Doomsday Player

After reading a few chapters, to be honest, it has a bit of a Shura Field Player flavor, but the beginning is too slow and too light. There are too many background renderings in one chapter of other novels, and it just fills the entire golden three chapters If it weren't for the Shura Field Player author's name, I would probably It's probably not easy to persevere If you are serious about achieving results, it is recommended that you revise it while there are few words. Even if you don't add more plot, you can still write something interesting. Judging from Shura Field players, the author has this writing ability Secondly, the cover It's too popular and doesn't have that flavor. The title of the book is already very mediocre, and the cover is still like this. I suggest changing it to another one. Anyway, after reading ten chapters, I feel that the only two things that can make me continue to look forward to the following chapters are the title of the author of Shura Field Players and his peers. Type themes, one is the increasing number of slutty words and funny things That's it, I hope it can be written well in the future. I quite like Shura Field Players. I hope the author can change the problem of being too fast and too fast, and move to the next level instead of continuing to slide after the peak.

I suggest changing the title of the book to Mysterious Doomsday or Mysterious Doomsday, otherwise it will be easily mistaken for a traditional apocalyptic novel...

Everything is a weapon: Everything can be used as a weapon. The weapons picked up will have skills and effects, and can also be enchanted and thrown. Weapon Overload: Continuously consume the weapon's durability, use the weapon overload, and increase the weapon's attack speed, effect, durability, etc. Weapon Disintegration: Destroy the weapon and instantly increase its power by exploding it. Full Fire: Dual-wield the current weapon. Full Attack: Use all weapons simultaneously. Weapon transformation: Use materials to transform weapons into new weapons, or use multiple weapons to synthesize new weapons.

I heard about the harem😍😍😍

This novel is a pity. I felt that I had enough energy to write it very seriously. It's a little perfunctory later on

I'll go first: "The Post-Doomsday Book" and "The Trolley Problem Enjoyer"

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After all, he is a big author, but he doesn't promote it, and his popularity will only be lost if he relies on natural traffic.

Please give me some readings, some favorites, some recommendation votes, some monthly votes, some paragraph reviews, some book reviews, some likes on the character cards, I'm begging! Beg! Beg! Beg!

This book should not be like Shura Field Player. There are too many female protagonists... In the end, the heroines are basically mentioned in one stroke. In addition, this book's combat power design is better, don't be too inflated, and the hanging is not too outrageous... Write it well. Shura Field Player's Tomb of the World has become more and more boring in the future. I hope this one is better than that one.

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Tea and you released a new book almost at the same time, so blessed🥰🥰

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There have been a lot of extraterrestrial demons coming to Qidian lately, which is pretty good.

Are you going to fill in the gaps for the Gensokyo book you agreed to use? 😭

There are all these little white articles, and the starting point is really lonely.

I hope I learned a lesson and don't mess with my previous life. What I wrote above is so good.

I'm so confused. I remember that this book was on the top of the new book list a few days ago, but it disappeared the next day. The word count was not high enough to be included in the list.

I don't feel as comfortable as Shura Field players.

Not being cold-blooded enough is the biggest flaw of this novel

Starting point, witness every cyber tombstone

Come on, Rewriting is no problem. You can play more games, read more novels and anime, and listen to more hell jokes, funny jokes, and fashionable lines to find some inspiration.

What's going on? Recently, several of my favorite authors from Maolai have stopped updating. Is this because I'm not used to it or something?

When I saw the cover of the novel, it looked like a lucky star. When I came in and took a look, did I find that it was cut?

No, this book is ruined, right? I don't want to read it anymore.

It's okay to update this one slowly (at least once a day) (^_−)−☆

No, buddy, why did I see that the book was gone? What happened?

This book is very strange. The first part is a two-person light novel style, and the second part is a supernatural adventure style, with some content about the infinite world sewed in. The author obviously didn't think clearly about what he wanted to write. It's hard to exist in this world where you both want and want. The audiences for light novels and supernatural adventure genres are very different.