From the Great Ming Dynasty, I Conquer the Heavens

You have a mirror and know how to practice boxing. Are you Gu Shaoshang?

The author's wording for the fight scenes is truly divine, and it really shouldn't be so unnoticed. I have also been reading books for more than ten years, and I have pointed out some shortcomings from the reader's perspective. If the author can improve them, he will have a bright future. 1. The author completely cultivates the land with a golden hoe, and this writing method is actually used in astronomy. You should conceive a world view similar to the one of the Lord of the World/Heaven and Man Atlas. Even if it is not good for you to write astronomy, you can still write it well. You can also write Gu Shaoshang's kind. At present, your world of heavens and worlds is too flawed. Copies such as White Snake Subduing Dragon and Arhat are really useless. How can you write about this kind of world? 2. Modify the classic dungeon world without authorization and directly forcibly increase the force value of Tianlong World. The reason for your improvement is that you are good at writing about martial arts, but the plot is so compressed that there is no need to choose a classic IP. 3. The plot is not enough and rich enough. As long as you can add a main world, create a family or sect in the main world, and then create a "people list" and the like, and then challenge it and use your battle writing style to describe it, it will be really exciting. It would be much better to add a main world. 4. If you want to keep up with the trend, it would be more fun to create a "Two Realms" and "Xinghai World". Watching the author wielding a golden hoe to dig food in the field was eye-opening.

In the Northern Song Dynasty, there were four famous catchers, the Eight Tribes of Heaven and Dragon. At the end of the Yuan Dynasty, the sea was full of rain and clouds, and there was probably a story about leaning on the sky and slaying the dragon. The Golden Age of Taoism, The Legend of the White Snake, the 2003 version of the TV series A Chinese Ghost Story, and The Legend of Shushan Swordsman by the Master of Huanzhu Tower. I don't know which story it is. In the world of myths, only the legend of Jigong can be seen. Emperor Baosheng may have been a great doctor. I don't know about the others.

Those who failed to read earlier must be because some people have the habit of reading. As long as you persist, your grades will naturally improve. Your writing style has actually surpassed many authors of the same type. You still need to be more patient when writing novels.

How can I put it this way? The writing is good, the rhythm is good, the combat arrangements are good, the characterization is very good, and the IQ is very good. The only thing is that I don't know why, but it feels boring and I don't have the urgency to read the next chapter. . .

The author wrote it well, but I couldn't get into it. I have passed the stage where I like to read chivalrous heroic novels. If other people often appreciate martial arts novels of the martial arts style and like to read novels where a few moves are completed in one chapter and the characters appear for a third of the chapter, then they can still read it. This is a martial arts novel that requires patience and slow reading. Unfortunately, I just wanted to have a quick meal.

According to the author's outline, if you have it, write it, if not, don't write it. This is not a big deal. Writers should all know the consequences of breaking the rhythm of the outline. I don't know where some people come from with so much nonsense and all their excuses.

This is indeed the case, but you can't even take out a complete book? Do you expect everyone to feel free to pursue books? Can't continue reading and continue in an endless loop?

Looking at the table of contents, Super Khitan Man, Shakyamuni's Wonder, I feel that the author is getting more and more excited, so let's take care of him for a while.

The writing is really good and very talented. The layout of a long article is still very important. You can see from the testimonials that the author has little experience. If you have no experience, you should listen to more experienced people. This old bookworm has only one suggestion: The World is Unlimited is too unpopular. Don't combine too many things into one copy. Instead, work out a main line in each copy and finish it in a down-to-earth manner. The dungeon of "Anti-Japanese War" is actually a bit too ambitious. It took a lot of time to move from the arena to the court.