From the Great Ming Dynasty, I Conquer the Heavens

You have a mirror, you know how to practice boxing, are you Gu Shaoshang?

The author's choice of words in describing the fight scenes is truly divine; it's no wonder the author is so largely ignored. Having read books for over a decade, I'd like to offer some suggestions from a reader's perspective. If these areas can be improved, the author will undoubtedly have a bright future. 1. The author is completely using a golden hoe to cultivate the land.

Northern Song Dynasty, The Four Great Constables, Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils. At the end of the Yuan Dynasty, the world was in turmoil, with events unfolding and changes occurring. It's estimated that there's also the story of "The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber".

If you're not getting better at following up on previous readings, it's because some people have a habit of reading books regularly. As long as you keep at it, your grades will naturally improve. Your writing style has already surpassed many authors of the same type. Writing novels requires a lot of patience.

Well, the writing is good, the pacing is good, the power levels are well-arranged, the character development is excellent, and the characters are all very intelligent. The only downside is that, for some reason, it just doesn't feel interesting; there's no sense of anticipation or eagerness to read the next chapter.

The author writes very well, but I just can't get into it. I've passed the stage where I enjoy chivalrous and heroic stories. Others who frequently read martial arts novels, especially those with only a few moves in a chapter and a third of the chapter dedicated to character introductions and setup, might find it worthwhile. This is a martial arts novel that requires patience to read slowly, but unfortunately, I just want a quick read.

Follow the author's outline; if it's there, write it; if not, don't. It's not a big deal. Writers should know the consequences of disrupting the outline's rhythm. I don't know where some people get all this nonsense from, coming up with all sorts of excuses.

That's true, but you can't even produce a single completed book? How can you expect everyone to follow along with your reading? If following along doesn't work, it just leads to a vicious cycle?

Looking at the table of contents: "The Super Khitan," "The Astonishment of Shakyamuni," and "The Author's Passion," it seems the author is getting more and more excited. I'll probably let it linger for a while.

The writing is really good; the author is very talented. The structure and organization of a long story are very important. Judging from the author's launch statement, it's clear they lack experience. If you lack experience, you should listen to the advice of experienced authors.