the child's consciousness and soul and be resurrected after success, or is the protagonist just like Tang San, pure and lacking in love, foolishness and filial piety!

One thousand points is not much. Although it is the first time to reward so much, I just hope that it can be updated properly. I am afraid that I will not update it. It is really beautiful! Come on!

I really won't write anymore, I wish you will always be a eunuch, and your support will be in vain 😤😤😤

Someone became a eunuch twice, but this time he didn't have time to save enough. Although the data is not good, we can understand it. After all, I also like to raise books. But I really can't insist on it. I will save more articles next time and put them on the shelves. The updates will be stable. Can't stand this

What a pity. Although he has good writing skills and novel settings, I still wonder how the author manages the relationship between the Netherworld White Tiger and the Tiger King.

Keep at it, there are not many good books written by Douluo fans now, Void will add a chapter of Half Dead from time to time, Elegy is not good at the beginning but bad at the end, Tai Chi is not bad, and then there is your book, which only has more than 300,000 words, so stick with it. I still like this book. Except for the poisonous points of the queen and grandpa, the whole book is very good. It has its own ideas and is very creative. Seeing that the writing style of your new book is the same as that of this book, I feel a little tired of it.

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When will the author bring someone back to write and make up for this regret?

I thought it was okay, but it turned out there was no update for 20 days, and I was already a eunuch.